Hey, this is my first piece. It's really short, and I'm not a great writer but this idea was stuck in my head. So feedback on how to write better.
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Chapter 1
A couple embraces in the moonlight. They cling as if they're each other's anchors to the living world.
"Don't go. You don't have to fight in the war."
"I have to. It's my duty." He leans down and kisses her head.
"But I love you…" :sobbs: He's holding her tight, soothing her.
"I love you too, buns."
"Oh, Ranma don't leave me. I don't want to lose you."
"Then marry me tomorrow. Before I leave. So I'll survive knowing you're waiting for me."
"But my father…"
"Don't worry about your father buns, he may surprise you."
"Okay, tomorrow morning we'll ask him, and tomorrow night we'll be married. I have to go before my parents wake up."
One last kiss, one last embrace before sunrise.