Thanks for the reviews. BTW if you wanna know who or what Martin Mystery is, you guys should catch it on Nickelodeon.

Some locations and information might be false or inaccurate.

Genre:
Action/Adventure, Horror, Romance, Suspense

Disclaimer:
"Martin Mystery" and "Totally Spies: Undercover" is owned by Marathon
The 2004 Pontiac GTO is a copyright of GM
Dodge, The Durango SUV is a property of Daimler Chrysler

PG-13 or T rating for Offensive Language and Nudity


Chapter III - Here Comes Martin Mystery

Before Alex could answer, the couple heard a loud crash coming from behind. Meanwhile at about 1730 hours, 5 minutes after Marty made the call, a white, Canadian registered 2001 Dodge Durango SXT SUV with The Center's logo on the front driver's door halted outside the spies' villa. The Durango then turned left into the driveway, stopping right beside Sam's red 2004 Pontiac GTO sports car. (I really like the SUV they used in "It came from inside the box" episode. I think it has a combine design of the Chevy Suburban and the Dodge Durango)

"Here it is, house number 2536 West Sunny Avenue, West Beverly Hills.(I made that up)" Martin said as he walked off the SUV. He was is a black tee on top of a red and yellow fire pattern long sleeved, zipped-up jacket, a pair of grey cargo pants and red and white Nike Air Force 2 shoes.

The front passenger door open. It was Diana, dressed in a pink and white jacket, a tight pair of jeans and a pair of pink and white Nike Ace trainers "Man this place gives me the creeps!" She stated, looking at the dark sky.

Martin Mystery, the top agent in a top secret organization call "The Center." This goofy Blondie was obsessed with aliens, ghost or anything out of the ordinary. The childlike teen hates insects, chases after beautiful women and likes to annoy his step-sister

Diana Lombard on the other hand is nothing like his brother. The brown headed (Finally, I got that right!) 16 year-old was serious and brainy, well most of the time. She doesn't get along with her step-brother very well but they do have their moments whenever Martin saves her from danger.

Java The Caveman is the brawn of the trio. He could destroy any plank or push any big rock within seconds. Even though he is over 200 000 years old, he is still alive and well. Despite his tremendous strength, he strangely afraid of cats.

Together they made a great team in combating ghosts and aliens from harming people and the earth. Once stumbled into Marty and the spies during a strange mission in Chicago, they are now good friends, except for Marty and Martin that is. Java was the last to leave the SUV. He was in a yellow short sleeved shirt, black pants and a pair of black Nike Angus. The Mystery crew then strolled up to the front door. Diana rang the doorbell but there was no answer

"Hmm.. No one's in. Sam, Alex, Clover, Marty. It's us. We're here to help"

"Let me try." Martin pushed his step-sister aside and antithetically knocked on the door "Hey Marty you SUV wrecker. Let us in!" Martin yelled, to look back at the mission where he wrecked Marty's Chevy Suburban. There was still no answer. He looked at Java and snapped his fingers "Okay, Java get to work."

Java was about to slam the door open when the door slowly disclosed. It was Alex in a blue tank top and blue shorts. She had a petrified look on her face

"Alex? Are you okay?" Diana asked in concern

"Great." Alex replied "Never felt better, c'mon in!"

They entered the house. The inside looked nothing like the outside. The place was lightly lit, it felt much bigger that the exterior, 2 rusting knight amour greeted them, cobwebs filled the corners of the ceilings, giant cracks and peeling paint filled the aging yellow walls, the red carpet turned dark and the air was musty. The place looked and felt like your average haunted mansion.

"Okay... I wasn't expecting this at all" Diana articulate. The look of the interior of the house made her shiver

"BOO!"

Diana let out a loud wail. She turned around and found out that Martin was bursting in laughter. Antagonized by Martin's childish behavior, she slapped her step-brother's face and Martin toppled to the floor with a red mark on his right cheek.

"Hey, that hurt!" Said Martin, rubbing his sore cheek. He got up from the carpet and looked around. Alex was nowhere to be found "Where's Alex?"

Diana looked around. There was no sign of the brunette anywhere "She's right beside us...OOFF!"

Someone had bumped into them. It was Marty and Alex. Marty knocked into Diana and Alex hit Martin right in the face. Java help the Mystery crew up before giving a hand to Alex and Marty.

"Mystery?" Marty exclaimed, rubbing his aching head "What the hell are you doing here?"

"What the hell am I doing here?" Martin questioned "You're the one who called Mitchell."

"Well we called our boss not you. And thanks to you, I was suspended for a month because you wreck my SUV!"

"C'mon guys, this is no time to argue we have to..." Diana paused and looked to her left and then right. Her eyes widen in fear "Wait a minute, if that's Alex, that whose that?" She continued, looking towards the other end of the hallway.

A black figure stood about 2 meters away from them. The figure gave a heinous smile and it transformed into another figure. The unknown man stepped out from the shadows. The light from the window shone at him to unveil Jeremy standing infront of them. He was covered in his old aging denim jacket on top of on top of a white shirt, jeans and Black Nike Air Max Trainers. The last thing he wore before he was killed.

"Jeremy..." Alex sighed


Okay that was very short. So what do you think? Good? bad? awful? average? Mistakes? Need more improvement? Please don't hesitate to press that review button to give me your comment. Or flame, or whatever you wanna get off your chest.

Mathew: It's on pause. I really have no idea what happens next. And uh.. sorry about Sammy. But I really had no idea so I had to put her in those scene. I also don't want to create more characters. But don't worry. I'll try not to hurt her in my next fanfics. Oh BTW I've just reviewed your latest fanfic.

Ominae: I've just reviewed that. Thanks again

Again, please review. It's hard to get reviews nowadays

Marty