Final Hacking
Chococat: Hey, hey, hey...I can't believe it! It's the last chappie already! Thanks to all of yas who reviewed! But i'm sorry it's been so long since i updated...It's just...My stupid computer had some kind of crappy virus! Apart from that...I'm sooooooo Psyched!
Tala: Okay, okay. So i guess you deserve a little time to babble on your stuff.
Chococat: Yay! But, Tala. I would've babbled anyway. First of all...I must say sorry to all those readers that this last chappie will be very short and...Sorry that all the relations went overboard and all that kissing went to fast AND the relations happened too quickly as Wind Archer pointed out to me. I promise to make my sequel much, much longer and make the relations all twisted, deepen and...fluffy! Yes! Fluff! Anyhoo...I wanna thankies my best mates like Allan, Robbie, Beth, Kerry and loadsa others (Sorry if i forgot your name! I just looked through my earliest reviews for names!) for reviewing...I'm soooooo touched! Oh, oh! My mum and dad and sist-
Tala: Okay! It's not like you've won the Oscar or something...
Chococat: I know! But...I'm soooooooo happy! And of course...I gotta thankies my one and only...Tala Valkov!
Tala: Yep. You couldn't of done it without me.
Chococat: Yes! I must admit! But i wanna thank...:
Wind Archer: Thanks for your comments and all...Plus! I really enjoyed your stories...Keep up the good work!
Jello-Is-Evil: Thanks for reviewing! And yes! Race is a real name! I stole it off 'Hearts Of Fencing' a Chinese series.
PinkOopa: Go nitty-gritty monkey mattress dance! Thank you so much for reviewing!
lilatouch: So sorry for making you wait! Thanks for reading!
ariotlatio: Thank you for supporting me! Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!
Feeding Ground: Here! Finaaly the update! Your reviews mean a lot to me!
Weffie: Don't cry! Heres the update! Sorry its late!
And sorry if i didn't write all of my reviewers on...I just looked at my most recent reviews...Thanks!
Tala: Okay, okay, can you just get on with the story?
Chococat: Fine! Anyhoo...Please enjoy the last chappie of Final Hacking...It's short, but decent...Meow!
Chapter Eight
When The Clouds Clear
It was a dull autumn morning and the wind was blowing gently not outside a luxurious building, but a sorrow land .
On the land were thousands of graves sticking out like flowers in a garden. In the north-east corner in front of a clean grave, was a bunch of teenage kids.
A pink-haired girl, who was sitting on the floor, crying in the arms of a two-toned-blue-haired boy. Standing in front of them was a honey-bee-haired girl, looking up at the cloudy sky. Her eyes red from crying, but at the same time she was smiling. Opposite her was a black-haired boy, standing and sympathizing his spiky-red-haired friend, who was kneeling on the grass right in front of the grave with the name 'Race Valentine' engraved on it.
If only he had listened to Race...Then maybe she wouldn't of died. He was the blame. It was his fault.
A foot step was heard behind them and Madame Kare stepped towards the grave with a bunch of flowers.
'I believe Rikku and Kairi explained about their past?' She said, kneeling down in front of the clean grave to lay her pretty bunch of flowers.-They were Valentine Drops. (CC: The flowers, i mean...I made them up...No such flowers...I think!) Tala said nothing as he read over and over the writing printed on the grave: 'Race Valentine. Hack Infection Unit's highest quality member. Most loyal friend and is forever loved.'
'It's all your fault, you bastard!' Kairi shouted, taking a rage and pushing Tala off his knees.
Tala said nothing again and the last half hour had past in peace and silence, until Rikku broke the silence.
'I'm sure Race wouldn't want to see us like this...Lets go.' Rikku said before adding softly. 'When the clouds clear...I'm positive we'll see Race again.'
Chapter Eight
When The Clouds Clear-End
To Be Continued...
Chococat: Well? How was the ending? Shabby? Good? Review to tell me so i don't make the same mistake in my sequel...By the way, my sequels called 'Digital Angel'. Don't ask why...I dunno either...!
Tala: Well? Why'd you have to make Race die?
Chococat: Well, you see...
Ray: When are you gonna fix me and Rikku's relation?
Chococat: About that...
Kai: Why did you make me go out with a fucking girl!
Chococat: Um...
Tala/Ray/Kai: Well...?
Chococat: Ahhhhhhhh! Too many questions...Problems...I'm no fit to be an author...But...Review anyway...Or i'll not put up my exciting sequel...I've already started drafting the chapters! I'm currently working on chapter 2...Whelp! See ya soon! And thanks for supporting me and my fan ficcies, peeps! By the way...I'm sorry for not updating...It's cause...My bloody computer fucked up on me! No worries, my summer break is coming up in another 3 weeks, so i'll get more chance to update. Also! I'm going to be starting a new fiction during the summer called 'Suicide Lair' along with 'Sylivia Of Paradise' at my fiction account! Please check them out soon...