Damn Girl!: Chapter Four.
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((Disclaimer: See previous chapters))
Summary: There is a new girl at Hogwarts, she's Slytherin, she's beautiful, and she's bad! What else do you expect Draco to do? He can whip away the drool, but its just gunna come back. But what happens when bad becomes pure evil?
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A/N: This chapter is dedicated to all my reviewers, mostly to AlExAnDra tAsSInArI, without whom I wouldn't have update this so quickly, coz I was kind of stuck on what to do next. Thanks sweetie, your a helpful angel.
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ATTENTION: I have a site which I'm using to run Harry Potter writing competitions. If anyone would like to enter the site is http:// beautilicious.proboards29.com, It'll be alot of fun, hope to see you there.
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I leant against the wall impatiently as I waited for Hermione to arrive for Potions. It was strange, she was getting close to being late, Snape would be here any second.
During our detention last night, which we attented after our little confessions, Hermione had made a promise that She was going to tell Potter about us as soon as she could.
Maybe he killed her, I was thinking, chuckling to myself as I thought about how angry Potter would be to find out his girlfriend was in love with me, me as in Draco Malfoy.
I caught sight of Hermione, as Pansy came over to talk to me.
"So Draco, how's it going?" Pansy asked, twirling a quill in her fingers. She dropped it, on purpose I knew. "Opps," She said, as if I didn't know she was trying to flirt.
"Better pick that up," I said to her and turned back to Hermione. My eyes darted to her hand, it was attached to Potter's.
I bubbled under the surface. WHAT IS SHE DOING HOLDING HIS HAND? My mind screamed.
My eye caught hers, she quickly looked away, pretending to be looking in her book-bag.
'That bitch lied to you,' came my mind's voice.
'I know,' I told it. 'How could she do that?'
'Go hit Potter,' tried the voice.
'I think I'll be fine standing here hating him and his wretched girlfriend,' I said back and entered the dungeon as Snape opened the door and barked for us to get in and be quiet.
I took my seat, and Hermione took hers next to me.
"Morning Draco," She said.
"Whatever," I muttered and occupied myself with my books.
"Are you ok?" Hermione asked, as if nothing was wrong.
"Am I ok?" I asked in a deadly whisper, glaring at her. "You lied to me." "I'm sorry Draco, I'm trying to find the right moment," She said, her voice as quiet as mine.
"I thought you loved me?"
"I do."
"Well you're not very good at showing it, are you?" I shot and looked forward as Snape stared screeching his intructions.
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I didn't talk to Hermione until she pulled me aside after lunch. She pulled my into a cleaner closet as I was exiting the Great Hall.
"Granger, this place is disgusting," I said, looking at a dirty bucket, and quickly looking away.
"It's a private place, that's all I need," She said, getting a little lippy.
I scowled at her, and folded my arms. "And what is it you request?"
"Your forgiveness," She replied, looking sadder as she said the words.
"Are you sure? You could run along and cry to Potter," I shot.
"Draco, don't be like that."
"Don't be like what?" I snapped. "Your the one cheating on your boyfriend."
With that I stalked out of the cleaning closet and joined the crowd outside, leaving Hermione gaping at my back.
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By the end of the day I felt terrible, not about what I had said, but about what Hermione had done to me. I felt so betrayed. And on top of that I had alot of homework.
Taking my top four assignments and my writing materials, I made my way to the library. Surprise, surprise, Potter and Hermione were sitting at an open table. Potter whispering things into Hermione's ear, while she giggled.
I had never seen Hermione giggle like that before, it reminded me so much of Pansy that I had to get away.
I turned on my heel and rushed back down the corridor, searching for an empty classroom. The last thing I saw before I left was Hermione look up, pain in her eyes.
If she's so upset, then why doesn't she leave that ass-kissing loser. I loved her, I even told her I did, has he ever done that. Everyone knew that Potter and Hermione got together orginially as a dare by Weasley, but then they decided that they liked each other. No-one ever said anything about love.
She said she was in love with me, was she lying then too? This was one thing I never wanted to get into. Boyfriend-girlfriend problems. That's why I only date slytherins, they're so less complicated.
I turned into a classroom and threw my arms contents to the ground, frustrated with everything at that moment.
Suddenly I heard a voice raise from the library. "YOU WHAT?"
"DON'T YELL AT ME HARRY," another voice yelled.
"YOU LOVE MALFOY?"
"OUT OF MY LIBRARY," was the voice of the librarian, as I guessed.
I heard footsteps come running down the corridor, they turned into my dark room and slipped on a piece of parchment, which just so happened to belong to me. The person when down with an ear-spliting scream.
"Ouch," The familair voice said as she tried to get up.
"Let me help you," I said, helping her up. In the light I saw it was Hermione, I let go of her hand.
"Draco?" she asked.
"Nuh, I'm Father Christmas," I said sarcastically.
"Shut up," She said, embarrassed, as she lightly punch my arm.
I saw something or her face glint in the little light. It was a tear. I stepped forward and wiped it away. "Are you ok?" I asked.
She nodded, but I knew she wasn't. She had like Potter, a little.
"You heard?" She asked.
I nodded too. "Yup."
She wrapped her arms around my waist. "I'm so sorry," She said. "I never meant to hurt you. I love you."
I pulled her into a warm hug, kissing her temple. "I love you too."
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Sorry it's so short, but my neck hurts so I have to go lie down and I couldn't be bothered to finish more later.
Anyway review if you wanna,
Love Thai xox
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Special Thankies:
JaM:: It's in the DM/HG section because that's what it is, if you would read on in the next chapter, you would have learnt that. As I have explained, time and time again.
sweetie2:: Thanks, I'm glad you think it's good. I hope you liked the update.
skotos:: I take your contructive criticism and I she reply and use as much of it as I can. I can't really see how it is a Mary-Sue, it doesn't come under barely any of the categories a Mary-Sue holds. I have had Mary-Sue's in the past and they are very much not like this. Do you even know what a Mary-Sue is? Maybe you should have read on, my characters have quite alot of flaws.
If I didn't notice that Hermione and Draco are OOC I should shoot myself in the head because if no-one could see that they would have to be the world's biggest dumb-ass. I know they are, I did it on purpose. What kind of IC Hermione would like Draco and vice versa, duh!
Ok I don't know how you write your stories but I tend to find that if I descripe everything too much the story gets boring, who wants to know what colour the dust in on the ground and how many strands of hair Draco has on his head, not me. J.K Doesn't do it, no-one does it. It's plain boring. You may find it interesting, but there is a line that you should know about, like in good and bad, there's a line. There IS such thing as TOO MUCH description.
And on the beta note, I don't like them, it takes forever for me to get my story back and I couldn't give a shit about spelling, grammar and so on, I like my stories the way they are, simple and un corrected.
oreo69not96:: Thanks for loving my chapter, your a sweetie.
GlitterGreen:: Draco is hott aye. Thanks for thinking my stories great.
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ATTENTION: check my other "ATTENETION" at the top, please please please. *kisses.*
***
((Disclaimer: See previous chapters))
Summary: There is a new girl at Hogwarts, she's Slytherin, she's beautiful, and she's bad! What else do you expect Draco to do? He can whip away the drool, but its just gunna come back. But what happens when bad becomes pure evil?
***
A/N: This chapter is dedicated to all my reviewers, mostly to AlExAnDra tAsSInArI, without whom I wouldn't have update this so quickly, coz I was kind of stuck on what to do next. Thanks sweetie, your a helpful angel.
***
ATTENTION: I have a site which I'm using to run Harry Potter writing competitions. If anyone would like to enter the site is http:// beautilicious.proboards29.com, It'll be alot of fun, hope to see you there.
***
I leant against the wall impatiently as I waited for Hermione to arrive for Potions. It was strange, she was getting close to being late, Snape would be here any second.
During our detention last night, which we attented after our little confessions, Hermione had made a promise that She was going to tell Potter about us as soon as she could.
Maybe he killed her, I was thinking, chuckling to myself as I thought about how angry Potter would be to find out his girlfriend was in love with me, me as in Draco Malfoy.
I caught sight of Hermione, as Pansy came over to talk to me.
"So Draco, how's it going?" Pansy asked, twirling a quill in her fingers. She dropped it, on purpose I knew. "Opps," She said, as if I didn't know she was trying to flirt.
"Better pick that up," I said to her and turned back to Hermione. My eyes darted to her hand, it was attached to Potter's.
I bubbled under the surface. WHAT IS SHE DOING HOLDING HIS HAND? My mind screamed.
My eye caught hers, she quickly looked away, pretending to be looking in her book-bag.
'That bitch lied to you,' came my mind's voice.
'I know,' I told it. 'How could she do that?'
'Go hit Potter,' tried the voice.
'I think I'll be fine standing here hating him and his wretched girlfriend,' I said back and entered the dungeon as Snape opened the door and barked for us to get in and be quiet.
I took my seat, and Hermione took hers next to me.
"Morning Draco," She said.
"Whatever," I muttered and occupied myself with my books.
"Are you ok?" Hermione asked, as if nothing was wrong.
"Am I ok?" I asked in a deadly whisper, glaring at her. "You lied to me." "I'm sorry Draco, I'm trying to find the right moment," She said, her voice as quiet as mine.
"I thought you loved me?"
"I do."
"Well you're not very good at showing it, are you?" I shot and looked forward as Snape stared screeching his intructions.
---
I didn't talk to Hermione until she pulled me aside after lunch. She pulled my into a cleaner closet as I was exiting the Great Hall.
"Granger, this place is disgusting," I said, looking at a dirty bucket, and quickly looking away.
"It's a private place, that's all I need," She said, getting a little lippy.
I scowled at her, and folded my arms. "And what is it you request?"
"Your forgiveness," She replied, looking sadder as she said the words.
"Are you sure? You could run along and cry to Potter," I shot.
"Draco, don't be like that."
"Don't be like what?" I snapped. "Your the one cheating on your boyfriend."
With that I stalked out of the cleaning closet and joined the crowd outside, leaving Hermione gaping at my back.
---
By the end of the day I felt terrible, not about what I had said, but about what Hermione had done to me. I felt so betrayed. And on top of that I had alot of homework.
Taking my top four assignments and my writing materials, I made my way to the library. Surprise, surprise, Potter and Hermione were sitting at an open table. Potter whispering things into Hermione's ear, while she giggled.
I had never seen Hermione giggle like that before, it reminded me so much of Pansy that I had to get away.
I turned on my heel and rushed back down the corridor, searching for an empty classroom. The last thing I saw before I left was Hermione look up, pain in her eyes.
If she's so upset, then why doesn't she leave that ass-kissing loser. I loved her, I even told her I did, has he ever done that. Everyone knew that Potter and Hermione got together orginially as a dare by Weasley, but then they decided that they liked each other. No-one ever said anything about love.
She said she was in love with me, was she lying then too? This was one thing I never wanted to get into. Boyfriend-girlfriend problems. That's why I only date slytherins, they're so less complicated.
I turned into a classroom and threw my arms contents to the ground, frustrated with everything at that moment.
Suddenly I heard a voice raise from the library. "YOU WHAT?"
"DON'T YELL AT ME HARRY," another voice yelled.
"YOU LOVE MALFOY?"
"OUT OF MY LIBRARY," was the voice of the librarian, as I guessed.
I heard footsteps come running down the corridor, they turned into my dark room and slipped on a piece of parchment, which just so happened to belong to me. The person when down with an ear-spliting scream.
"Ouch," The familair voice said as she tried to get up.
"Let me help you," I said, helping her up. In the light I saw it was Hermione, I let go of her hand.
"Draco?" she asked.
"Nuh, I'm Father Christmas," I said sarcastically.
"Shut up," She said, embarrassed, as she lightly punch my arm.
I saw something or her face glint in the little light. It was a tear. I stepped forward and wiped it away. "Are you ok?" I asked.
She nodded, but I knew she wasn't. She had like Potter, a little.
"You heard?" She asked.
I nodded too. "Yup."
She wrapped her arms around my waist. "I'm so sorry," She said. "I never meant to hurt you. I love you."
I pulled her into a warm hug, kissing her temple. "I love you too."
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Sorry it's so short, but my neck hurts so I have to go lie down and I couldn't be bothered to finish more later.
Anyway review if you wanna,
Love Thai xox
***
Special Thankies:
JaM:: It's in the DM/HG section because that's what it is, if you would read on in the next chapter, you would have learnt that. As I have explained, time and time again.
sweetie2:: Thanks, I'm glad you think it's good. I hope you liked the update.
skotos:: I take your contructive criticism and I she reply and use as much of it as I can. I can't really see how it is a Mary-Sue, it doesn't come under barely any of the categories a Mary-Sue holds. I have had Mary-Sue's in the past and they are very much not like this. Do you even know what a Mary-Sue is? Maybe you should have read on, my characters have quite alot of flaws.
If I didn't notice that Hermione and Draco are OOC I should shoot myself in the head because if no-one could see that they would have to be the world's biggest dumb-ass. I know they are, I did it on purpose. What kind of IC Hermione would like Draco and vice versa, duh!
Ok I don't know how you write your stories but I tend to find that if I descripe everything too much the story gets boring, who wants to know what colour the dust in on the ground and how many strands of hair Draco has on his head, not me. J.K Doesn't do it, no-one does it. It's plain boring. You may find it interesting, but there is a line that you should know about, like in good and bad, there's a line. There IS such thing as TOO MUCH description.
And on the beta note, I don't like them, it takes forever for me to get my story back and I couldn't give a shit about spelling, grammar and so on, I like my stories the way they are, simple and un corrected.
oreo69not96:: Thanks for loving my chapter, your a sweetie.
GlitterGreen:: Draco is hott aye. Thanks for thinking my stories great.
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ATTENTION: check my other "ATTENETION" at the top, please please please. *kisses.*