Here's chapter two. This will explain a few of the things that may be bugging some readers.
Chapter 2: Bug problems and family reunions
Phobos waited anxiously pacing about his throne room. His guards were alert partly because their prince was in an impatient mood meaning that he could decide take, out on them! "And partly because the Guardians had entered the palace grounds and were apparently mopping the floor with any guards foolish enough to get in their way. The two guarding the door quickly backed away has the huge arachnid form that was Archeron marched into the throne room his razor sharp spider legs stabbing small pieces of stone out of the "floor.
"Well?" Phobos snapped expectantly.
Archeron went into a bowing position and presented a small bundled up blanket in his large hands. Phobos approached examining its contents. A small new, born baby maybe three months old with dull blond hair was rapped in the blanket its small arms flailing about whilst it cried loudly in fear.
"Excellent." Phobos sneered his face in a crooked grin has he leaned forward to pluck the child from Archerons hands.
"Welcome home… my sister."
At that moment the doors to throne room flew open coming off their hinges closely followed by two Murmerers who landed unconscious a few feet away from Archeron and Phobos. Has the dust settled the silhouettes of five girls could be made out?
"The Guardians, Stop them!" Phobos commanded.
"At once my liege!" Archeron responded advancing on the Guardians his bladed feet stabbing into the ground has he charged at the five warrior women. The Guardians scattered around the spider monster encircling him preparing for a joint assault. Nariko used her swords to deflect a glancing blow from one of the monsters razor sharp legs. Oni kept her distance projecting a powerful water surge from her hands directly into Archerons face.
Varsha leapt into air in front of Archeron using her staff to smack him first in the left cheek then the right and in the stomach taking his breath away.
Esme called on her powers to unleash a series of small vines from the "stone work floor to hold down Archerons legs.
"Darn you hold still! He snarled has he swiped his powerful arms each time narrowly missing the Guardians who were flying about him. Archeron raised his abdomen and shot out of blast of web which hit Oni squarely in the chest pinning her arms against the wall and covering her mouth preventing her from calling out.
Archeron loomed over his victim. His extra pairs of eyes sprang open revealing his freakish arachnid visage. He made a chilling hissing noise, which went through Oni. She tried to scream but only a mumbling sound could be heard. She hated bugs and twelve, foot tall spider-men definitely qualified has bugs in her book.
"I'm going to saviour this moment," Archeron hissed. "His mandibles primed and ready dripping with venomous saliva. He grabbed Oni by the throat and began strangling her. About three seconds into strangle he was struck by a massive blow to the back of his thick, skinned head causing him to release his grip. He turned just in time to see Kaleshea strike another blow with her sword cutting off one his mandibles. Archeron cried an inhuman cry has he clutched his painful face checking the damage.
Nariko flew in front of Oni and drew her sword. Oni closed her eyes has she heard the lightning fast blade cutting through the sticky substances holding her against the wall. She ripped her self free the remnants of web breaking away.
"Thanks Nari!" she gasped has she yanked the sticky goo off of her face. Nariko gave her a serious look.
"I advice you to be more alert in the future." She said emotionlessly before flying off to rejoin the fight.
"Like I said thanks," Oni repeated bitterly before following her fellow Guardians example.
Nariko drew her to swords and began performing a rapid swirling motion, which produced an icy cold wind, which blew around Archeron.
"Oni!"
"Got ya!" She responded. She aimed her palms towards Archeron and produced a thin blanket of water, which was carried by Nariko's icy wind. The water impacted on Archeron and froze upon contact with his steely skin. Soon his entire body was frozen solid.
"Where's Phobos?" Asked a confused Kaleshea. The Guardians looked about the throne at some point during their battle with Archeron Phobos had somehow vanished. The girls looked about themselves but could see no sign of the dark prince.
"Under the palace.
Phobos descended deep under the castle grounds in the brass cage like elevator. After several minutes the elevator finally impacted upon the hard stone floor. He started down a long thin corridor in a hurried fashion knowing the Guardians could be close behind. His sprawling sibling cupped in his right arm screaming the whole way.
Finally Phobos reached a tall thin brass door. He entered into a small diamond shaped room. On the walls were large brass pipes, which seemed to "climbed up into the ceiling on the two walls opposite the entrance were to large crystals each standing around seven feet tall. In the two crystals a man and a woman who both appeared to be in their late twenties to early thirties stood frozen inside their crystal prisons.
"Oh I do so enjoy these family reunions," Phobos chuckled to himself. He approached a smaller crystal with an opening in the middle, which was mounted in a smaller brass pipe stand in the middle of the room.
"And thanks to you mother father and now my dear sister to your collective life forces will fuel my powers for decades to come." Phobos explained has he placed the screaming infant into the small crystal. The crystal glowed has the opening sealed itself shut freezing the child inside in a state of suspended animation like her parents.
Phobos exited the room his laughter echoing down the narrow corridor…
General Archeron
Bio: Archeron is the former chief militant of Phobos's armies. "He was later replaced by lord Cedric. Archeron is a vicious and brutal fighter he often lets his anger take over. He relies largely on his intimidating metamoorian appearance, but is still a powerful fighter and force to be reckoned with. He is fully loyal to Phobos and will defend his prince against any who challenge his right to the throne.
Appearance: arachnid: standing roughly twelve feet tall Archeron entire lower body is that of a huge spider is legs have razor sharp blades. His body is black and dark grey. Covered in metallic armoured ridges. Archerons upper body is the same dark grey and black has his spider-body. His upper chest has an outer rib cage mimicking a spider. His head is bald with red eyes and 'a wrinkled forehead which are actually the eye, lids to his two extra pairs of eyes which he will open up close to his prey has an intimidation tactic. He also has two mandibles coming out either side of his large fang filled mouth. Humanoid. Archerons humanoid form retains the outer ribcage mimicking a spider. The legs are now human replaced by steel armoured boots, which stop below the knees a purple cloak is worn over Acherons shoulders which reaches past his knees. His face remains the same has his arachnid face minus the mandibles. He actually looks quite frail has a humanoid. His skin is a grey colour.
Weapons and abilities: Archeron is incredibly strong. His spider legs have razor sharp edges so Archeron simply walking can prove fatal to anyone unfortunate enough to be in his path when he is in a "hurry or even a bad mood! Just like a real spider Archeron can spray webs of various amounts ranging from thin lines to gigantic 'webs which can cover large areas. His body his covered in dark grey armoured 'plates which are has strong has steel granting Archeron resistance to physical attacks.
Weaknesses: Archerons movements are "some what limited due his arachnid lower body. If his legs can be restrained this greatly reduce his mobility hopefully completely disabling his lower spider body. If his "eye sight is obstructed then Archeron will often flail wildly in attempt to remove whatever his blocking his sight often unintentionally harming his own troops and surroundings in the process.
Ok chapter three will be up in the next couple of days until reviews are always welcome just no flames please.