Brittany: Okay, time for chap. 4! Now, I haven't been getting any reviews lately so, maybe you don't like it? Well trust me, it will get better in this chapter. I just had to add Bakura in there to spice things up.

Email me what you think at because I have no idea how to make the review thing work on my server.

Bakura: Yah.

Ryou: rolls eyes

Bakura: growls at Ryou

Disclaimer: I do not own anything or any part of Yu-Gi-Oh, but if I did, the Egypt series would have started by now. (I don't even have any plushies! cries)

"Yami, what happened?" Yugi said, sitting up on the couch after waking up after they got home.

"…We got to the factory, but we didn't see anything. Then Bakura came and-" Yami started, but Yugi suddenly jumped up. "He stole my ticket!" Yugi cried. Yami held Yugi down. "Relax," Yami said. "I have the ticket right here."

Yami held up the golden ticket that sparkled in the light. Yugi's eyes widened with glee. "My ticket!" he squealed. Yugi grabbed the ticket and hugged it like it was a little teddy bear. "Wait," Yugi said, realizing something. "If we have the ticket…what does Bakura have?" Yami smiled. "I gave him a fake one."

Yugi hugged Yami with glee and it seemed Yugi was doing much better. He was back to his old hyper self. "Come on, let's go to the factory!" And with that, they were off again. They returned to the same address, the dark cold alleyway that looked really creepy.

"It's the same as last tiiiiiiiiiime-" Yugi said, but a trap door had opened underneath his feet and he was falling farther down a dark hole. "Yugi!" Yami said, jumping in after him. They fell for about 30 seconds, and hit the ground.

"Glad you could join us, Yugi," said a mysterious guy, his face hidden in the shadows, as Yugi fell in from the ceiling. "And Yami as well," he added, as Yami fell from the ceiling landing on top of Yugi.

"Who are you? Where are we?" said Yugi as he got up from under Yami. "Why," the man said, "You are in my chocolate factory." The lights suddenly turned on and a world of amazing color surrounded them. The man suddenly appeared in light, and Yugi and Yami were able to identify the man.

"Pegasus!" they said in unison. Pegasus laughed. "Indeed, it's me, Yugi-boy! Don't you just love my factory? Chocolate has always been my favorite…besides cartoons that is…" Pegasus gave an odd chuckle and Yugi and Yami looked at each other.

Pegasus led them down a spiral hallway. The paintings on the wall were twisted and upside down. Pegasus opened a door on the far side of the hallway, and there, sitting across from them at a table, sat 4 other kids. Yugi recognized them immediately.

The kids were Rex Raptor, Weevil Underwood, Rebbecca Hawkins, and Mokuba Kaiba. Along with them were 4 adults, probably their parents. Rex's dad, Weevil's mom, Rebbecca's grandpa, and Mokuba's brother, Seto Kaiba. "Oh no, not you," Seto said as he spotted Yugi. Yugi sat down and Yami sat down beside him. Then Pegasus proceeded to the front of the table.

"Thank you all for coming. Now that we all are here, it is time to begin the tour! Follow me, everyone!" Everyone got up from the table and followed Pegasus to a door. Before he opened it, he said, "welcome to the world of…me! Maximillion Pegasus!" He opened the door and candy and chocolate everything laid before them. Yugi squealed with joy and, with the others, ran out and began eating trees and flowers and chocolate pavement. Rex was chewing on a giant chocolate statue of Blue-Eyes Toon Dragon. Yugi didn't know where to start. He finally found a flower and was about to eat it, when a scream came. Everyone turned to look, and apparently Weevil had fallen into the chocolate river. (yah yah, you know what happens)

Weevil's mom was hysterical. Pegasus calmly explained to her where he would end up and she shrieked and ran out of the room. The other kids laughed and thought it was very funny. "Oh well," Pegasus said. They all got on a boat and floated down the river. "And on your left you'll see my collection of giant chocolate toon monsters!" Pegasus said, acting like a tour guide as the boat floated on. "Oh, it looks like Rex had a piece of my Blue-Eyes' tail!" Rex looked sheepish. Pegasus then looked up. "And if you look above you, you will see a giant 5-headed monster about to eat you!" Everyone gasped and looked up. "Just kidding!" Pegasus said, chuckling. The others sighed with relief and they continued on.

Brittany: Well that's about all I can think of. Please do not kill me because I have only seen the movie once and it was a long time ago. Email me if you have any ideas about what to put in the story to make it better instead of another boring original chocolate factory movie.

Ryou: Don't forget the umpa-loompas!

Brittany: I'll put them in the next chapter…I need some ideas, people! Please feel free to talk to me.

Ryou: Until we meet again! Cheerio!