Bf- hanyou-sama? How come we stopped this fic for like…five months?

Df- that's a horrible over exaggeration.

Bf- well, fine then, why did we stop for so long?

Df- cuz you refused to write this chapter, which was your responsibility

Bf- oh, zip it, I had no ideas! Plus I was way to busy listening to Green Day and studying for the GOD FORSAKEN MIDTERMS:fumefume:

Df- calm down, Lenni-chan, I had to study too.

Bf- I'll becha you get lower than an 80 in your math midterm.

Df- yea? I becha you'll get lower than an 80 onYOUR mathmidterm.

Bf- done!

Bf and Df:shake hands:

Chapter 4: King Enma's vault and the mysterious shadow man

"Hanyou Cript-sama!" Ember complained, stopping and plopping down on the dusty ground. Cript stopped and stood ridged.

"What, Ember?" she asked, her voice a deathly whisper. Ember, however didn't appear to notice and went right on complaining.

"My feet hurt, I'm hungry and Palace Rekai is FOREVER away!"

Cript dug her claws into her own palms, trying to contain her rage.

"Cause yourself new pain to take your mind off your feet, eat something while you walk, and keep your eyes to the ground." She answered all of Ember complaints in one sentence, beginning to walk again. "We'll be there soon."

Soon:

"Cript! I can't believe that worked!" Ember exclaimed, sucking the blood from her hand where she had created several cuts. Cript snorted, pulling her friend into the shadows of a boulder.

"Now," the wolf hanyou said, "Palace Rekai is way more heavily guarded than Maze Castle was. Ogres everywhere. We need to be stealthy, and we need to be QUIET." Cript emphasized the 'quiet' part by making a sizeable dent in the rocky earth. "If you're not quiet," she continued, lifting her fist to reveal a pebble that had been reduced to dust, "You'll look like that."

Ember swallowed hard and nodded, following as her thieving companion led the way through the shadows and up to the Palace.

The two girls snuck up closer to the entrance of the castle. Cript stopped short though, still hiding amongst the shadows.

"That can't be right…" she whispered.

"What?" Ember asked, popping up beside her friend.

Cript jumped at Ember's sudden appearance. That was another one of her annoying habits. Along with her tendency to shout things at the top of her voice, and begin IMing people the second they signed on.

"Look, they're all guarding the door." She pointed to the enormous doors of Palace Rekai. "See? Even Gorge is there."

"Gorge is a klutz." Ember sniggered. "So, it would be excusable if he did something stupid to let us in, right?"

"Do it." Cript urged her friend. Ember reached in her backpack, removing the flute from the last chapter. She then began to play a slow, even toned song. The ogres began to show signs of significant boredom. Finally,Gorge dropped to the ground, fast asleep. The others soon followed. Once they had all fallen victim to Ember's sleep song, the teenage thief in training looked up.

"Wonder why they were all stationed at the door?" she said. Cript pointed to the doors again,

"Maybe he's why." Ember followed Cript's gaze, her eyes falling on a shadowy figure who was silently slipping through the doors.

"Dude! It's Sensui!" Ember exclaimed. Vaulting over the rocks she and Cript were hiding behind. "He's here for Capitulo Negro!…er, I mean Chapter Black!"

Cript jumped in front of Ember, stopping her.

"Ember, before you go messing with the master script of YuYu Hakusho, take a second to think things over. If Sensui didn't take Chapter Black, think of all those scene's with Kurama in them. None of them would exist. You'd be denying yourself and all of the Kurama fan's world wide of those scenes. Would you want that?"

Ember looked shocked for a moment, then narrowed her eyes at her companion.

"That's just like you to use my ONE weak point against me." She hissed.

"That's what I'm here for." Cript said shrugging. Then without another word, she darted off in the direction of the gates, Ember following in her wake.

Bf- w00t! I finished it in three days! Not bad for like FIVE MONTHS of stalling, ne?

Df- again…horrible over exaggeration.

Bf- ah, shut up.

Df:shrug: Hey, let's make this bet a little more interesting.

Bf- how so…?

Df- if I win that bet, then you have to do EVERYTHING that Kurama tells you.

Bf- and if I win?

Df- I have to do everything Hiei-sama tells me.

Bf- oh, you're on, hanyou :runs off:

Df- where are you going?

Bf- to study!

Df:slaps forehead: ugh, well, I had better hit the books too, while we're doing that, review!

Bf:sneaks back after Df is gone: psst! I'll bet you thought I was gone, right? Well, I'm secretly taking a poll. If we both loose the bet, what should happen? Wait…I'm treating this like it's MY fic. Hmm. Well, in that case, just review hanyou-sama. I'll let her in on this. Happy reviewing:wavewave: Ja ne!