CHAPTER XV:
"Ya' think?" Chris told me sarcastically and angry.
I swallowed soundly, I didn't want to face this alone. "Wy!" I cried pitifully for my brother that was upstairs in his bedroom.
"What is it?" He asked loudly so we could hear him from down stairs.
"We need your help with something for a sec, can you come down, please?" Chris said in his best "I am not angry tone".
I looked at Patty, she was still hiding behind the other two, she looked terrified poor girl, her eyes were glassy and she was trying not to cry.
Penny also looked scared. I bet they didn't know what the whole commotion was about, but then Penny was always the one that put her foot in her mouth way too much, so just in case, she was probably scared too.
"I am in the middle of solving this impossible math exercise, or should I call it riddle? Cuz this is impossible! Hey Chris, Do you think you can help me with this later? You are so much better at math!"
"Sure!" I said a little impatient, walking towards Patty and putting my arms around her shoulder, comfortingly. "now come down!" I pleaded to the stairs.
Patty turned around and enfolded my legs with arms; I draw circles in her back with my hand, as to tell her that everything was fine.
Penny ran to Chris expecting the same treatment, which she got. At that point Wyatt walked down the stairs saying…
"What is it so important? Hey, munchkin did they leave alone and unattended?" He asked Prue with a loving smile, Prue smiled back at him "That's not fair now, is it? Come to your favorite cousin of all times!" He said opening his arms so she would ran to him.
Prue ran energetically and smiling. There was something about Wy that could always bring little, shy Prue out of her shell; maybe it was that even though Jake and dad always did his best to give Prue a paternal figure (Prue's dad died before she was even born), and they did act as her father; In Prue's eyes and also in Wy's heart, he was the closet thing she had to a father, despite the fact that he was barely a few years older than her.
Wyatt picked her up. "So what is it?" he asked us, while he looked at Prue smiling.
"I need you to go get Phoebe out of her date. We'll call dad and Jake so mom and Paige and all of them can come back here!" I told him.
"And… why particularly do we have to call everybody back? And why do I get to be the one that risks getting kicked in the balls by our martial arts expert aunt?" Wy asked, the three girls giggled at his last remark, they probably thought Wyatt saying "getting kicked in the balls" was funny.
"Patty, why don't you tell Wy what you told me a while earlier?" Chris told her sweetly, but she wasn't fooled by that; she buried her face on my legs. "Well… lets see, Patty told me something about how I couldn't go visit her house, because if I left this house I would be unprotected and the elders would find me, so I couldn't leave the house until… and I quote "Mom and the aunts find a way to keep me safe"… So Wy… care to explain what all that means?" He said with an angry smile.
"Ohh… I think I know where Phoebe is… besides, I just remembered I have to tell her something… would you come with me to get mommy, munchkin?" Prue nodded and Wy orbed away.
Chris chuckled and look at me. "It never fails does it?" he asked, I chuckled too.
A few minutes later we were dealing with a not so happy Paige (try having her twins and running magic school and tell me how would you feel by having like your once a month five minutes alone with your husband interrupted).
An even less happier Phoebe, she just HATES when we interrupt her dates, I don't know why. Me and Wy agreed that she is Prue's mother and as so she shouldn't be allowed to date, besides she is already too old for that! But after telling dad that, he suggested us that if we didn't want to get blown up by our mother, kicked to death by Aunt Phoebe and getting a one way only orbing ticket to Antarctica from Aunt Paige, we better never express them our opinion.
And mom, well mom was just freaking out thinking WHY we had brought her home.
"So what is it? I see no demons… I see no bleeding kids…I see no magical being's invasion, can you just tell us what is so important?" Paige said angry and Patty, who had been hiding in her father's leg since their arrival, found a way to cover herself even more.
"Someone…" Chris started saying annoyed "accidentally slipped something about me not being able to leave the house, because somehow I am cloaked from the elders' radar if I am IN this house, does anybody care to explain what does that mean?"
"How could you let that happen? I told you to make sure he didn't find out." My mom rant at me and Wy, mainly out of desperation, I could see the tears clouding her vision and felt like hugging her, but Wy beat me to it.
Still Patty was a little girl and she couldn't even see us from "inside" her father's legs, so she started crying.
"I am sorry, I am so sorry." She said between sobs coming out from her hiding spot, ready to take whatever punishment she deserved. She is such a brave girl! "I didn't mean to… Penny wanted to take him home, and I just remembered we couldn't… I am sorry!"
Paige kneeled in front of her girl and hugged her.
"It's ok, sweetie… it was a mistake…it's ok." She said caressing her back.
"No…it's not…now Piper and older Chris are really mad at me." She cried, poor little girl, she looked so heartbroken! Till the last fiber of my heart soften, and I bet that happened to mom and Chris too.
Mom walked to her and kneeled beside Paige. She pulled away from the hug so mom could look at Patty.
"No sweetie… I am not mad at you!" She said caressing her cheek. "I just yelled cuz I got scared Chris might want to leave us now," Patty let go a sob "and I don't want him to leave, you know how much I love having him here." Mom said ever so softly, seeing also if she could manipulate Chris into staying at the same time she comforted Patty. Patty nodded between tears. " So I was afraid that he might leave us, cuz that would hurt me so much, and that made me scream… you know how sometimes when you see a demon and you get very scared you scream?" Patty nodded again "Well…that is what happened. But I am not mad at you…"
"Really?" Patty pouted, controlling her sobbing.
"Sure… on the contrary… I am very proud of you… because if you would have let Penny take Chris to your house, he would have been in a lot of danger! You are my hero!" She smiled at her. Patty smiled back behind her tears and hugged her, kissing mom's cheek. "What about you Chris? Are you mad at her?"
Chris kneeled down in front of her, he does have a soft spot for the three kids, specially for Patty, like I do. Once Patty saw him in front of her, she started crying like a pig in the slaughter house.
"Shh… stop crying…of course I am not mad at you, sweetie… why would you say that?"
"Cuz …you… g..got… mad a…af…after… I to…ld you, y..y..you co…c…cou…couldn't.. l..lea…ve… the h…h…house!" It was hard to understand her beneath her sobs…Chris gently wrapped Patty's body and sat her on his lap. Wiping her tears.
"Yeah at them, not at you! Baby, I am absolutely, positively sure I am not mad at you!" He told her tenderly, kissing her cheek; but she wouldn't stop crying. "hey, don't cry any more… Oh come on, Patty, baby… don't cry." She just turned around and hugged him (still sitting on his lap) and kept on crying. "What's wrong…sweetie…please don't cry… I am not mad at you, why are you crying?"
"but… y…you… a…are…go…go…going… to…l-l-leave us! Au…aunt P…P…Pi…per s…s…said th…tha…that sin…ce I to…told you, n…now… y…you… a…are…go…go…going… to…l-l-leave. And I… d…don't… wa..nt… y…you… to…l..leave! And… i…it's goi…ng… t…to b…be m…my fault… a…nd n…no…bo…dy wa…wa…wants y…you… to…l..leave! A…and e…ve…ry…b…bod..dy is g…goi..going to h…h…hate… m…me if you leave,… be…cause it w…would be my fault!" She was ranting through her tears " AND I am going to hate myself!" She finished clearly.
Chris held her even tighter, kissing her hair gently. He avoid looking at the faces around him, since Patty's wasn't the only face with tears streaming through it after that statement.
Mom and Phoebe were sobbing, hugging each other. Jake's concerned arm, around Paige's shoulder, Paige eyes were watery and she was carrying Penny, her tiny face buried in her shoulder. Wyatt was carrying Prue, a couple of silent tears were dampening her pretty face. Wyatt eyes were red and scared. Dad was staring at Chris pleadingly, like begging him not to leave in a zillion silent languages. I… I was just too numbed to have a reaction.
"Shh baby, everything is going to be ok. You all knew from the beginning I couldn't stay here forever." Chris whispered to the little girl, rocking her back and forth with his body.
"I don't want you to leave!" She whined, as if it was his call to stay or leave. Expressing what we were all feeling. We knew he had to leave one day, but we rather forget about that.
"I don't want to leave either; but I can't stay here forever!" He told us all, in a sad yet matter of fact tone. kissing her hair, and rocking her back and forth (or rocking himself?).
It reminded me of the time Phoebe was telling Paige, maybe I wasn't meant to be conceived, that maybe my only purpose was to come and warn them about Wyatt. The same tone he used to say: "It's ok, I was thinking the same thing myself". A complete sad resignation to was meant to be. Something that he never had about anyone but himself! I mean, he defy all those supposed "meant to be" for Wyatt, but he would always take what it came for him. Finally I understood why everybody always told me I had a martyr complex!
Mom silently walked to him and kneeled beside him, passing her arm around his shoulder, in silence. He leaned his head on her shoulder. And they stayed like that for a while, in silence, the three of the rocking back and fort.
Then Chris sighed and stood up, picking up Patty, that was almost falling asleep on top of him.
"Well, I think the three little menaces here, should go to bed, and the rest… WE SHOULD HAVE A CONVERSATION!"
"Just a little longer, please, Chris! Stay…don't go right now!" Penny pleaded.
"Please." Patty added half asleep from his shoulder.
"You go to bed. I promise I won't leave before saying goodbye to you three, ok?"
Patty kissed him on the cheek "Night!" She said as her father grabbed her and orbed her out. Penny and Prue did the same thing before Paige and Wyatt took them to their bed.
Mom, dad, Phoebe and me stared at Chris nervously, he shrugged and buried his hands in his pockets, pacing around.
"So what did you guys have for dinner?" My mom asked and everybody looked at her as if she was a freak. "ok, ok… I just wanted to make sure you guys had some real food and not just stuffed yourself with snickers and I just wanted to release some tension."
"Mom… I am DEAD remember? I don't need to eat healthy!" Chris told her as Wyatt, Paige and Jake came back. "How could you lie to me like this, guys? I can't believe it!" He said indignant.
"We technically didn't lie, bro… We just never told you anything." Wyatt said humorously. Chris didn't seem to find it funny.
"You have any idea how RISKY this is? You know what the elders may do if they find out YOU are cloaking me from them?"
"We don't care! We'll deal with whatever they want to throw at us!" Phoebe said bravely.
"And what are they are going to do to YOU? I wanted to be with my son! I have the right! They took him away from me too many unfair times." Mom said as tears bathed her face "We are the charmed ones… they need us! They won't do anything to us. Please Chris, just relax and let us solve it all"
"WHAT? There is no way in hell I am going to let you pay for my mistakes. It's was MY decision to come down here, and I will take whatever punishment they have prepared for me!"
"Christopher! I am your father and I telling you, no I am ordering you to stay here, relax and let us solve it." He ordered him firmly and then put both of his hands on his cheeks forcing him to look at him in the eye "you don't have to take any of crap they give you! They owe you their lives! They owe you the world we have! And what did you get from them? To get stabbed and killed and punished! They have NO RIGHT to decide anything about your fate!" He said angry.
"Dad… I am old enough, you can't be ordering me around! I am not going to let you suffer because of me!"
"Please, Chris… no!" Mom sobbed.
"Who knows mom, maybe it won't be that bad!" Chris said bravely. Mom let go another sob. "Oh come on mom, dad told me that the meeting he had up there yesterday, didn't go that bad." Mom got even worst, I embraced her and she lean on me for comfort. "Oh, mom please… I am sure dad told you, Dad tell her." Chris pleaded; but looking around he saw the somber faces, still he didn't want to believe what was obvious. "Come on dad tell her."
"I don't need to tell her about the meeting, Chris, she was there with me. They summoned her too. And I did lie to you, Chris. I am sorry" Dad said softly, barely a whisper. Chris looked at him shock. "What did you want me to tell you? That the group of Elders that decided to "interrogate us" wasn't the friendliest one? That they were the worst of the worst up there! And that they've been looking for a way to get us for years now? And being them, they used almost every way in the book to make us tell them where you were? That they threaten with doing terrible things to us, to you and to everybody in the family if we didn't confess? That at one point the started electrocuting me with their lightening and forced your mom to watch, so she would tell them where you were? CHRIS THEY ARE NOT KIDDING, AND WE NOT GOING TO LET THEM GET A HAND ON YOU IF WE CAN PREVENT IT! EVEN IF I HAVE TO DIE DOING THAT! I AM NOT LETTING YOU DOWN AGAIN, SON! Even if I have to kill the whole underworld, even if I have to kill all the elders, whatever I have to do, I am not letting ANYONE EVER hurt YOU again! " My dad rant insanely. So that's how my dad looked after Chris died… scary.
Chris looked at him in awe, he hadn't been prepare for such explosive outburst or to think that some elders actually decided to torture his father in order to make his mother confess.
"Dad… all the more reason for me to leave, look till which extremes they have gone to find me! Torturing you? I can't let them do that! I won't let anyone hurt my family, and DEFINITELY not because of me!"
"Oh come on sweetie!" Paige added, since she seemed to be the only one that was still kind of holding things together "Your dad told you, those elders had been looking for something to get us since like forever. It wasn't because of you. What they are going to do to you is because of us, and our record! You have to let us solve this Chris, please… don't do this to us!" She asked, her eyes getting watery.
Chris looked at her sadly, oh ever so sadly. "I can't" he whispered. "I am sorry, but I can't let you guys pay for what I did."
"FUCK YOU!" Wyatt yelled and everybody looked at him surprised "Yeah, you heard me." He told Chris "FUCK YOU! I am sick and tired of both versions of you being a martyr, and you two are always willing to risk everything, and break every rule in the book to save someone else, but when it comes to saving yourself, you won't even try! Gee you won't even let someone else help you, and THAT'S NOT FAIR!" He yelled angry. "Trust me…I know that self esteem is not your strongest asset, I get that, and I am sorry if somehow that is my fault, I really am… but for FUCKING CHRIST SAKE Chris… put yourself in our shoes for just one PSYCHODELIC MINUTES and imagine that we MIGHT CARE ABOUT YOU AND WHAT HAPPENS TO YOU!" He yelled angry and heart broken "Why do you think Patty cried like she did? Cuz she found it funny? Why do you think Mom is shaking trying to restrain her tears over there? Why do you think Phoebe is howling like someone had just murdered her best friend? God even Paige is crying, how often does that happen? Look at dad, he looks a step away from loosing his mind… and he almost did that once… remember? Yeah it was when HE LOST YOU THE FIRST TIME! My brother over there, he is sooo numbed about all this, he is not even speaking. You must know all about that defense mechanism, is the same one you use, the same you are using NOW! So stop acting like a fucking brave zombie and realize that if we did this, is cuz we CARE and it would just KILL US, IDIOT, if something happens to you! WE DID THIS CUZ WE WERE SOO FREAKING WORRIED OF WHAT THE ELDERS MIGHT DO TO YOU AND CUZ WE WANTED TO HAVE HERE FOR A WHILE! Cuz… amazing news Chris, YOUR FAMILY LOVES YOU! It's time you start realizing that and start being part of a family, and let us help you… cuz you have no idea how much is going to hurt us if something happens to you" Wyatt started crying now. "and if all the reasons that I just gave you are not enough… then… all I can say is … I don't want you to go Chris! I really, really, really don't want you to go. And I am terrified about what the elders might do to you when they find you! I couldn't stand the thought of knowing that someone might hurt you and not doing something about it. "
Chris looked startled and confused, he didn't know what to say, but mom didn't let him object.
"Please honey stay till the spell wears off, just let us those few more days to try to solve this situation, to see if we can calm down the elders or something. Just a couple more day, till the 22; the 22 at 12 am the spell wears of. Give us till then and after that, I promise we'll all go with you up there and tell them what happen and deal with this together, as a family, as YOUR FAMILY, sweetie. PLEASE! Wouldn't you do the same for any of us?" She said pleadingly, looking into his eyes.
"Till the twenty second at midnight!" he agreed reluctantly, still I could see it in his eyes, he is me after all, he was scared and relief at the same time. I know Chris needed to know his family cared more than anything, he had face too many things alone and too many rejections from them when he came too the past.
My mom just jumped on top of him, monopolizing his entire presence, kissing him and crying out of relief. Everybody smiled.
After a while of silence and happy stares, mom and dad decided it was time to go to bed. Mom finally released the grip she had on Chris and Dad could hug him.
"I won't let anyone hurt anyone in my family, don't worry Chris." He told him. Chris nodded unconvinced.
"Sweet dreams, baby!" My mom kissed him and then did the same with me and Wyatt.
Then Paige hugged him tightly and expressively. "Thanks for staying, sweetie!"
Jake hugged him too. "It's really nice to still have you home, Chris."
"Don't you worry about anything! Just relax and enjoy this beautiful future you helped create, you deserve it sweetheart" Was what Phoebe said in her goodnight hug.
I went to put on my Pj when I came back Wyatt was fixing himself a snack, Chris was also in the kitchen sitting down with a blank look staring into the wall, I stared at him.
"OK, this is soooooooooooooooo depressing!" Wy said with his mouth full. "It's Saturday night, for god sake, are you guys going to stay staring blank all night?"
We both looked at him, he was smiling broadly.
"I'd say I go get a couple of movies and tons of snacks and we watch movies and play video games stuffing ourselves till dawn, to celebrate, what do you say?"
I looked at Chris. "I say I haven't done that in like a LONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGG time and it sounds like a great idea!" He said smiling.
April 18, 2018
Today… we have no excuses left, today, we have no reason to keep pretending none of this is really happening and that Chris will stay here forever and mom will never die.
We woke up late and we were having breakfast by ourselves, actually it was Chris, Wyatt and me. But Wy was in a "don't even dare talk to me until like five minutes after my second cup of coffee".
My sleepy eyes met Chris', and we didn't need a word to know what we were thinking (I guess that's one of the advantages of talking to yourself.) At the same second, we both knew this was the moment we had dreaded, this was the instant we should have "The talk" that might change our life forever.
"Mom!" He called. Mom opened the door and looked at him with an inquiring look.
"Yeah?"
"I think it's time you know all why I called Chris!" I said softly.
Nathy1000000
GRACIASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
So Chris inferiority complex siempre es cute! Que bueno que te gustan Wyatt and Emma! Wyatt es un sol enamorado… vos lo tendrias que enamorar en tu ficcion, heheh moriria por saber que pasa.
Todo bien, vemos si Emma te lo comparte (o mejor lo hacemos a sus espaldas) y le damos un par de clasesitas para que sepa que hacer con Emma. Totalmente mejor Chris de cualquier edad que no Chris.
Hehe que bueno que te reiste tanto que tu hermano penso que estabas loca, yo tambien me rio todo el tiempo y deben pensar que estoy rayada pro aca.
Falta para el event, van a pasar varias cosas en el medio! Dun dun….
Victorious Light
Yeah well that's what kids do, but they are so cute and innocent that is hard to stay mad at them.
You really liked the stories? Heheh I actually got them from my childhood stories, my mom says that one day I asked her if the planes didn't hit the dead people. And the moon, my cousin used to break everything so he said that about the moon being broken and that he hadn't break it. But yeah Chris upset for Leo was even cuter!
And the Pizza part… come one… what did you expected of Phoebe?
Yeah, I hope they will give the elders a piece of their mind soon.
Thanks for the review! I hope you liked this one.
Chris-Halliwell
Super fast. Just for you, throw me more questions.
EveryNineSecondsYouDoThisToMe
Yey, yey teach me! I will love to posses that skill oh big master! Well we'll go to a bar one of this days and seduce hot boy, I have to go seduce my capoeira teacher tonight! (actually I already did, and now its getting kind of boring!) Thanks… I hope this one rocked too.
teal-lover
Yeahhh and I updated again, I hope you liked the reactions! Hmmm I will do my best so nothing too terrible happens to our favorite dead witch lighter. "The talk" Next chapter…
You really liked the stories? Heheh I actually got them from my childhood stories, my mom says that one day I asked her if the planes didn't hit the dead people. And the moon, my cousin used to break everything so he said that about the moon being broken and that he hadn't break it. But yeah Chris upset for Leo was even cuter!
Pukah
Yay! Hehe yeah the girls are still the same, actually Penny is the one that babbles all the time and put her foot in her mouth, Patty is the one that is also obsessed with magic, so always knows what should or shouldn't be done, but she is still a kid and right now she didn't think of a way out, she just made sure that Chris wouldn't leave, still it was all Penny's fault cuz she was babbling all the time. It wouldn't have make sense for Penny to make the whole connection if we go home Chris is not protected.
I know I have to update the other fic, but I have a super writers block in the two fics I am procrastinating.
Pobrecita Maria del Mar, ademas tienen in serio problema con la R alla!
Yeah Chris sake… I actually really like that fiction, specially the last part (They are like 4 different stories, one continues the other), but is super duper long, so even if I would LOVE for you to check it out, I can understand your dilema. Well once you have time, you can take it one chapter at a time.
Hehehehe I am so glad you could nearly see Chris running in slow motion from the kitchen:
"N-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O!"
While she was saying it.
It's soo totally as I pictured it!
Ahh that is so cute what you tell me about my OC! I love when people say that or that I picture the characters really nicely. Even if Emma is not really a "CENTRAL" character, the cousins are, but its as you said, whenever I read a fiction of the future where Phoebe and Paige do not have husbands or kids I feel is so unreal and poor girls they deserve to have a family. I am glad you liked the ones I picked. See now you even tempt me more about you reading for Chris Sake, that one has a LOT of new family members and they get to be pretty important at some points and I would love to know what you think about them.
"Well, their background would be less consistant and their like for clothes far worse, probably." Hehe I don't think I talk too much about wardrobe in this fic, only their favorite colors, but I am flattered, and backgrounds? Well Prue's background will be a lot more developed in the sequel, and Paige and Jake the barely appear in here, but well, Paige and Jake story is the same in all my fics more or less… Ahhh now you spoke about Chris sake and I can't get it out of my head, there yeah each character has a much more developed background. But I do try to establish a personality and things about each character even if they are not in the fiction and then follow it. Like you do, thinking about the Teddy bears and how Chris grew up and all…
You know what? I forgot to review about the Teddy bears in your last update… I realized it as soon as I pressed send! AHHH it was SOOO good that you brought up Chris thinking about doing the Teddy bears spell!
"I mean that you have a knack (did I just made up this word?) for characters." No you didn't made up the word, I had no idea what it meant, but according to my "sinonimos" down here it means: skills, ability and blah. So thanksssssssssssssssssssssssss : ) you make me so happy.
Hehehe you always make me laugh… yeah I guess the double blessed made a hole in the sitting room from pacing in circles waiting for Emma.
HEHEHEH you make me laugh so much! Send crazy Chris over and explain to him that he has to wait and just act as a waiter! Though no… I am sorry, I can't finish my fiction like that, I am probably going to need the elders for the sequel, maybe I kill them by the end of the sequel.
But don't tell Leo about your idea, cuz as you see, he is finding it really tempting right now!
I LOVEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD the mantra thingy I found it so funny.
Ohh poor Chris with his dead friends… you are soo funny, yet sooo morbid!
Yeah I know all about the cookies and tea for the dead and Psycho Wyatt. (that heads up… he is coming back for the sequel! )
I don't want Chris to disappear either…. I know he is cute… don't blame it on me, blame it on the elders (die elders, die, die die die!). He is Pipers child, we know that means he is never going to have a NORMAL life, Piper bugged everybody to much with her desires for a normal life.
"The talk" is next chapter… impatient!
HEhehe I hope you liked this!
Nikki14u
Well there you go, just for you I enlighten you a little of what happened with the mean, mean elders! What do you think?
Make Chris a little bit less dead? Undeadinize someone? Is that a verb? Hehehe, you'll see… you'll see what happens. The story finishes on April 26th (Chris and my birthday!), if you still have a question that won't be answer in the sequel (that I am already planning since someone gave me a great idea) I'll gladly answer it, but actually to be nice and cuz you asked and cuz I love spoiling people (so if you want some suspense don't ask) that question WILL be answer by April 25th. Wanna know how it will be answered?
Thanks… I hope you liked this one too.
DrewFullerFanLife
Thanks, well here is more, I hope you like it too. And also thanks for your review on "For the love of Chris".
FRENCH "Butt kicking" SPARKLES:
I know you are Taurus, that's why I told you we were the best! Of course we should split the profit… I always have problems with Fed Ex!
Hehe yeah that was exactly what I wanted to express there, like you wanna hate Penny for forgetting and Patty for opening her mouth, but they just did it out of such innocence that you can't really get mad at them! Here you have the update you were in need and you that like kicks and energy balls, I just ended writing the longest action sequence in the world for "4 chris sake!" it drilled my brain, but I was all writing it thinking how you always ask for longer action scenes and hoping you would like it. Now I have to re-read it, but I think I don't want to write "energy ball" again for a long time.
Well I am glad you liked the way I captured childhood. I love kids (I think that shows!) and I have lots of baby cousins (or I could blame it on school that I am studying the psychology of kids and adolescents, but I think that is actually killing my maternal instinct and driving me crazy!)
I hope you liked this one too and that you are looking forward to some action.
ilovedrew88
Yeah… but he had to find out someday…at least they convinced him to stay a few more days! I am so glad you thought the girls were cute! I thought the part when he was playing with them was cute too, specially him, I was re-reading it and I was like AHHH I wanna marry that guy! THANKS… I hope you liked this too.
Polo Mint Midget
Ahh its soo cute to know this is one of your favorite Chris (absolutely drools!) fictions, I am glad you are better and I hope this cheers you up too!
phoebe turner
Yeah I know, it's hard to explain it in just a few lines, and besides, now I have evolve it a LOT more… so hopefully I'll write it (I already have a draft of some parts), you'll read it and like it. Yeah and Cole is going to play a super important role actually! I am so dying to write that story that I want to finish this one quickly, but I hope you liked this chappie and of course that you will like the other, after all I would have to credit all to you if it's a good fiction (if its bad, we'll have to blame it on me, cuz the idea was good!)