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Genre:
Action/Adventure, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Disclaimer:
"Martin Mystery" and "Totally Spies: Undercover" is owned by Marathon
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PG-13 or T rating for Offensive Language and Nudity
Chapter II - Where the Hell are we?
In the meantime, Marty had finished playing Divine Intervention on his guitar. Alex applauded in appreciation as Marty returned the guitar to the corner of the room. As he was doing so, his green guitar pick fell off his hand and dropped to the floor. He bent down to pick it up and looked up. Marty was not in the villa anymore. In fact, he himself don't know where he was. His guitar and Alex was nowhere to be seen. He looked around, the villa had changed into a hallway of a mansion. The red carpeting was dusty, the corners were filled with cobwebs. The white walls turned pale yellow, which was peeling off and filled with giant cracks, aged nude paintings were hanging on the yellow walls and the air was musty, almost like your average haunted house you see in those award-winning Hollywood movies.
"What the hell happened here?" Marty asked himself as he looked around. In the meantime, in another part of the mansion, Alex was facing the same fate as Marty, but it was about to get worse.
"Alexandra..." A faint whisper emanated from the distance. Alex turned around, but there was no one but her.
"Marty? Sam? Clover?" She looked around, trying to find the source of the voice.
The voice called out her name again. This time, got really scared that she ran desperately for her life, not caring where she was or where she was going. Passing by closed doors and windows Her legs grew tired and stopped. It was a dead end. She had nowhere to run.
"Damn.." Alex cursed. She turned around and gulped.
A man walked out from the shadows. His good looks, brown eyes, short black hair, a strong body built and his mix American and Latin features can only mean one thing, Alex's old boyfriend, Jeremy Edwardo Matthews. wearing an unbuttoned denim jacket on top of a white shirt, jeans and Black Nike Air Max Trainers. Jerry's mother, who was born in Panama, was married to his American father before settling in Santa Monica. He was raised as a tough, strong but yet a quiet and modest teenager.
She timidly looked at him in the eye and recalled meeting him at Biology class 2 years ago, accidentally spilling sodium chloride on his white lab jacket. Since then, he had been dating her until the day where he was killed in a terrible car accident, leaving Alex heartbroken, until now.
"What do you want Jeremy?" Alex asked with a nasty tone, expecting Jeremy to do something immoral again.
"I just want you..." Jeremy went closer into Alex's soft lips and gently kissed her. He felt very human despite of him being a ghost. It slowly grew into something more as she allowed Jeremy's tongue to enter her mouth. The smooching stopped. Alex looked at Jeremy with loving eyes. All of a sudden, she pushed him away
"Get away from me you creep! I hate you. You tried to kill Marty" She yelled But did she really mean it?
"I know you still love me Alexandra. I can see it."
Alex froze. Her mouth was wide open and her eyes widen in shock. How did he knew her secrets? Can really ghosts read minds? Or maybe it was a sick attempt to scare her? The questions raced through her mind. "Well... I...No... you're dead... and plus I have Marty now!"
Jeremy smiled. Somehow, he managed to frightened her with his mind reading ability. "You love Martin because he loves you. Not for who he is...right? Come with me Alex. We'll be happy together."
Alex just stood there dumbly. Her eyes fixed at Jerry's face as he look back at her with a creepy smirk. In the meantime, Marty was timidly exploring the hallway, looking for Alex, Sam and Clover. But they were nowhere to be seen. He then heard a sound, it was coming from the open door infront of him. It sounded like a shower running. In his mind, he taught that Sam was in the shower. Without hesitation, he opened the door and slowly barge into the bathroom. Inside, Marty was disgusted by the appearance of the bathroom. The tiled walls and floors were filled with mildew, the mirror was broken and the sink was filled with dirty brown water. Marty didn't dare to look at the toilet, as he taught there was something disgusting inside. The tub was covered by an aged shower curtain. He slowly uncovered the curtain. There was no one in the bathtub except a running shower. Marty was a little relief.
"Marty?" Said a voice. Marty turned around. It was Sam, covered with nothing but bright green slime. It was all over her legs, body, back, butt, face, hair, everywhere. Marty's face turned red while examining all of Sam's features on her uncovered body
"Oh man Sammy! You're..." Marty pauses, trying to think of a word "...Green! And can you please put on a towel"
Instead of doing what Marty had requested, she smiled sweetly and pushed him into the tub with her green slimy hands.
"What the hell are you doing Samantha?" Marty yelled as Sam tied Marty's wrists and ankles together with rope she had. With the shower raining on his face, Sam turned on the faucet. He realized that Sam was trying to drown him. He struggled to get the rope off him while she stood there and laugh vilely at Marty. The tub continued to fill to the brim. Marty took a deep breath as the water covered him whole. He managed to loosen the rope on his hands and managed freed himself. He plunged out of the water punched Sam in the face and removed himself from the tub. Sam fell down to the floor, knocking her unconscious. Marty coughed some of the water out from his lungs.
"Look who has the last laugh now Sam." Said Marty whilst leaving the room. At about the same time, Alex ran and ran continuously for about 5 minutes, running away from Jeremy. She was about to turn left into another hallway when, OOFF! Her face crashed into somebody else, she lost her balance and fell to the dusty red carpeting. Alex looked up, it was Marty. For once, she had never felt relief in her entire life.
Marty opened his eyes. "Alex?"
"Marty!" Alex exclaimed.
The terrified couple stood up and hugged tightly when met.
"Oh my gosh, I'm so glad to see you" Marty hugged and kissed Alex at a hasty pace. It's like he had not seen her for over a decade
"Marty, we need to get help now"
Marty paused and scratched his head. He then remembered his WOOHP Communicator Wallet given to him by Jerry during his training lesson "My wallet!"
Marty removed his black WOOHP Communicator Wallet, the mens version of the X-powder, from the inside pocket of his jacket. He impatiently opened it and a green hologram of the WOOHP Director Jeremy "Jerry" Lewis, (Jerry is short of Jeremy) in a suit and tie emerged from the screen.
"What's seems to be the problem spies?" He asked with his arms open, visibly quite calm.
"Jerry! We need help." Marty requested "Alex's dead ex-boyfriend is mugging us."
"You mean a ghost? Right, I'll call the professionals and they'll look into the matter."
The hologram vanished right infront of their eyes. Marty closed his wallet and kept it in the inside pocket of his denim jacket. "Don't you think it's kinda wired that Jerry is also the name of your ex-boyfriend?"
Ah, secrets revealed. Sorry if that was a little short for ya. So what do you think? Good? bad? awful? average? Mistakes? Need more improvement? Please don't hesitate to press that review button to give me your comment. Or flame, or whatever you wanna get off your chest.
Mathew: Oh don't worry, Sammy is just fine. BTW don't you meant that you can't believe what you've just read? LOL!
Ominae: Thanks for looking out for that.
Nicole: Thanks! Finally a 3rd review. Here's your 2nd chapter. Please stay tuned for the whole 5 chapters. Thanks again!
Again thanks for the reviews. It's really hard to get reviews these days ya know.
Marty
