Disclaimer: Me no own DBZ, only club and cave
I would like to thank those of you who reviewed my last chapter. animefox, Majin Gokan, subway saiyan, Usa fan, escudo-blade, Passing girl, Borachio, Trunkszgirl, and Gopu( ). I received more than I thought I would so I guess my story wasn't a total flop. (
Now I'll clear things up for those who had questions.
subway saiyan- Yeah I know I'm a monster but it had to be done. I figure Piccolo was weakened enough by the cell jr. he fought, that Krillen, Yamcha, Tien, and Chioutzu together could finish him. I will be clearing things up in the future about what happened to Gohan in the past so look for that. HEY PLEASE UPDATE SAIYAN UPBRINGING I LOVE THAT FIC!
Usa fan- I'm not sure but as I remember Goku brought Dende from Namek to make new dragonballs, and then they were connected to him, because when Kami fused with Piccolo the dragonballs disappeared. You are right about Trunks' sister, I myself am not to fond of OC's either, but she will be OOC. And thanks for the review thing, I didn't know I wasn't allowing anonymous review.
Trunkszgirl- Yes Goten is dead sorry, hope it doesn't make too many people mad. (
A/N: OK chapter 1 was a little short so I'll work on making each chapter longer than the last hopefully. I do want three reviews for each chapter before I'll post the next. If there are any questions please don't hesitate to ask. Without further ado here is chapter 2
Chapter 2- Brief Visit
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She was sitting in her room avoiding her brother. She had always thought that she never really belonged, and Trunks never ceased to make her feel worse. Whenever she felt sad or alone, she would hide away in her room, drawing and coloring, just trying to avoid the pain that everything had caused. She wanted to become stronger not to fight off Trunks, but to make her father notice her. He would always train in the Gravity Room with Trunk, but whenever she wanted to train he would just grunt and ignore her, while Trunks would tease her saying things like 'Girls are to weak to fight'. She wanted her father to be proud of her. Out of all the things that hurt her, one person made her feel like nothing else mattered, Gohan. He had been kind enough to help her learn to sense ki, when Trunks had already learned, and had been using it to find her when they played hide- and-seek. He also taught her how to fly. Whenever she was feeling sad he seemed to know exactly how to cheer her up. At the moment she was coloring a picture of Shenron the Gohan had drawn for her, being extra careful not to ruin it. Suddenly she felt a familiar ki spike just outside the house, a ki all too familiar. She immediately jumped up and ran down the stairs and out the door.
She stood for a while trying to sense where the ki had gone. Her and Gohan had played this game ever since she learned how to sense ki. She began walking around to the side of the house where she had first felt it spike. Just then she felt it again on the other side of the tall bushes in front of her. She flew over to the other side, and there he was, Gohan with his eyes closed smirking.
"Three minutes that's a new record" said Gohan as he opened an eye and look up at the six-year-old flying in the air.
"Yeah well I think you were going easy on me this time." she said sticking her tongue out at him before flying down and clinging on to his neck. "I'm so glad you're here, I was getting bored."
"I'm glad to see you too Bra" said Gohan as he gave her a hug and set her down on the ground.
Right before Gohan could say anything else Vegeta's voice thundered from the other side of the bushes. "BRAT, SPAR, GR, NOW!"
Gohan smirked, the prince never passed up a good fight. "Well I shouldn't keep the Prince waiting now should I?" replied Gohan to Bra.
"Aww I wanted you to play with me." begged Bra giving him her best puppy dog eyes.
"Hey I'll play with you as soon as I'm done, and believe me this shouldn't take long." said Gohan as he turned and walked through the bush towards CC.
Gohan entered the GR to see Vegeta sparring with Trunks and to his surprise Trunks was a Super Saiyan.
"Wow, when did this happen?" asked Gohan
Vegeta turned and face Gohan with a smug smirk in place "He went super a week ago. I'll bet he'll be stronger than you" gloated Vegeta.
Gohan just yawned and looked back towards Trunks "I doubt it he still has a long way to go. So do you want to spar or what?"
"Hph, brat move it or lose it"
"AWW come on dad..." pleaded Trunks
"GO."
"Fine, this sucks."
"So you prepare to lose today brat," said Vegeta
Gohan just scowled and replied "Talk is cheap, and from what I remember you've never beaten me yet."
"Today that changes" retorted Vegeta as he began to power up, pushing up past Super Saiyan, and reaching level 2.
"Hmmm this is interesting," said Gohan as he studied Vegeta's new power.
"Ha ha ha ha you didn't think I would let you be stronger than me did you?"
"Well that depends, I mean, I am still stronger" said Gohan. Vegeta stood there looking at him with a raised eyebrow "Confused, let me show you what I mean" Gohan too powered up reaching level 2, but continued to push farther. His hair began to grow down to his feel and his eyebrows disappeared. "Maybe if you hadn't been so focused on your own training you might've noticed, but then again this is the first time I've pushed this far," said Gohan taking a minute to examine his strength.
Vegeta just stood there in disbelief before returning to his normal scowl. "Hph then lets put this new power of yours to the test." He then fazed out of sight, but Gohan could detect exactly where he was going to be and quickly dodged the punch aimed at the back of his head.
"Vegeta, Vegeta stooping to attacking while my back is turned, how un- princely" replied Gohan as he disappeared and then reappeared directly in front of Vegeta and before he could do anything, Gohan punched him in the gut, with enough force to wind him severely. "Give it up for now, there's something I came to talk with you about."
Vegeta dropped out of super saiyan and sat down trying to catch his breath. "What....is...it brat?" wheezed Vegeta.
"I was wondering if there's been any trouble recently from those pathetic weakling" said Gohan almost growling.
"Hph not since the last time you were here, I think they've finally realized how impossible it is to defeat a saiyan" said Vegeta with a smirk.
"Hmm I think they're up to something, don't let yourself get to ignorant vegetable head."
Vegeta just scowled at the nickname "Is that all you want?"
"No, I was wonder, why haven't you been training Bra?"
Vegeta look down at the ground "Its not that I don't want to, but she...."
"What?"
"Never mind it's none of your business."
"Fine, but if you don't mind then I would like to train her, it seems you want her to be trained, but you don't want to do it yourself."
"......Do what you what, if that is what she wants, but you might want to ask the Onna. I'll be damned if I have to sleep on that godforsaken couch again."
"Alright. You know she wants you to be proud of her, that's the only reason she asks to train with you."
"Hph. Just leave already so I can get back to my training."
Gohan left the GR and walked into the living room where Bra was sitting on the couch watching TV. "Hey there" said Gohan as he sat down next to her.
"Hey Gohan" she smiled as she looked up at him
"I was wondering if you're interested in training, there's a martial arts tournament coming up soon, I'm sure we could get you up to the same level as Trunks."
"Whoa REALLY! AWW that would be great."
Gohan smiled at her response. "But first we need to convince your mom."
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A/N: Yeah I know it's short I'm extremely sorry and I beg for forgiveness, but I ran out of time on the computer. (I have a time limit I hate that) I will update every other day since I'm getting far more reviews than I had intended, and please be patient with me I know this isn't the best chapter, but I promise the next will be far more detailed and more action. Those of you who are waiting for an update on Easy to Hate, I'll will try to update that on every weekend, but no promises, except for the one that I WILL UPDATE IT. (I just don't know when, sorry )
NOW PLEASE DON'T HATE THIS STORY JUST YET I PROMISE IT WILL GET BETTER. . . . . . . .ok now you can review
I would like to thank those of you who reviewed my last chapter. animefox, Majin Gokan, subway saiyan, Usa fan, escudo-blade, Passing girl, Borachio, Trunkszgirl, and Gopu( ). I received more than I thought I would so I guess my story wasn't a total flop. (
Now I'll clear things up for those who had questions.
subway saiyan- Yeah I know I'm a monster but it had to be done. I figure Piccolo was weakened enough by the cell jr. he fought, that Krillen, Yamcha, Tien, and Chioutzu together could finish him. I will be clearing things up in the future about what happened to Gohan in the past so look for that. HEY PLEASE UPDATE SAIYAN UPBRINGING I LOVE THAT FIC!
Usa fan- I'm not sure but as I remember Goku brought Dende from Namek to make new dragonballs, and then they were connected to him, because when Kami fused with Piccolo the dragonballs disappeared. You are right about Trunks' sister, I myself am not to fond of OC's either, but she will be OOC. And thanks for the review thing, I didn't know I wasn't allowing anonymous review.
Trunkszgirl- Yes Goten is dead sorry, hope it doesn't make too many people mad. (
A/N: OK chapter 1 was a little short so I'll work on making each chapter longer than the last hopefully. I do want three reviews for each chapter before I'll post the next. If there are any questions please don't hesitate to ask. Without further ado here is chapter 2
Chapter 2- Brief Visit
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She was sitting in her room avoiding her brother. She had always thought that she never really belonged, and Trunks never ceased to make her feel worse. Whenever she felt sad or alone, she would hide away in her room, drawing and coloring, just trying to avoid the pain that everything had caused. She wanted to become stronger not to fight off Trunks, but to make her father notice her. He would always train in the Gravity Room with Trunk, but whenever she wanted to train he would just grunt and ignore her, while Trunks would tease her saying things like 'Girls are to weak to fight'. She wanted her father to be proud of her. Out of all the things that hurt her, one person made her feel like nothing else mattered, Gohan. He had been kind enough to help her learn to sense ki, when Trunks had already learned, and had been using it to find her when they played hide- and-seek. He also taught her how to fly. Whenever she was feeling sad he seemed to know exactly how to cheer her up. At the moment she was coloring a picture of Shenron the Gohan had drawn for her, being extra careful not to ruin it. Suddenly she felt a familiar ki spike just outside the house, a ki all too familiar. She immediately jumped up and ran down the stairs and out the door.
She stood for a while trying to sense where the ki had gone. Her and Gohan had played this game ever since she learned how to sense ki. She began walking around to the side of the house where she had first felt it spike. Just then she felt it again on the other side of the tall bushes in front of her. She flew over to the other side, and there he was, Gohan with his eyes closed smirking.
"Three minutes that's a new record" said Gohan as he opened an eye and look up at the six-year-old flying in the air.
"Yeah well I think you were going easy on me this time." she said sticking her tongue out at him before flying down and clinging on to his neck. "I'm so glad you're here, I was getting bored."
"I'm glad to see you too Bra" said Gohan as he gave her a hug and set her down on the ground.
Right before Gohan could say anything else Vegeta's voice thundered from the other side of the bushes. "BRAT, SPAR, GR, NOW!"
Gohan smirked, the prince never passed up a good fight. "Well I shouldn't keep the Prince waiting now should I?" replied Gohan to Bra.
"Aww I wanted you to play with me." begged Bra giving him her best puppy dog eyes.
"Hey I'll play with you as soon as I'm done, and believe me this shouldn't take long." said Gohan as he turned and walked through the bush towards CC.
Gohan entered the GR to see Vegeta sparring with Trunks and to his surprise Trunks was a Super Saiyan.
"Wow, when did this happen?" asked Gohan
Vegeta turned and face Gohan with a smug smirk in place "He went super a week ago. I'll bet he'll be stronger than you" gloated Vegeta.
Gohan just yawned and looked back towards Trunks "I doubt it he still has a long way to go. So do you want to spar or what?"
"Hph, brat move it or lose it"
"AWW come on dad..." pleaded Trunks
"GO."
"Fine, this sucks."
"So you prepare to lose today brat," said Vegeta
Gohan just scowled and replied "Talk is cheap, and from what I remember you've never beaten me yet."
"Today that changes" retorted Vegeta as he began to power up, pushing up past Super Saiyan, and reaching level 2.
"Hmmm this is interesting," said Gohan as he studied Vegeta's new power.
"Ha ha ha ha you didn't think I would let you be stronger than me did you?"
"Well that depends, I mean, I am still stronger" said Gohan. Vegeta stood there looking at him with a raised eyebrow "Confused, let me show you what I mean" Gohan too powered up reaching level 2, but continued to push farther. His hair began to grow down to his feel and his eyebrows disappeared. "Maybe if you hadn't been so focused on your own training you might've noticed, but then again this is the first time I've pushed this far," said Gohan taking a minute to examine his strength.
Vegeta just stood there in disbelief before returning to his normal scowl. "Hph then lets put this new power of yours to the test." He then fazed out of sight, but Gohan could detect exactly where he was going to be and quickly dodged the punch aimed at the back of his head.
"Vegeta, Vegeta stooping to attacking while my back is turned, how un- princely" replied Gohan as he disappeared and then reappeared directly in front of Vegeta and before he could do anything, Gohan punched him in the gut, with enough force to wind him severely. "Give it up for now, there's something I came to talk with you about."
Vegeta dropped out of super saiyan and sat down trying to catch his breath. "What....is...it brat?" wheezed Vegeta.
"I was wondering if there's been any trouble recently from those pathetic weakling" said Gohan almost growling.
"Hph not since the last time you were here, I think they've finally realized how impossible it is to defeat a saiyan" said Vegeta with a smirk.
"Hmm I think they're up to something, don't let yourself get to ignorant vegetable head."
Vegeta just scowled at the nickname "Is that all you want?"
"No, I was wonder, why haven't you been training Bra?"
Vegeta look down at the ground "Its not that I don't want to, but she...."
"What?"
"Never mind it's none of your business."
"Fine, but if you don't mind then I would like to train her, it seems you want her to be trained, but you don't want to do it yourself."
"......Do what you what, if that is what she wants, but you might want to ask the Onna. I'll be damned if I have to sleep on that godforsaken couch again."
"Alright. You know she wants you to be proud of her, that's the only reason she asks to train with you."
"Hph. Just leave already so I can get back to my training."
Gohan left the GR and walked into the living room where Bra was sitting on the couch watching TV. "Hey there" said Gohan as he sat down next to her.
"Hey Gohan" she smiled as she looked up at him
"I was wondering if you're interested in training, there's a martial arts tournament coming up soon, I'm sure we could get you up to the same level as Trunks."
"Whoa REALLY! AWW that would be great."
Gohan smiled at her response. "But first we need to convince your mom."
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A/N: Yeah I know it's short I'm extremely sorry and I beg for forgiveness, but I ran out of time on the computer. (I have a time limit I hate that) I will update every other day since I'm getting far more reviews than I had intended, and please be patient with me I know this isn't the best chapter, but I promise the next will be far more detailed and more action. Those of you who are waiting for an update on Easy to Hate, I'll will try to update that on every weekend, but no promises, except for the one that I WILL UPDATE IT. (I just don't know when, sorry )
NOW PLEASE DON'T HATE THIS STORY JUST YET I PROMISE IT WILL GET BETTER. . . . . . . .ok now you can review