AN: okay guys, i got your kakashi and iruka for ya, a little touchy touchy
stuff with them, this ones kinda sad, not really, not even a terjerker, but
it might make you think alittle, i dunno who you people are, but im going
to do this for all of you because i love you, truly. im going to answer all
of your reviews now!! yeah, cause tsumina told me that it would make you
happy! i have one week to finish this chap and the next, and its going to
be so hard, ive worked real hard on the next chapter's lemon- oops, did i
just say that? nevermind guys, ill answer your reviews at the end, cause
people that dont review dont like this stuff. oh yeah, people who dont
review, please review, come on, just this once, PLEASE?
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. Simple and clean, no corny jokes this time.. ::sob::
warning: those who dont like yaoi, run away...
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"No, no Iruka, please give it to me now."
"Kakashi, come on, please just let me do it, I promise you'll have the better winnings at the end."
"Stop trying to tempt me. I gotta do it."
Kakashi grabbed the check from Iruka and shot him a glare as he searched his pocket for some money to give to the waiting waitress. Iruka pouted and shot him a sad glare back.
"No fair..."
"Hey, come on now, don't give me that look, I have to pay because I asked you out, remember?" The waitress smiled and took the money that Kakashi handed her while he said that and bowed politely and Kakashi gave her a nod. "Thank you for coming to Sammy-sama's!"
Before the girl could run off to give the money to the cashier, Iruka grabbed her hand and stuffed a bill in it. "You forgot your tip!"
"Aa! Thank you very much!" She bowed again and smiled and the two men smiled back, and she ran back to the cashier. Kakashi turned to glare at Iruka halfheartly as Iruka stood up.
"Wow, that felt good!" Iruka patted his stomach and Kakashi couldn't help but grin at his childish behavior, for he was playing off the glares. Not that the grin could be seen by his mask.
Kakashi also stood up and walked out of the resturaunt with Iruka following, looking down at his watch. "Woo, it's kinda late for dinner to be over, it's 9:00." Kakashi nodded then closed his eyes, feeling dumb by asking, "Do you want me to walk you home?" Iruka blushed, then nodded and walked up to Kakashi, standing by his side.They approached an allyway that was the shortcut to Iruka's apartment. Kakashi stepped again, but Iruka held his hand out and grabbed him by the arm.
"Wait."
"Okay?"
"Could you... Pull down your mask?"
"...Why?"
"Just come on, I saw your face while you were eating, I just want to see something really quick."
Kakashi looked at him weirdly then, still watching him, pulled his mask down hesitantly. Iruka smiled happily then dared to say, "you look pretty."
"Pretty? What am I, Ms.Konoha?" He grabbed the material roughly to pull it up again but Iruka caught his hand swiftly and pushed him back againest the alley wall and pressed his lips, suprisingly softly, because of the rough gesture.
"Iruka!" Kakashi mumbled againest his lips, and Iruka took that as an opening to slip his tounge in his mouth swiftly, then pressed his body againest Kakashi's. Kakashi let his eyes drift shut dreamly, and he got into the moment by opening his mouth further and moving his lips againest Iruka's, and pulled him into his embrace. Their tounges pushed againest eachother's with a fire that had never had the chance to grow, then it dimmed slightly as Iruka pulled away from Kakashi slowly, to take a breath.
Kakashi opened his eyes then blinked once or twice, he looked like a little kid, with his headband falling over his eye. His lips were shining with the wetness of Iruka's mouth, and it closed slowly. 'He's so damn hot.' Iruka thought to himself. He couldn't hold back and placed a light kiss on his lips, then moved down to kiss his jaw playfully.
"Iruka." Kakashi murmured softly again and Iruka pulled away from his face to look up at him questionally.
"You... You look at me that way?" Kakashi asked softly.
"Yeah.. Uh, sorry I.." Iruka whispered and stepped back but Kakashi grabbed his arm and hauled Iruka againest his body and held him around the waist protectivly. "Hey, uh... Do you wanna do this again sometime?" Kakashi whispered, his lips not even inches away from Iruka's. Iruka breathed out then whispered seductivly back, "Do you wanna come stay at my house for tonight?" Kakashi grinned then pressed his lips againest Iruka's lightly, but Iruka protested by pressing his harder.
Kakashi grinned again againest Iruka's lips then pulled his hands away from Iruka's waist and slid them up his shirt to touch his bare back. Iruka twitched with the sudden feel of his touch. He pushed his tounge through the barrier of Kakashi's lips and played with his mouth. Kakashi moved his hands and snapped the back of Iruka's pants playfully, and Iruka cried out in surprise, but before he could do anything, Kakashi slipped his hands inside and rested his hands on Iruka's backside. Iruka shivered at his touch, for it was warm and Kakashi's hands were cold. But he didn't want to pull away from his touch as Kakashi moved his hands to Iruka's thighs, hinting a certain something.
Iruka pulled Kakashi's mask down more so that he could bend down to suck on Kakashi's neck. Iruka could feel- no taste the sound of a moan coming from deep within Kakashi's throat. Kakashi was glad that he always wore the mask over his face and neck, because the marks that Iruka was so obvious. Kakashi moved his hands slightly so that his hands lightly grazed the insides of Iruka's thighs. Iruka twitched.
"Let's go to my place now." He breathed out into Kakashi's ear and Kakashi pulled his hands out eagerly and Iruka stumbled back so that Kakashi could pull his mask over his face again, and they both walked with their arms over eachothers hips.
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"Ino, you're kinda pulling my hair!" Tenten moved her head slightly towards Hinata, Sakura giggled in front of her. They had just gotten out of their daily bath, and instead of putting Tenten's hair into the usual buns, Ino and Hinata decided to put them in cute pigtail braids. They had started up and Sakura decided that since she was doing her hair, might as well play with some makeup.
"You look so cute already!" Sakura squealed and Hinata nodded slightly. "Yeah, I think you should go see Neji." She said quietly and tied the braid she was doing with a pink bow and Tenten blushed the same color.
"I...Don't think he likes me at all ."
"Yeah right! Who are you trying to fool? Yourself? 'Cause you sure arn't fooling anyone around here. Come on, you know Neji would go red and then go like," Ino opened her mouth and stared into the distance, then grinned devilishly. Tenten playfully punched her lightly in the leg, making Ino giggle.
Sakura gave her some lip gloss and Ino finished her braid, Hinata handing her a pink bow to tie it. Tenten stood up then looked in the mirror and gasped. Her braids rested lightly on her shoulders, but her face amazed her. She had never worn makeup before, it really fitted her.
Ino had said before, pink was her color. Her cheeks were graced lightly with light pink blush, and her lips shimmered. She looked at herself closer to see eyeliner and mascara.
"You look great!" Ino cried then hugged Tenten from the back, and she swayed, dazed at her reflection. "I..Look like Goldilocks."
"Don't be silly, you don't have gold locks." Ino nudged her and then Sakura cried out, "Let's give her a dress!"
"Great idea Sakura-chan! I'll go get Neji!" Ino ran out of the room, then Sakura turned to Hinata.
"Strip her down!"
"Yes!" Hinata cried, caught up in the moment as she turned to Tenten. Sakura ran to her dresser and searched through it for clothes. Tenten yelped and said quickly,
"I can do it myself, Hinata!" She pulled off her clothes and Hinata blushed and turned away, Sakura ran up to them with a pretty pink dress that matched Sakura's hair. she pulled the dress on and Sakura and Hinata straightened it out for her
"This is perfect!" Tenten nodded then pulled the dress on, it was perfect, it showed her back as she spun to show the other girls, and it finished just above her knees, and tied around her neck and the back went as low as just above her butt.
Sakura and Hinata started brushing her off and stepped back as the double doors opened. Tenten spun around and watched as Ino stepped in the room. Tenten stood on her tippy-toes to look around Ino, but nobody stood behind her.
"I'm sorry, Tenten. I couldn't find him anywhere." Ino held up her arms then dropped them sadly. Tenten faked a smile at the other girls and they looked down in sorrow.
"It's okay, I don't really mind much, I'm just going to go take a walk, it would be a waste to waste your makeup Sakura." She turned away from the other girls then walked past Ino out into the hall. Ino nodded and shut the doors behind her. Tenten shrugged it off, she didn't really want Neji to see her like that anyway, it was so unlike her.
Her fringe fell down her forehead cutly yet neatly, Ino and Hinata had made it so that it framed the side of her face, but it was messed now, she had shook her head out. She looked very pretty, her makeup was not smudged or thining. She stepped quietly on the clean floors with her bare feet, her hands swayed lightly by her sides.
She approached the stairs to the third floor and stood by it for a second, remembering why she went up there before. Training room. Ah yes, insetead of going all the way to the woods, going up a few stairs would be easier. She climbed the stairs, it was dark and she held on to the railing, as she got up and stood on the hallway of the third floor.
Moonlight poured in from the windows, then there were dark spaces, she decided not to go to the training room, but go to the roof instead, like she usually did when she went for a walk. She walked past the training room door towards the outside door, but the door to the training room opened behind her.
She spun around to see the missing Neji, and now sweaty, for he was training without his shirt on. He held the shirt in one hand and wiped his forehead with one arm, then blinked twice at Tenten, thinking a girl had broken into their house. His eyes widened, realizing that it was in fact, Tenten.
"H-hey! Uh," He raised his arms then dropped them, looking around. "What are you doing here?" He leaned againest the wall casually, flexing his naked muscles as he crossed his arms. She turned her whole body to look at him and smiled.
"I live here, remember?"
"Duh. I knew that, I meant up here so late?"
She grinned and shook her head, changing the subject.
"You... You look nice." He finally breathed out and she stiffled a girlish giggle, not wanting to seem immature. She nodded, "Thank you."
"What's the occasion? Sneaking out from the roof to go to a date?" He joked, but he was really curious inside. She shook her head again.
"The girls were having fun with me, this is Sakura's dress." She spun slowly to show her bare back and uh, back, then turned to him and held her arms out as if to say, 'Tada!'
"Do you like it?"
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She kept grinding her hips againest his gently moving backwards and then fowards in time with the beat, and she leaned to breathe in his ear, "Do you like it?"
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His eyes softened as he remembered her sultry voice in his ear, her breathing resounding in his ear, the smell of her close to him, him nodding dumbly to her question.
"What's wrong Neji? Do I look bad?" She pouted and let her arms fall back to their places back at her sides.
"Not that, I was just thinking."
"About?" She smiled happily and tilted foward. He loved her smile.
"You."
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When the sun shone the next morning, of course it woke Sasuke up, and he shook the blankets off him and gazed sleepily towards Naruto. The young blonde was grinning in his slumber, the past week and half was treating him well it seemed.
Sasuke couldn't help but grin dumbly to himself, Naruto looked so cute, his hair somewhat matted againest his forehead, even though his blue eyes were hidden, he still looked like an angel. He didn't want to wipe that smile off Naruto's face, or his own either.
He got up and stumbled toward the glass balcony door instead, he would wait for Naruto to wake up instead, and pulled the wooden handle towards him and stepped out to sit by the stone wall.
He planned to calm his mind too, meditate as training, but those evil birds came back for their revenge, and he just decided to sit and watch everything instead.
The balcony showed most of the back, the pool, and the path that lead to the training grounds. His eyes followed around the back and he caught a big wooden fence in his gaze...
'Onsen? This place has everything.. How come I didn't know about that?'
A sudden breeze brushed past him, and he closed his eyes, savoring the feeling. The wind reminded him of something, but he couldn't put his foot on it. A worried voice reached him and woke him from his train of thought,
"Hey, Sasuke?"
Naruto said behind him. Sasuke's right eyelid lifted slowly and he rested it's gaze on Naruto's realaxing eyes.
"What is it?"
Naruto sat on the railing, on the stone part.
"How come you didn't wake me up?" He whined like a child again. Sasuke opened both of his eyes al the way and watched the surface of the pool.
"Uh, I didn't feel like training today." Naruto raised an eyebrow and watched him. "Are... You okay?"
"Yeah, I'm fine, just calming my body and mind, you know, meditateing?" Naruto shrugged it off and jumped off the rail and plopped down next to Sasuke, whitch made Sasuke uncomfortable, but at the same time, more warmer.
"Is there something you want to tell me? You've been avoiding me since Shikamaru found us in the woods."
Sasuke wasn't listening though, enough to answer Naruto. He was way too tired. His mind was wandering helplessly, towards Naruto again, just like it always did. Naruto's warm hand cupping his cheek, his lips brushing againest his face in slumber, their tounges tangled-
"Uchiha! You there?" Naruto waved his face over Sasuke's face and Sasuke snapped back.
"Uh, yeah, what did you say?" Naruto sighed and turned away to watch the pool too.
"You don't hate me or anything, right? Do you..." Sasuke looked away from the pool and watched Naruto's features, not surprisingly light.
'Please please say it, you cold heartless bastard. You care about him more than you care about your name.' Sasuke's heart yelled at him, and Sasuke looked down at his hands, wanting to say it so badly, but as a reflex his cold actions kicked in,
"I don't care."
He said slowly, he smacked himself mentally, pretty hard, he would have to beat him self phisicly later for the stupied answer.
"I... See."
He looked away, damn him, damn himself to hell, he wanted Naruto so bad that was his last chance. Maybe he could fix it. Naruto couldn't see his face as a single tear slipped down his face. His voice broke slightly, but Naruto didn't realize it when he said,
"That's not what I-"
"No, no, it's okay Sasuke, I understand, completly. I just wanted to let you know, that I care about you. I'm not going to be afraid to show it either." He stood up and faced away from Sasuke, not realizing that Sasuke had shed a tear. "See ya later." He walked away back inside the house, and Sasuke turned to see him walk towards the door.
"Naruto! Come back now, God damn it!" Sasuke yelled at his back and Naruto angerly jerked his arm up and waved bye. Sasuke now watched the door slam shut with blurry eyes. "Shit."
He crossed his arms and groaned to himself. "I'm such a bastard. I must die." He pulled out a kunai, and watched it with blurry eyes. He didn't even realize that he was crying, mostly. One more tear sneaked it's way from his eye, but then he grinned to himself.
Naruto cared. Naruto cared about him, and wasn't afraid to show it. Naruto might have been gay like him. He stood up and wiped the twin tears away and spun the kunai around with his finger then slipped it back in the holster.
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Naruto however, was somewhat pissed more than happy, had he been rejected? It was not an unfamilar feeling afterall. But it hurt so much coming from Sasuke, his best friend. He was sitting with Sakura, and she was nervously talking to him.
"Let's go out for ice cream now." She said quietly, not wanting to prod him or anytihng. He seemed to be more depressed than happy, whitch was kind of weird for the peppy ninja.
"Yeah, okay." She smiled and got up off her dining room chair and he followed suit, then followed her out of the room.
"Could you go get the boys from the training room, and I'll get the girls and don't worry, I'll get Sasuke." Naruto gave her a surprised look.
"What? Why wouldn't I want to get Sasuke?"
"I can tell."
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Everyone laughed and talked, walking towards the ice cream stand, that is except for Sasuke and Naruto, who were trudgeing in the back.
Choji was singing happily, "ICE CREAM ICE CREAM I SCREAM FOR ICE CREAM!!" Shikamaru nudged him so he would shut up, but he kept singing loudly, "ICE CREAM ICE- GAH!" Ino punched him, "Shush, you big chubby!"
He groaned, "Okay, okay!"
Sasuke glanced over at Naruto once in a while, but Naruto kept his gaze fixated on his feet and the ground out in front of him. Sasuke also looked down sadly, but nobody really noticed because they were all watching Ino.
"Anyway, Sakura and Lee make a great couple!" Sakura blushed and so did Lee, but Lee laughed it off, and everyone else laughed too. "You don't seem so disapointed with Shikamaru!" Kiba yelled out, and Shikamaru yelled back, "You don't seem so disapointed with Hinata!"
"Hinata doesn't seem so disapointed with me!" Kiba yelled back too, then held Hinata around the waist protectively. Shikamru glared at him then took Ino around the waist too, and electricity boomed between them as Hinata and Ino giggled nervously.
"ICE CREAM!" Choji cheered and jumped in front of the cart and handed money to the man and asked him for a certain flavor. "Thank you!" He turned away and walked to the side to slurp happily on the ice cream.
Sakura giggled from behind Sasuke and Naruto and pushed them both towards the ice cream cart, they both bumped into eachother clumsly.
"You can go first." Naruto grumbled to Sasuke, and he shrugged it off and handed the man some money and the man gave him a vanilla ice cream cone.
"Thanks." He backed away, somewhat beside Naruto and Naruto looked down in his pocket for some money, but before he could pull out anything, the man realized who it was.
"It's Kyuubi!" He yelled and pointed, as Naruto's eyes filled with horror as he looked up to see the man.
"I ain't selling dog shit to that flithy bastard! I always knew that one day you're going to kill us all!" He hawked a big one then spit in Naruto's face, and it hit his cheek. His mind hurt so bad, it burned, so did his chest for some reason. 'That's probably how Sasuke feels.'
"BASTARD JACKASS!" Sasuke yelled and flung the ice cream he hand in his hand towards the man and it smacked him hard between the eyes, making him fall backwards. Sasuke's eye's turned sharigan, as he proceeded to pull a kunai out, but Shikamaru and Neji grabbed his arms.
Naruto's eyes wavered and he shook his head then glanced towards Sasuke, but looked away instead. Sasuke was shouting at Neji and Shikamaru and trying to throw them off, then Kiba and Choji jumped on him too, but Sasuke was still standing, with the other ninjas holding his legs.
Lee wrapped his arms around Sakura, who wanted to slap the man too, and was trying to push her way out of Lee's grip, but he pulled her around and held her head againest his shoulder so that it would stiffle her sobs.
The rest of the girls watched Naruto with pity, and worry as the man's spit slid off of his face slowly.
The man wiped the ice cream off his face and shot up and stood in front of Sasuke, who was fighting to get the boys off his arms.
"He," he pointed at Naruto. "Is a bloody demon!"
Shikamaru growled then let go of Sasuke's arm and Sasuke swung and bitchslaped the man across the face and the man went flying into another booth.
Naruto clenced his eyes shut and turned and ran away, he knew that Sasuke didn't care for him, he just was protecting his dignity. The mixed saliva and tears flying off his face. He ran what it seemed like for hours, but mere minetes, and didn't look behind him.
He ran past the open gates to their home, then jumped from branch to branch in the woods, and tripped and went flying and crashing to the training ground, but stood up and brushed himself off noetheless.
He fixed himself up. wiping his face with his sleeve then taking off his jacket and shirt. He breathed out then did the tiger seal with his hands. "Kage bushin no jutsu!" Ten more Naruto's appeared and they all pulled out kunais.
"Give me your best shot." He pointed at the clones, and they all nodded.
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wern't you surprised about the ice cream man? i know i was. you know you always knew that ice cream men were evil. okay next chapter basicly is just full of lemon, im not going to lie or handle you people with puppy gloves, but i might have to post the full lemon on adultfanfiction.net, im just going to put most of the lemon there.
Abby - uhh...i though there were 3 rooms not 2...ur sister told me to read it so i did AN: gya... u.u;; didn't i say 2 other rooms? its obvious that the girls would get one room to themselves, there not going to bunk with the boys silly. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------- Morien Alexander- HAH! I love this so far. The thing where Tsunade said that thing about how they should be put in a mansion and all. That cracked me up. Nice job AN: yeah, most people said that part was funny XD ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Sammy-chan -I loved the first chapter! so confusing and hilarious. Choji is so funny.
(I can't belive how evil you made kakashi and the others. LOL!)
AN: Haha, yeah they do seem a bit evil dont they ;; yeah, im so ooc. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Van luver- HAHA OMG I LOVED IT!! it is awsome! and its only the first chapter i just wish there where more girls but you have it planned out and matched up i mean you ARE the matchmaker lol! but you know only four girls can only make four babies less they have like a million each lol! --------------------------------
AN: hahah my penname should have been matchmaker XD i guess the matches are pretty obvious anyway, i was thinking about a ino/saku but then i was like nah, we got naru/sau for that .o heheh
o.o -i only read the summary, but i'd like you to know i did that once. on sims two adults and all the kids . it was crazy making the skins and even worse when i set them loose. you can't keep track of that many and neji kept skiping school. ------------------------------------ AN: XD that is funny, neji skipping school XD Saori-Hime- OMG! I LOVE IT! screams All the characters fit right in, and I absolutely loved all the witty comments, "Damn right nobody answered. It was too early, I'm so tired." and THE best one I think "If all priests were boy rapists, he was the pope" LOLOL dies and then Naruto got kicked in the family jewels by Iruka! LOL! The whole 'baby making' discussion was so freakin funny cuz everyone was so serious about it! I would have reacted more like Oo wtf!? lol Way to go Tsunade-sama XD
AND IT'S YAOI! I couldn't have asked for more! SasuNaru goodness! yes yes! glomps the author TT you are my hero! You don't hate Sakura, either! I hope Sakura ends up with Lee, and I can see it's going to be ShikaIno too! (yes!) too bad I think you are going to have Neji and Tenten together =! I like NejiHina, even though it sounds so wrong lol they make a cute couple though! uu I'm happy that Ino and Sakura get along too!
BTW, You sounded so cute in your author notes! gives the author cookies YOU ARE ADORABLE! ; Please update soon, cuz I just love this story so much already !
Damn i wrote a lot Oo; eep.. runs off AN: wow, I must point out that that is the best review i have ever gotten, and probably will be the best review ive ever gotten, that was so cool gyaaa!!!! it made me do my victory dance!!!! hahah i didnt think my comments were funny at all, people yelled at me for it and you were just like that is some serious funny shit there and you called me ADOREABLE!! gyaaa!!! thank you thank you thank you ----------------------------------------------- mouse - OMG it was so great, I enjoyed it very much and can not wait for your second chapter. Hope you update fast. AN: that i will, that i will. ---------------------------------------- LittleDarkOne - ::sweatdrops at the last sentence of this story.:: Anyway, i liked the story so far and i do hope you continue. It's quite good for your first try. Though, might i suggest something? Why don't you let everyone talk in their own sperate space. Like, instead of having three people speak in the same one paragraph it gets confusing. Especially if you add inner thoughts as well. I mean, you had Sasuke talk, then Kakashi's inner thoughts in the same paragraph and i thought it was still Sasuke until i understood the wording and speech pattern. I don't know, i think that might make it easier to understand. ;
Anyway! I just thought that would help some, this story is very good, a lot of promise. I do hope you continue soon, i would love to see Sasuke and Naruto get together ... and maybe Iruka and Kakashi? =3 Hehe. Bye then! Keep up the nice work.
LittleDarkOne AN: this person, made me want to do a serious kakairu, whitch i did, i really respect this person's ideas, she is a good writer (if she is a she..?) and i imed her a couple of times and shes kinda cool ::thumbs up:: thanks for your cool reviews! ------------------------------------------------------ lovewaya -Yes!! I love this story-- please continue! lots of YAOIness yea? AN: hey, sure why not? ------------------------------ Bishiehuggler -So, how many pairings will there be? Any het? Keep updating! I can't wait to see what happens in the first night! snickers diabolically AN: you kinda scared me with that laugh, but hey im loving it. please keep reviewing me, please please please there are alot of pairings. um, didnt i already say all of them somewhere? the first night sucked ass, i wanted to make it better for you but then i was like "who are you kidding you lazy ass.." ------------------------------------------------ jinky-kurapica - Yeah! Of course it's good! In fact, it's GREAT! I love it! Want more! Update soon!
AN: Thank you for such a cool review! i love it when people say they love it. ---------------------------------------------------
Scylla 2004-06-07 1 Anonymous Aww... XD KibaHina! Please? pout I'll love you forever and ever and ever. And ShikaIno, NejiTenTen, but then I can't decide who would be with Sakura. XD Maybe LeeSaku. Hehe. I guess he would be the only option if all the other guys were taken, since it'll be NaruSasu. XD
Hahaha, Shino and Chouji, the quiet one and the fat one, are the matchmakers? falls over
Well, you wanted our opinions, so I gave you MY favorite pairings. V
AN: thank you, that was actually the pairings, so you won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeah!! V -------------------------------------------------------------------- Crazyinulover 2004-06-07 1 Signed PRAISE ME BITCH! I really like this twiny you have proven your self a good writer hopefully you won't give up on your stories like do Groans and i love that joke about the pope (6, 6, 6 gasp) and you even make your funny ass self appear in your fics.. but why didn't you mention your brlliant gorgeous redhead feternal twin (people would like that) I mean we only shared a womb for 9 monthes then a room for like how many years? I lost count this is going in a good direction ( I already know most of the plot and you still surpise me for that i give you kudos, the m&m kind ) I forgot which pairing i want... I belive it was... KAKASHI AND IRUKA!! you didn't even MENTION IT! mad at hacker5 now there were other jokes i liked as well the only other things i have to say is Strip poker and truth or dare hugs kisses you's my bitch I love you great job ::CIL praises her twin continuesly :: bye
P.S if you are reading this then you are on the computer... GET OFF I NEED IT JUST BECAUSE YOU"RE A FEW MINUTES OLDER DOESN"T MEAN YOU GET MONOPOLY OF THE FING COMPUTER!
AN:.... I hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you embrassed me so badly!!!!! ::smacks robyn with a pan:: you suck! im going to put a sucky review in your sucky fanfics ya loser!!!!!!!! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----- ghostninja85 -This looks like it could get really good. Please update soon.
AN: um, thanks? i dunno if it did turn out good yet.... -------------------------------------- Nalio - ha that was awesome! i hope you update again really soon AN: all for you. -------------------------------------- Alicia McClellan -WOW! I like it! Can't wait for next chapter!
Are you going to make a HinaKiba pairing? I think that would be cute!! AN: okay now everyone a round of applause for my first review ever, i shall always remember you. thank you. ::bow:: i made a hinakiba pairing for you. ----------------------------------------- X2 Labyrinth - Shino/Sakura! This is an odd idea... My only nitpick is the authors note in the middle...those are best left to footnotes, random notes can interrupt the flow of the story. ; Otherwise, mm...not bad. ;D AN: aww i like my author notes, but i gave them up for you. u.u;; its a sacrifice i will have to make. --------------------------------------------------- Cookie6 - Great chapter. Please write more.
AN: great review. please review more. -------------------------------------------------- AN: okie thats enough for now, my beta's signing off soon, ill put the rest in next chapter, bye i love you!! ::kisses everyone::
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. Simple and clean, no corny jokes this time.. ::sob::
warning: those who dont like yaoi, run away...
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"No, no Iruka, please give it to me now."
"Kakashi, come on, please just let me do it, I promise you'll have the better winnings at the end."
"Stop trying to tempt me. I gotta do it."
Kakashi grabbed the check from Iruka and shot him a glare as he searched his pocket for some money to give to the waiting waitress. Iruka pouted and shot him a sad glare back.
"No fair..."
"Hey, come on now, don't give me that look, I have to pay because I asked you out, remember?" The waitress smiled and took the money that Kakashi handed her while he said that and bowed politely and Kakashi gave her a nod. "Thank you for coming to Sammy-sama's!"
Before the girl could run off to give the money to the cashier, Iruka grabbed her hand and stuffed a bill in it. "You forgot your tip!"
"Aa! Thank you very much!" She bowed again and smiled and the two men smiled back, and she ran back to the cashier. Kakashi turned to glare at Iruka halfheartly as Iruka stood up.
"Wow, that felt good!" Iruka patted his stomach and Kakashi couldn't help but grin at his childish behavior, for he was playing off the glares. Not that the grin could be seen by his mask.
Kakashi also stood up and walked out of the resturaunt with Iruka following, looking down at his watch. "Woo, it's kinda late for dinner to be over, it's 9:00." Kakashi nodded then closed his eyes, feeling dumb by asking, "Do you want me to walk you home?" Iruka blushed, then nodded and walked up to Kakashi, standing by his side.They approached an allyway that was the shortcut to Iruka's apartment. Kakashi stepped again, but Iruka held his hand out and grabbed him by the arm.
"Wait."
"Okay?"
"Could you... Pull down your mask?"
"...Why?"
"Just come on, I saw your face while you were eating, I just want to see something really quick."
Kakashi looked at him weirdly then, still watching him, pulled his mask down hesitantly. Iruka smiled happily then dared to say, "you look pretty."
"Pretty? What am I, Ms.Konoha?" He grabbed the material roughly to pull it up again but Iruka caught his hand swiftly and pushed him back againest the alley wall and pressed his lips, suprisingly softly, because of the rough gesture.
"Iruka!" Kakashi mumbled againest his lips, and Iruka took that as an opening to slip his tounge in his mouth swiftly, then pressed his body againest Kakashi's. Kakashi let his eyes drift shut dreamly, and he got into the moment by opening his mouth further and moving his lips againest Iruka's, and pulled him into his embrace. Their tounges pushed againest eachother's with a fire that had never had the chance to grow, then it dimmed slightly as Iruka pulled away from Kakashi slowly, to take a breath.
Kakashi opened his eyes then blinked once or twice, he looked like a little kid, with his headband falling over his eye. His lips were shining with the wetness of Iruka's mouth, and it closed slowly. 'He's so damn hot.' Iruka thought to himself. He couldn't hold back and placed a light kiss on his lips, then moved down to kiss his jaw playfully.
"Iruka." Kakashi murmured softly again and Iruka pulled away from his face to look up at him questionally.
"You... You look at me that way?" Kakashi asked softly.
"Yeah.. Uh, sorry I.." Iruka whispered and stepped back but Kakashi grabbed his arm and hauled Iruka againest his body and held him around the waist protectivly. "Hey, uh... Do you wanna do this again sometime?" Kakashi whispered, his lips not even inches away from Iruka's. Iruka breathed out then whispered seductivly back, "Do you wanna come stay at my house for tonight?" Kakashi grinned then pressed his lips againest Iruka's lightly, but Iruka protested by pressing his harder.
Kakashi grinned again againest Iruka's lips then pulled his hands away from Iruka's waist and slid them up his shirt to touch his bare back. Iruka twitched with the sudden feel of his touch. He pushed his tounge through the barrier of Kakashi's lips and played with his mouth. Kakashi moved his hands and snapped the back of Iruka's pants playfully, and Iruka cried out in surprise, but before he could do anything, Kakashi slipped his hands inside and rested his hands on Iruka's backside. Iruka shivered at his touch, for it was warm and Kakashi's hands were cold. But he didn't want to pull away from his touch as Kakashi moved his hands to Iruka's thighs, hinting a certain something.
Iruka pulled Kakashi's mask down more so that he could bend down to suck on Kakashi's neck. Iruka could feel- no taste the sound of a moan coming from deep within Kakashi's throat. Kakashi was glad that he always wore the mask over his face and neck, because the marks that Iruka was so obvious. Kakashi moved his hands slightly so that his hands lightly grazed the insides of Iruka's thighs. Iruka twitched.
"Let's go to my place now." He breathed out into Kakashi's ear and Kakashi pulled his hands out eagerly and Iruka stumbled back so that Kakashi could pull his mask over his face again, and they both walked with their arms over eachothers hips.
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"Ino, you're kinda pulling my hair!" Tenten moved her head slightly towards Hinata, Sakura giggled in front of her. They had just gotten out of their daily bath, and instead of putting Tenten's hair into the usual buns, Ino and Hinata decided to put them in cute pigtail braids. They had started up and Sakura decided that since she was doing her hair, might as well play with some makeup.
"You look so cute already!" Sakura squealed and Hinata nodded slightly. "Yeah, I think you should go see Neji." She said quietly and tied the braid she was doing with a pink bow and Tenten blushed the same color.
"I...Don't think he likes me at all ."
"Yeah right! Who are you trying to fool? Yourself? 'Cause you sure arn't fooling anyone around here. Come on, you know Neji would go red and then go like," Ino opened her mouth and stared into the distance, then grinned devilishly. Tenten playfully punched her lightly in the leg, making Ino giggle.
Sakura gave her some lip gloss and Ino finished her braid, Hinata handing her a pink bow to tie it. Tenten stood up then looked in the mirror and gasped. Her braids rested lightly on her shoulders, but her face amazed her. She had never worn makeup before, it really fitted her.
Ino had said before, pink was her color. Her cheeks were graced lightly with light pink blush, and her lips shimmered. She looked at herself closer to see eyeliner and mascara.
"You look great!" Ino cried then hugged Tenten from the back, and she swayed, dazed at her reflection. "I..Look like Goldilocks."
"Don't be silly, you don't have gold locks." Ino nudged her and then Sakura cried out, "Let's give her a dress!"
"Great idea Sakura-chan! I'll go get Neji!" Ino ran out of the room, then Sakura turned to Hinata.
"Strip her down!"
"Yes!" Hinata cried, caught up in the moment as she turned to Tenten. Sakura ran to her dresser and searched through it for clothes. Tenten yelped and said quickly,
"I can do it myself, Hinata!" She pulled off her clothes and Hinata blushed and turned away, Sakura ran up to them with a pretty pink dress that matched Sakura's hair. she pulled the dress on and Sakura and Hinata straightened it out for her
"This is perfect!" Tenten nodded then pulled the dress on, it was perfect, it showed her back as she spun to show the other girls, and it finished just above her knees, and tied around her neck and the back went as low as just above her butt.
Sakura and Hinata started brushing her off and stepped back as the double doors opened. Tenten spun around and watched as Ino stepped in the room. Tenten stood on her tippy-toes to look around Ino, but nobody stood behind her.
"I'm sorry, Tenten. I couldn't find him anywhere." Ino held up her arms then dropped them sadly. Tenten faked a smile at the other girls and they looked down in sorrow.
"It's okay, I don't really mind much, I'm just going to go take a walk, it would be a waste to waste your makeup Sakura." She turned away from the other girls then walked past Ino out into the hall. Ino nodded and shut the doors behind her. Tenten shrugged it off, she didn't really want Neji to see her like that anyway, it was so unlike her.
Her fringe fell down her forehead cutly yet neatly, Ino and Hinata had made it so that it framed the side of her face, but it was messed now, she had shook her head out. She looked very pretty, her makeup was not smudged or thining. She stepped quietly on the clean floors with her bare feet, her hands swayed lightly by her sides.
She approached the stairs to the third floor and stood by it for a second, remembering why she went up there before. Training room. Ah yes, insetead of going all the way to the woods, going up a few stairs would be easier. She climbed the stairs, it was dark and she held on to the railing, as she got up and stood on the hallway of the third floor.
Moonlight poured in from the windows, then there were dark spaces, she decided not to go to the training room, but go to the roof instead, like she usually did when she went for a walk. She walked past the training room door towards the outside door, but the door to the training room opened behind her.
She spun around to see the missing Neji, and now sweaty, for he was training without his shirt on. He held the shirt in one hand and wiped his forehead with one arm, then blinked twice at Tenten, thinking a girl had broken into their house. His eyes widened, realizing that it was in fact, Tenten.
"H-hey! Uh," He raised his arms then dropped them, looking around. "What are you doing here?" He leaned againest the wall casually, flexing his naked muscles as he crossed his arms. She turned her whole body to look at him and smiled.
"I live here, remember?"
"Duh. I knew that, I meant up here so late?"
She grinned and shook her head, changing the subject.
"You... You look nice." He finally breathed out and she stiffled a girlish giggle, not wanting to seem immature. She nodded, "Thank you."
"What's the occasion? Sneaking out from the roof to go to a date?" He joked, but he was really curious inside. She shook her head again.
"The girls were having fun with me, this is Sakura's dress." She spun slowly to show her bare back and uh, back, then turned to him and held her arms out as if to say, 'Tada!'
"Do you like it?"
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She kept grinding her hips againest his gently moving backwards and then fowards in time with the beat, and she leaned to breathe in his ear, "Do you like it?"
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His eyes softened as he remembered her sultry voice in his ear, her breathing resounding in his ear, the smell of her close to him, him nodding dumbly to her question.
"What's wrong Neji? Do I look bad?" She pouted and let her arms fall back to their places back at her sides.
"Not that, I was just thinking."
"About?" She smiled happily and tilted foward. He loved her smile.
"You."
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When the sun shone the next morning, of course it woke Sasuke up, and he shook the blankets off him and gazed sleepily towards Naruto. The young blonde was grinning in his slumber, the past week and half was treating him well it seemed.
Sasuke couldn't help but grin dumbly to himself, Naruto looked so cute, his hair somewhat matted againest his forehead, even though his blue eyes were hidden, he still looked like an angel. He didn't want to wipe that smile off Naruto's face, or his own either.
He got up and stumbled toward the glass balcony door instead, he would wait for Naruto to wake up instead, and pulled the wooden handle towards him and stepped out to sit by the stone wall.
He planned to calm his mind too, meditate as training, but those evil birds came back for their revenge, and he just decided to sit and watch everything instead.
The balcony showed most of the back, the pool, and the path that lead to the training grounds. His eyes followed around the back and he caught a big wooden fence in his gaze...
'Onsen? This place has everything.. How come I didn't know about that?'
A sudden breeze brushed past him, and he closed his eyes, savoring the feeling. The wind reminded him of something, but he couldn't put his foot on it. A worried voice reached him and woke him from his train of thought,
"Hey, Sasuke?"
Naruto said behind him. Sasuke's right eyelid lifted slowly and he rested it's gaze on Naruto's realaxing eyes.
"What is it?"
Naruto sat on the railing, on the stone part.
"How come you didn't wake me up?" He whined like a child again. Sasuke opened both of his eyes al the way and watched the surface of the pool.
"Uh, I didn't feel like training today." Naruto raised an eyebrow and watched him. "Are... You okay?"
"Yeah, I'm fine, just calming my body and mind, you know, meditateing?" Naruto shrugged it off and jumped off the rail and plopped down next to Sasuke, whitch made Sasuke uncomfortable, but at the same time, more warmer.
"Is there something you want to tell me? You've been avoiding me since Shikamaru found us in the woods."
Sasuke wasn't listening though, enough to answer Naruto. He was way too tired. His mind was wandering helplessly, towards Naruto again, just like it always did. Naruto's warm hand cupping his cheek, his lips brushing againest his face in slumber, their tounges tangled-
"Uchiha! You there?" Naruto waved his face over Sasuke's face and Sasuke snapped back.
"Uh, yeah, what did you say?" Naruto sighed and turned away to watch the pool too.
"You don't hate me or anything, right? Do you..." Sasuke looked away from the pool and watched Naruto's features, not surprisingly light.
'Please please say it, you cold heartless bastard. You care about him more than you care about your name.' Sasuke's heart yelled at him, and Sasuke looked down at his hands, wanting to say it so badly, but as a reflex his cold actions kicked in,
"I don't care."
He said slowly, he smacked himself mentally, pretty hard, he would have to beat him self phisicly later for the stupied answer.
"I... See."
He looked away, damn him, damn himself to hell, he wanted Naruto so bad that was his last chance. Maybe he could fix it. Naruto couldn't see his face as a single tear slipped down his face. His voice broke slightly, but Naruto didn't realize it when he said,
"That's not what I-"
"No, no, it's okay Sasuke, I understand, completly. I just wanted to let you know, that I care about you. I'm not going to be afraid to show it either." He stood up and faced away from Sasuke, not realizing that Sasuke had shed a tear. "See ya later." He walked away back inside the house, and Sasuke turned to see him walk towards the door.
"Naruto! Come back now, God damn it!" Sasuke yelled at his back and Naruto angerly jerked his arm up and waved bye. Sasuke now watched the door slam shut with blurry eyes. "Shit."
He crossed his arms and groaned to himself. "I'm such a bastard. I must die." He pulled out a kunai, and watched it with blurry eyes. He didn't even realize that he was crying, mostly. One more tear sneaked it's way from his eye, but then he grinned to himself.
Naruto cared. Naruto cared about him, and wasn't afraid to show it. Naruto might have been gay like him. He stood up and wiped the twin tears away and spun the kunai around with his finger then slipped it back in the holster.
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Naruto however, was somewhat pissed more than happy, had he been rejected? It was not an unfamilar feeling afterall. But it hurt so much coming from Sasuke, his best friend. He was sitting with Sakura, and she was nervously talking to him.
"Let's go out for ice cream now." She said quietly, not wanting to prod him or anytihng. He seemed to be more depressed than happy, whitch was kind of weird for the peppy ninja.
"Yeah, okay." She smiled and got up off her dining room chair and he followed suit, then followed her out of the room.
"Could you go get the boys from the training room, and I'll get the girls and don't worry, I'll get Sasuke." Naruto gave her a surprised look.
"What? Why wouldn't I want to get Sasuke?"
"I can tell."
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Everyone laughed and talked, walking towards the ice cream stand, that is except for Sasuke and Naruto, who were trudgeing in the back.
Choji was singing happily, "ICE CREAM ICE CREAM I SCREAM FOR ICE CREAM!!" Shikamaru nudged him so he would shut up, but he kept singing loudly, "ICE CREAM ICE- GAH!" Ino punched him, "Shush, you big chubby!"
He groaned, "Okay, okay!"
Sasuke glanced over at Naruto once in a while, but Naruto kept his gaze fixated on his feet and the ground out in front of him. Sasuke also looked down sadly, but nobody really noticed because they were all watching Ino.
"Anyway, Sakura and Lee make a great couple!" Sakura blushed and so did Lee, but Lee laughed it off, and everyone else laughed too. "You don't seem so disapointed with Shikamaru!" Kiba yelled out, and Shikamaru yelled back, "You don't seem so disapointed with Hinata!"
"Hinata doesn't seem so disapointed with me!" Kiba yelled back too, then held Hinata around the waist protectively. Shikamru glared at him then took Ino around the waist too, and electricity boomed between them as Hinata and Ino giggled nervously.
"ICE CREAM!" Choji cheered and jumped in front of the cart and handed money to the man and asked him for a certain flavor. "Thank you!" He turned away and walked to the side to slurp happily on the ice cream.
Sakura giggled from behind Sasuke and Naruto and pushed them both towards the ice cream cart, they both bumped into eachother clumsly.
"You can go first." Naruto grumbled to Sasuke, and he shrugged it off and handed the man some money and the man gave him a vanilla ice cream cone.
"Thanks." He backed away, somewhat beside Naruto and Naruto looked down in his pocket for some money, but before he could pull out anything, the man realized who it was.
"It's Kyuubi!" He yelled and pointed, as Naruto's eyes filled with horror as he looked up to see the man.
"I ain't selling dog shit to that flithy bastard! I always knew that one day you're going to kill us all!" He hawked a big one then spit in Naruto's face, and it hit his cheek. His mind hurt so bad, it burned, so did his chest for some reason. 'That's probably how Sasuke feels.'
"BASTARD JACKASS!" Sasuke yelled and flung the ice cream he hand in his hand towards the man and it smacked him hard between the eyes, making him fall backwards. Sasuke's eye's turned sharigan, as he proceeded to pull a kunai out, but Shikamaru and Neji grabbed his arms.
Naruto's eyes wavered and he shook his head then glanced towards Sasuke, but looked away instead. Sasuke was shouting at Neji and Shikamaru and trying to throw them off, then Kiba and Choji jumped on him too, but Sasuke was still standing, with the other ninjas holding his legs.
Lee wrapped his arms around Sakura, who wanted to slap the man too, and was trying to push her way out of Lee's grip, but he pulled her around and held her head againest his shoulder so that it would stiffle her sobs.
The rest of the girls watched Naruto with pity, and worry as the man's spit slid off of his face slowly.
The man wiped the ice cream off his face and shot up and stood in front of Sasuke, who was fighting to get the boys off his arms.
"He," he pointed at Naruto. "Is a bloody demon!"
Shikamaru growled then let go of Sasuke's arm and Sasuke swung and bitchslaped the man across the face and the man went flying into another booth.
Naruto clenced his eyes shut and turned and ran away, he knew that Sasuke didn't care for him, he just was protecting his dignity. The mixed saliva and tears flying off his face. He ran what it seemed like for hours, but mere minetes, and didn't look behind him.
He ran past the open gates to their home, then jumped from branch to branch in the woods, and tripped and went flying and crashing to the training ground, but stood up and brushed himself off noetheless.
He fixed himself up. wiping his face with his sleeve then taking off his jacket and shirt. He breathed out then did the tiger seal with his hands. "Kage bushin no jutsu!" Ten more Naruto's appeared and they all pulled out kunais.
"Give me your best shot." He pointed at the clones, and they all nodded.
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wern't you surprised about the ice cream man? i know i was. you know you always knew that ice cream men were evil. okay next chapter basicly is just full of lemon, im not going to lie or handle you people with puppy gloves, but i might have to post the full lemon on adultfanfiction.net, im just going to put most of the lemon there.
Abby - uhh...i though there were 3 rooms not 2...ur sister told me to read it so i did AN: gya... u.u;; didn't i say 2 other rooms? its obvious that the girls would get one room to themselves, there not going to bunk with the boys silly. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------- Morien Alexander- HAH! I love this so far. The thing where Tsunade said that thing about how they should be put in a mansion and all. That cracked me up. Nice job AN: yeah, most people said that part was funny XD ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Sammy-chan -I loved the first chapter! so confusing and hilarious. Choji is so funny.
(I can't belive how evil you made kakashi and the others. LOL!)
AN: Haha, yeah they do seem a bit evil dont they ;; yeah, im so ooc. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Van luver- HAHA OMG I LOVED IT!! it is awsome! and its only the first chapter i just wish there where more girls but you have it planned out and matched up i mean you ARE the matchmaker lol! but you know only four girls can only make four babies less they have like a million each lol! --------------------------------
AN: hahah my penname should have been matchmaker XD i guess the matches are pretty obvious anyway, i was thinking about a ino/saku but then i was like nah, we got naru/sau for that .o heheh
o.o -i only read the summary, but i'd like you to know i did that once. on sims two adults and all the kids . it was crazy making the skins and even worse when i set them loose. you can't keep track of that many and neji kept skiping school. ------------------------------------ AN: XD that is funny, neji skipping school XD Saori-Hime- OMG! I LOVE IT! screams All the characters fit right in, and I absolutely loved all the witty comments, "Damn right nobody answered. It was too early, I'm so tired." and THE best one I think "If all priests were boy rapists, he was the pope" LOLOL dies and then Naruto got kicked in the family jewels by Iruka! LOL! The whole 'baby making' discussion was so freakin funny cuz everyone was so serious about it! I would have reacted more like Oo wtf!? lol Way to go Tsunade-sama XD
AND IT'S YAOI! I couldn't have asked for more! SasuNaru goodness! yes yes! glomps the author TT you are my hero! You don't hate Sakura, either! I hope Sakura ends up with Lee, and I can see it's going to be ShikaIno too! (yes!) too bad I think you are going to have Neji and Tenten together =! I like NejiHina, even though it sounds so wrong lol they make a cute couple though! uu I'm happy that Ino and Sakura get along too!
BTW, You sounded so cute in your author notes! gives the author cookies YOU ARE ADORABLE! ; Please update soon, cuz I just love this story so much already !
Damn i wrote a lot Oo; eep.. runs off AN: wow, I must point out that that is the best review i have ever gotten, and probably will be the best review ive ever gotten, that was so cool gyaaa!!!! it made me do my victory dance!!!! hahah i didnt think my comments were funny at all, people yelled at me for it and you were just like that is some serious funny shit there and you called me ADOREABLE!! gyaaa!!! thank you thank you thank you ----------------------------------------------- mouse - OMG it was so great, I enjoyed it very much and can not wait for your second chapter. Hope you update fast. AN: that i will, that i will. ---------------------------------------- LittleDarkOne - ::sweatdrops at the last sentence of this story.:: Anyway, i liked the story so far and i do hope you continue. It's quite good for your first try. Though, might i suggest something? Why don't you let everyone talk in their own sperate space. Like, instead of having three people speak in the same one paragraph it gets confusing. Especially if you add inner thoughts as well. I mean, you had Sasuke talk, then Kakashi's inner thoughts in the same paragraph and i thought it was still Sasuke until i understood the wording and speech pattern. I don't know, i think that might make it easier to understand. ;
Anyway! I just thought that would help some, this story is very good, a lot of promise. I do hope you continue soon, i would love to see Sasuke and Naruto get together ... and maybe Iruka and Kakashi? =3 Hehe. Bye then! Keep up the nice work.
LittleDarkOne AN: this person, made me want to do a serious kakairu, whitch i did, i really respect this person's ideas, she is a good writer (if she is a she..?) and i imed her a couple of times and shes kinda cool ::thumbs up:: thanks for your cool reviews! ------------------------------------------------------ lovewaya -Yes!! I love this story-- please continue! lots of YAOIness yea? AN: hey, sure why not? ------------------------------ Bishiehuggler -So, how many pairings will there be? Any het? Keep updating! I can't wait to see what happens in the first night! snickers diabolically AN: you kinda scared me with that laugh, but hey im loving it. please keep reviewing me, please please please there are alot of pairings. um, didnt i already say all of them somewhere? the first night sucked ass, i wanted to make it better for you but then i was like "who are you kidding you lazy ass.." ------------------------------------------------ jinky-kurapica - Yeah! Of course it's good! In fact, it's GREAT! I love it! Want more! Update soon!
AN: Thank you for such a cool review! i love it when people say they love it. ---------------------------------------------------
Scylla 2004-06-07 1 Anonymous Aww... XD KibaHina! Please? pout I'll love you forever and ever and ever. And ShikaIno, NejiTenTen, but then I can't decide who would be with Sakura. XD Maybe LeeSaku. Hehe. I guess he would be the only option if all the other guys were taken, since it'll be NaruSasu. XD
Hahaha, Shino and Chouji, the quiet one and the fat one, are the matchmakers? falls over
Well, you wanted our opinions, so I gave you MY favorite pairings. V
AN: thank you, that was actually the pairings, so you won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeah!! V -------------------------------------------------------------------- Crazyinulover 2004-06-07 1 Signed PRAISE ME BITCH! I really like this twiny you have proven your self a good writer hopefully you won't give up on your stories like do Groans and i love that joke about the pope (6, 6, 6 gasp) and you even make your funny ass self appear in your fics.. but why didn't you mention your brlliant gorgeous redhead feternal twin (people would like that) I mean we only shared a womb for 9 monthes then a room for like how many years? I lost count this is going in a good direction ( I already know most of the plot and you still surpise me for that i give you kudos, the m&m kind ) I forgot which pairing i want... I belive it was... KAKASHI AND IRUKA!! you didn't even MENTION IT! mad at hacker5 now there were other jokes i liked as well the only other things i have to say is Strip poker and truth or dare hugs kisses you's my bitch I love you great job ::CIL praises her twin continuesly :: bye
P.S if you are reading this then you are on the computer... GET OFF I NEED IT JUST BECAUSE YOU"RE A FEW MINUTES OLDER DOESN"T MEAN YOU GET MONOPOLY OF THE FING COMPUTER!
AN:.... I hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you embrassed me so badly!!!!! ::smacks robyn with a pan:: you suck! im going to put a sucky review in your sucky fanfics ya loser!!!!!!!! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----- ghostninja85 -This looks like it could get really good. Please update soon.
AN: um, thanks? i dunno if it did turn out good yet.... -------------------------------------- Nalio - ha that was awesome! i hope you update again really soon AN: all for you. -------------------------------------- Alicia McClellan -WOW! I like it! Can't wait for next chapter!
Are you going to make a HinaKiba pairing? I think that would be cute!! AN: okay now everyone a round of applause for my first review ever, i shall always remember you. thank you. ::bow:: i made a hinakiba pairing for you. ----------------------------------------- X2 Labyrinth - Shino/Sakura! This is an odd idea... My only nitpick is the authors note in the middle...those are best left to footnotes, random notes can interrupt the flow of the story. ; Otherwise, mm...not bad. ;D AN: aww i like my author notes, but i gave them up for you. u.u;; its a sacrifice i will have to make. --------------------------------------------------- Cookie6 - Great chapter. Please write more.
AN: great review. please review more. -------------------------------------------------- AN: okie thats enough for now, my beta's signing off soon, ill put the rest in next chapter, bye i love you!! ::kisses everyone::