A.N.: This chapter is dedicated to flonshoe for being the first reviewer the second time in a row. Thanks so much. Okay, now when I was going over chapter 4, I saw a few errors. I forgot two reviews. I almost cried. I'm sooooo sorry. For the two reviews I missed I will put them right here:
moovalous3: Thank you for reviewing. I'm sorry about forgetting yours, but I forgot to print that one out. My computer had been down for a little while. I wrote your name down, I just forgot to put in a review.
Wildsong: Thanks so much for the review. I forgot yours because I forgot it on my desk side table when I was writing. I swear that will never happen again.
I got my first flame. It was for my other story, but it was still a flame. Wouldn't you think that if someone didn't want to read a story, they wouldn't? Strange. Anyways, on to the reviews:
Reviewers:
(Chapter 4)
flonshoe: Thank you so much. You are totally awesome. I mean, you say you love my story and that it's amazing. I am so glad it didn't disappoint you. And the ending, I didn't exactly feel like going on, so I ended it with a sort of cliffhanger.
PrudencePiperHalliwell: Happy Birthday Nikki! Thanks for reviewing and be the first person that's read my stories to IM me. You're actually the first person who has ever made contact with me without a review. Thanks so much.
wabibito: Thanks for reviewing. I listen to all my reviewers and I chose the watch idea because that's what I got most reviews for. And we definitely don't want you to go through withdrawal.
Anywien: I know it took me a long time to update. I am so sorry. I'm glad the wait was worth it. And I assure you this one will be too.
sparklinqt87: Thanks so much for the review. I know Rob and Jess are sweet together, I'm actually thinking about writing another story where they're not so sweet together. No hints as of yet, I'm still not sure I'm going to write it.
nikki007: No, they didn't 'do it.' You might know that this is a rewrite of my original story, and I did have them 'do it' but it didn't work out so well when I went to go do my sequel. I thought I made it clear enough that they didn't, but oh well.
kittykatangel518: THE NEXT ONE LONGER! I can try, but as I'm sure I've said before, I'm not the greatest writer. I really wouldn't want to be treated like a child by my boyfriend and his mom either. Wait, I already am treated like a child by my boyfriend. Oh well, thanks for the review.
Living2Love: One of your favorite chapters? Which is your favorite, I wonder? I didn't think this chapter had anything to get teary eyed over, but I guess it was a little cute. I will definitely keep updating. And there is definitely going to be drama coming in about I would say 2 to 3 chapters. Hint Hint.
Uh.yeah: Some of the Jess/Rob fluff that I do I don't really know if it's any good. But I read A LOT of fanfics, so I eventually put everything that I like from different stories with my own ideas and make it fluff. Rob is definitely protective, but I'll give you a hint about upcoming chapters: Rob isn't the only one who is protective. I know vague, but it will soon all become clear.
moovalous3: Yes, Rob and his mom care about Jess and Rob is overly protective over her. I'm a rockin' writer? I've never heard that one before. Thank you.
Sunchaser: A new reviewer. Awesome. Thanks for the review. And suspense is one of my specialties, so be expecting more of it.
(Chapter 1)
madmaddy: I actually wondered to myself about what Jess would get Rob. I wanted it to be intimate but also something a guy would like. It is so hard trying to think of things like that.
-Chapter 5-
By the time we got to my house it was getting close to one. Let's just say my mom wasn't too happy about that. The party was starting at two and she didn't like that fact that we got to the house really late by her standards. Personally, I think that she was just overreacting. But what do I know?
When Rob pulled into the driveway, we saw my brother Doug walking down the sidewalk into the house. His ears and nose were pink so he was obviously outside for a while.
I pulled off my helmet when we came to a stop and said, "Hey Doug, why are you outside?" There was no reason for him to go outside when it hadn't snowed and he wasn't seeing Tasha I knew by the expression on his face.
He hesitated for a few seconds before he said, "I just went out for a little while."
I raised one of my eyebrows suspiciously as I said, "is there something I should know about?"
"No, of course not." But, he said it a little too fast for my liking.
I took a step toward him, but I didn't even get that far before Rob put his arm around my waist and dragged me back toward him. I forgot that he was even behind me. But damn, I really want to have a go at Doug right now.
Rob leaned down and whispered in my ear, "Mastriani, just leave him alone for now. It's Christmas for God's sake, deal with this later."
I gave a stiffened nod that he more or less felt as I watched Doug turn around and walk into the house.
Once he closed the door we started walking towards it. Rob was making it awkward for me to walk considering he was pretty much making me walk on his feet. I looked around my shoulder at him and saw that his cheeks and ears were flushed with cold. I didn't know how I looked, but I guess it was probably worse than his.
I stopped him for a second and turned around in his arms so I was facing him. I rubbed my hands on his chest before I settled them behind his neck. And it was hard to reach that far up due to my short stature.
"Baby, is there a reason that you're keeping us in the freezing cold when we could step twenty feet into the warm house?" He had a half amused half disgusted look on his face as he said this.
I mocked hurt as I said, "I just want to ask you something."
He pulled me tighter to himself and gave me a light kiss. "Now, what is it you wanted to ask me?"
I put my chin on his chest and looked up at him and hesitated for a minute before I said, "Um, you know how you've already graduated?"
He looked at me like I was stupid, but he didn't do anything else so I could continue.
"So I was wondering if…youwantedtogotothepromwithme?"
He started laughing and I got extremely mad at him and turned away.
He still had the traces of laughter in his voice as he said, "Jess, baby, don't be like that." I was ashamed of myself to feel my insides start to melt. Love it makes people do the craziest things. He tried to turn me around to face him, but I pulled away and started walking closer to the door. "I'm sorry I laughed. But, I didn't understand the last part of your question at all."
I felt a little embarrassed after that. I mean, I told myself that I wasn't going to make a fool out of myself in front of him. But yet, it seems I did again. I took a deep breath and the forced myself to turn around and look him in the eye. His lips were still curled up a little, but I couldn't help but walk straight back into his arms. I leaned up to look at him and said, "I wanted to know if you wanted to go to the prom with me. I know it's a little early, but you've already graduated so…"
I had turned my head away from him sometime during my little speech, but he forced me to look at him again when he put a gloved hand under my chin and pulled it upwards so his lips could catch mine.
We were kissing for a few minutes before it got way to cold and we had to go inside or we would both get colds. I stopped him right at the door and said, "So, is it a yes or a no?"
He gave a slight chuckle and gave me a peck on the lips before he opened the door and said, "You figure it out."
And with that, we both stepped inside, sadly to say: chivalry is dead even if it is with your extremely hot boyfriend.
A.N.: Okay, I was going to put more, but I thought I procrastinated long enough for all of us. I'm sorry there's like nothing really happening yet. The thing with Doug had to take a whole chapter.
I would like to thank of all my awesome reviewers again for being so awesome. If I could give you all Oscars or Emmys I would.
This is a new thing I'm doing: If you want to know how I'm doing writing the next chapter, sort of like when I think it will be posted and how I'm coming along with ideas, then leave your email address in a review and I will email all those people who want me too. If you don't want to leave your email address in a review, then email me at: or IM me at mch419 It's just an idea, if you don't like it, then you don't have to do it. I promise I won't stalk anybody or anything; I'm not like that.
Anyway, thanks for all the support and please keep it coming.
