A/N: wee so happy that you went in here to read my next chappie! This one's better than the last one… or maybe not because the last one was just sad. Oops! I'm gonna shut up now... PLEASE remember to read my A/N in the end when you're done. There's a surprise and review answers
Pairings:
Author: Elnora
Disclaimer: Me do not own se One Piece, se One Piece belongs to sensei-Oda.
Remember thinking and 'speaking'
Part V
Dusk spread itself over the sea. Any expectable sound from birds or the rest of the crew faded slowly as every creature would get to sleep. The weeping whales platonic song covered the deepening sorrows of the sea. The big and unbelievable forces of the weather rocked the flying lamb steadily whispering threats in the wind.
This feeling reached to the bone. It made you alert for any disturbance in the nature. It actually came once in a while. Marines or pirates stealthily snooping around after the infamous straw-hat pirates…
A hand reached for another. Every last light on a cheek disappeared as the soft and electric orange hair seek into the shadows. A forehead placed on a distant shoulder. Every known fact of them slips into darkness.
'I'm sorry…' He whispered. She felt like snorting but his words sounded like it came from somebody more honest than what only reaches the eye or the surface of feelings.
She listened to the music of the sea, while it sings with the sky. She clutched his hand like she'd crush it, though it was a priceless possession, now, there in her hand. She ripped her hand out of his excusing the rip-out with beginning to whipe away the tears on her cheeks
'Tell me why I shouldn't hate you.' She said darkly.
The girl lifted her head a bit, only to be greeted by cold tears.
I'm so tired of all these tears… All these years… All these whining emotions…
The question hung in the air, but they both knew there was no question harder to answer.
'I cannot tell you a thousand things like I want to… I sit still, hoping, that one day you will love me back…' He whispered very silently.
'Why did you do that? How can you hate me like that if you want me to love you back?'
Zoro didn't meet her glare. He looked at the floor.
'When the only person I have ever really cared for, yells to the very detail, what a fucking monster I am… The world comes down on me. I search for abstract solution only to find out that I have made it worse.' He continues just above whisper.
She sighed and laughed ironically.
'What could possibly be funny?' It was Zoro's turn to get angry.
'Me… me who thought I was the problem…' She whispered very lowly. Not really for the swordsman to hear.
'What do you mean?'
'I lied to you when I told you I didn't feel the same way…' She spoke just above whisper.
He snorted lowly.
'Why?'
'Because I could not bear to loose another one… letting you into my heart, as the thing I want to the most, would only make it harder… once you die. When Bellemere died I swore that I would never allow myself to trust another human being, other than Nojiko.'
Especially a man…' She sighed.
Darkness was complete. He couldn't even see her bright orange hair anymore. Only emotions and a touching hand could tell.
'I love you so much.'
'I do too.'
Tears streamed down Nami's face.
'Hold me Zoro.' She said loudly and buried herself in his chest. He quickly grabbed the fast-falling Nami landing in his arms and hung on to her.
'I would never hurt you… I'm not like Arloong or anybody else who would ever fuck with you. I protect you with my life. I'm just giving you empty threats because the truth is too painful.'
Nami pressed her eyelids together but she couldn't stop the sobs. She cried out. He held on to her. She felt so dumb crying in front of him. Crying like that. All the memories about Arloong came back.
He just sat holding her for a moment. He kissed her gently on the top of her head and stroked her. She smelled so good. She was such a beautiful woman and she was finally in his arms.
Unbelievable after how they had treated each other.
'I'll never forget those horrible things he did to me.' She startled him a bit waking him up from his thoughts.
'You… You know, you can always tell me… I heard it's supposed to help… you know – to talk… I know what it's like being afraid of trusting and loving again.'
'You really loved Kuina didn't you?'
'We were friends. I wasn't even 12 when she died. Love wasn't anything I thought about at that moment. But she was my one true friend. I always thought about the many great things we were going to experience together in the future…'
She dried her eyes
'You're right… I think the same… What if she was still alive.' She did one last sob and rose.
'I need to get some sleep.' She said sleepily.
She can't go now.. We were just talking stuff..
As she left, he quickly got up to get her back, but she had disappeared into the bathroom. Zoro stared into the darkness. He had never experienced letting go of so many emotions in one night. He sighed sadly and dropped his back on the wall just besides the door to wait. He dropped to the floor.
Was she taking a bath in there or what?
The swordsman cracked an eye open suddenly. I really had no idea of his presence. He blinked a few times and rubbed his eyes before he remembered last night. He had been sleeping for gods know how long outside the bathroom. That's so typical.
Gods, the bitch could've woken me up for Christ's sake…
He rubbed his twisted hurting back as he rose. How long had he been sleeping? He scratched the back of his head and headed for the galley.
So what's going to happen tomorrow? I haven't got time for ending like this every night just to get close to that girl.
He undressed and lifted the blanket to get a nice night sleep. Get away from all of this for just a couple of hours. The question was only; could he even sleep?
As he was about to spread himself out over the whole bed, his hand touched some soft skin.
Shit I got into the wrong room!
Zoro jumped backwards quickly and ran out of the room just to notice his stuff lying on the table inside the room. He was really too tired to know what was going on, so he resumed his way to his bed. He lifted the blanket slowly.
She was in his bed.
A dark beautiful figure turned around and rubbed her eyes. She pulled the blanket to cover her a bit.
'Mmh… Zoro is that you?' She said gruffly and opened her eyes slowly.
'What are you doing in my bed?'
'Mmh I don't know.'
'Well I think-'
'Don't think… come here.' Nami pulled his hand down to her.
God was that woman dressed at all?
She pulled him close, and kissed him. She pressed her naked body close to his. He put his arms around her and they broke the kiss. He looked at her bluntly.
'Where the hell were you?' She said suddenly.
'I was sleeping in front of the god damn bathroom! You never came out!'
'Of course I came out! I expected you to be in the bed when I got to your room, but it was empty.' She said through a grin.
How was I supposed to notice you in this darkness?
You're so stupid…' She whispered softly and kissed him before he could say anything.
He examined her body with his rough hands. She was so small he was afraid to hurt her. He let go of her. She got on top of him and kissed him again.
'Don't stop.'
'But I'll hurt you.'
'Of course you wont hurt me you idiot...
Just be gentle.' She whispered.
He grabbed her back and stroked her skin. How could it be so soft to touch?
She kissed him on his neck and worked her way down to his stomach and up again. his muscular body shivered a bit and he was very tense. She met his face again and he brought her into a deep kiss. He rolled around with him on top and smiled at her.
As they continued feeling about on each other, she pulled of his boxers and he slowly got up in her. She moaned and they kissed passionately.
It had been too long, they both thought.
He clutched her in his arms and lead his mouth to kiss her ear and whisper…
'Love me tomorrow again.'
The End
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………duduu…
…...Just a second…..
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Just swallowing the story I just wrote….
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Still swallowing…
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OH MY GOD….
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nah, it was good wasn't it?
I've never written a sex scene… If you're actually able to call it that. And I haven't written a story in ages where they say 'I love you'…
Think it turned out well.. SO cute…..
So….
…..guys I guess this is the end..
I know it's where it was getting very good, but also, stopping here was just the perfect place. I could not picture a continuation.. but maybe a sequel? woah, haven't thought of that..
ANYways, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL OF YOUR WONDERFUL REVIEWS! the story hadn't got this good(as I think it is) if it weren't for those.
One reviewer gets a big response:
It's Neko Yuri, lol, cause.. You've really got to realise that Zoro's actual name is Zoro and NOT Zolo, cuz that's 4kids, and they SUCK.
And concerning Ruffy, in my country he is called Ruffy, and on japaneese he calls himself Ruffy, and I think it's prettier than Luffy, so there you go, I'm not gonna improve on those things, cuz I don't see it as improvement :)
Also to be honest – I actually don't read the stories if they spell his name Zolo, cuz you know...it's just too ugly.. Sorry if I've offended anybody.
Also Neko Yuri, I've read all the animebooks three times, and as you can read in my fic I know my One Piece, so don't you think it's a little weird that I can't even spell the maincharacters names right? hehe :) anyway thanks for the review.
Thanks to my wonderful reviewers:
tea, reader, Tiramisu, yvonne, Astarte Katz, monoke kitsune, Kyte, Kid Blader, ennov, Botea, MononokeKitsune, Watergoddesskasey, bijoukaiba and Phoenix Wolf 07.
pathatlon.. Du er sådan en kegle, I alle de reviews du har givet mig skriver du at du ka li slutningen!
And to the one's that needs a response:
Gothywolfie: ow you left me such kind reviews. But you know, about my Star Wars reference, you're quite right! But his name is Anakin (Ani) and not Annie. And her name is Padmé and not Padame. Hehe, just a note.
Now hurry up and add another chapter to 'How can I Hate you if I already Love you?' yourself!
Z X N, good you thought it was funny, hehe, when I think I write something funny I laugh at it, but I don't know if anyone else gets it
Firendless Girl, Weee cute review! woo that's one of the best reviews I've gotten!
Netartemisa, Sorry for all the swearing, I just can't help it.. I swear a lot on a daily basis so it's kinda in my language :)
nikuwadoko, well, I've gone through part 3 once again, as far as I remember hehe, I hope it's better now. Confused at the dishes part? was that the whole part with Zoro or what? cuz the point was really that Zoro was drying of the plated Nami was washing and apparently she was too slow to his temper, so he would almost rip it out of her hans before she was done washing it..
Tiger Ace, glad tou didn't find them OOC. Sanji is hard not to keep too much in character you know. I'm gonna work on that. Sometimes you just get this picture that Sanji doesn't have anything else on his mind than food and women.
wooo , lol you should really create an profile with that name! again, sorry about the fucking! I don't even think I notice it when I write it, but I can assure you, I've only used it on necessary places after I read your review.
ChinaWings, Yes, a blushing Zoro is a rare sight... The Rainy Garden was supposed to really happen... but you know… It's really up to you to decide why it's called that, but I thought that maybe it could be because this garden Nami and Zoro is in(you know their heads or whatever) it seems nice there, but they really are sad, so it rains in there...woah..
PS: I'm still working on making longer chapters but I'm not that good.
PLEASE REVIEW!
Also tell me if you think a sequel would be an idea or if it's too much?