Current Reviews:

My responses are in italics!

By: Bob

This story sucks!

Well… I guess that's just your opinion! But remember, If you don't like it, Don't read it.

By: Ghost Knight

Shut the hell up, Bob! Nice beginning. I rather like the stupid pushy Mom who never was great so pushes her kids to be the best. sounds like some baby boomers I know... You should make him a little more unenthusiastic, I think. Makes it interesting.

Thanks! I appreciate that! Andy is enthusiastic about having charmander, not about being a trainer. Now the funny thing is, charmander is enthusiastic about being the first poke'mon of the next poke'mon master! Oh, and just a small spoiler… Andy is Ash's cousin. His mom is pushing so hard, because she's jealous! It's not because she was never great, it's because his cousinwas