Donamarine: Hey! Today is a friend of mine's sweet sixteen! So to celebrate I invited her to join me in my author notes. Everybody say hi to …uh which name should I call you?
Author notes Guest: Call me Domie. My Fan fiction Pen name is Bar-ohki and my Ragnorock name is Kairos Skyeyes.
Donamarine: Okay Domie then. The Character Domie's personality is an exaggeration of my friend's real life personality. You even reviewed didn't you Domie?
Domie: Twice.
Donamarine: Would you like to say the disclaimer?
Domie: ( Looks at Donamarine with a puzzled expression on her face.) Why do you do a disclaimer at the start of every chapter? I mean don't your reviewers know you do not own YYH? Why don't you just only say it only one at the start at the first chapter?
Donamarine: I know, but I like to claim that I own the OCs and Keiko's new powers.
Domie: Okay, Donamarine dose not own YYH, System of a Down, Drops of Jupiter, Ragnorock or any of the Ragnorock Characters featured in this chapter. She dose how ever own the OCs and Keiko's new power.
Donamarine: Thank you Domie. So do you want to answer the reviews now or go straight to the chapter?
Domie: Uh I usually answer my reviews at the end of the chapter so why don't we go straight to the chapter?
Donamarine: OKAY!
Chapter 17
Eggs and Ragnorock.
CRASH! Keiko, Yusuke, Kuwabara, Kurama, and Hiei turned toward the source of the sound tense as if it were an attack. Something got knocked over in the bathroom down the hall and the distant roar of a hairdryer went on, with a "Blackie your dripping!" from Medea.
Domie located the egg poacher as if nothing was happening and poached two eggs from the carton. While the eggs were cooking she turned to the toaster and pulled out two slices of organically grown whole-wheat bead, dropped them in to the slots, and pressed down the tabs.
"There is no need for alarm Blackie is just trying to stay wet." Domie said turning to the Tentai in an uninterested monotone.
"Why would he want to do that?" Yusuke asked.
"He probably thinks it's a game."
"Game?" Yusuke asked.
"Yeah, Medea tries to chase him around with a hair dryer and Blackie tries to dodge it." Domie's toast popped up out of the toaster while the egg poacher's timer went off. The poached eggs were settled in between the slices of toast and rested on a plate.
Domie grabbed her plate and carried it to a desk with a computer that was set up in a convent corner of the kitchen, only to be greeted by hungry stares of Yusuke, Kuwabara, Hiei, and Keiko.
"What? This is my sandwich, go make your own." Domie glared at the moochers and with that Keiko got up and pulled out a frying pan and placed it on the stove to heat.
Hiei wasn't in the mood for cooked foods. He just hned and kept glaring at Domie's plate.
Kurama got up and started to crack about one to two eggs in a bowl using a fork to mix the yolks with the whites. While the kitsune was beating the eggs Yusuke and Kuwabara raided the Jorryn fridge with Shairvani standing right next to them directing the types of foods in the fridge.
Noticing that the moochers were moving off Domie turned on the computer and waited for the computer to stop its downloading tests and be ready for Domie's use.
"There is where the tofu is stored, and the soy beans are there. Mom keeps the cheese there; cheese goes great in omelets..." Shairvani directed, pointing to the places the food was stored.
"Oi, Shairvani your mother sure does buy a lot of health food." Kuwabara pointed out.
"Yeah my Dad's side of the family added the health food diet but my mom is the one who buys the food and believes that everybody in her house hold needs to be well nourished." Shairvani shrugged. "She had a really tough childhood and she went hungry some times. Donamarine was working over time as the ocean goddess of earth and being a single mother of a mortal child."
"So, I some times go hungry and I don't act like that." Yusuke turned to the demigoddess.
"I think it has something to do with Mom's nature or something." Medea interrupted upon her arrival with a slightly damp Blackie on her shoulder. "That and I think she when she had kids she vowed to give them a better child hood than what she had." Then she changed the subject. "Huh, looks like we are having eggs this morning."
"Yum, eggs!" Blackie smiled and turned to Medea. "Can I have scrambled eggs?"
"Sure." Medea shrugged.
Keiko turned back to the pan on the stove and sprinkled a handful of water. Once added the water instantly erupted in a column of steam and wild bubbling drops of water. Keiko smiled her satisfaction and turned the stove temperature down to four. This meant the pan was hot enough for cooking.
"Okay who wants their eggs done first?"
Genkai dragged her suitcase in to the trunk of their rental car, a 2000 yellow Volkswagen Beetle. The weather outside the hotel was cloudy and the temperature was cool. The elderly lady stood tapping her foot. How long did it take for three young girls to pack their things?!
Already an annoying man with a fishing pole, with a plastic cup safety pined to the line labeled 'fishing for beer', had bugged her enough already. He would come over with his plastic cup filled with change and wave it near Genkai's face. The elderly woman would glare at him until he backed down. Yet he would come over each time he was desperate to gather any coins only to be glared back down.
Shirzuru pasted the desk in which Botan was busy trying to pay for the night's stay, while Yukina was admiring the bouquet of false orange birds of a paradise flowers, scarlet hibiscus, white plumeria, and fuchsia orchids.
"Come on guys Genkai's waiting." Shirzuru said in Japanese while she strode to the door.
"Coming." Yukina turned her attention a way from the false flowers and followed speaking in the same language. Halfway between the table with the bouquet and the door Yukina paused and turned on her translator and turned to the man behind the desk. "Thank you for letting us stay." Yukina bowed.
The man behind the desk just smiled and replied. "No, Thank you for staying at the…"
HONK!
"Come on! I don't think Genkai can wait any longer." Shirzuru called.
"Right, coming." Yukina spoke softly as she grabbed her rolling backpack and headed out to the Volkswagen Beetle.
"Thank you for staying at the …"
HONK!
"Hotel. Please come again." The man behind the desk tuned to Botan handing her a tray with a receipt and her credit card.
"Thank you." Botan turned out the door.
"About time!" Genkai was standing out side the vehicle. Shirzuru was seated in the passenger seat in the front while Yukina was seated in the back.
"Alright lets go!" Botan dumped her suitcase in the trunk and opened the car door to enter in side.
"But before we go there are some sights I would like to see." Genkai turned to her passengers with a smirk on her face.
Domie took another bite of her sandwich and placed it on to the plate and chewed while pressing the controls for her RPG game Ragnorock. One hand was flying all over the Keyboard while her other hand was plugging in a set of headphones to the computer using the computer to play music. Her eyes were focused on the computer screen on witch she her character was multitasking as well. The acolyte or priestess in training on screen was busy defeating the undead, healing other members of the guild, leading the guild while passing Personal Messages or pms all over Ragnorock. Hiei just stared in slight amazement, How could a ningen mange to do that all by her self.
(Domie: PMs! Nuuuuu!!)
Keiko was standing at the stove while Kurama and Medea were giving her pointers on how to make the perfect omelet. It turns out that Medea had memorized a secret Jorryn family recipe, and was refusing on telling any one what the recipe. She would only to give them pointers if they were doing something wrong.
"A lid over the pan will reduce the risk of under cooked eggs yet you have to check periodically to keep it from burning." Medea advised.
Yusuke, Kuwabara, Shairvani and Blackie were eating their eggs; Blackie was enjoying his scrambled eggs while Shairvani was cutting up her cheese omelet from the secret Jorryn family recipe. Yusuke's egg was a hard fried egg with the yolk was broken then fried. Kuwabara's eggs were sunny side up. (Donamarine: I'm just assuming on how they like their eggs I really don't know how they like their eggs.)
Domie began to bob her head, type and click the mouse at the beat of the music. Hiei's demonic hearing told him that she was listening to something that was similar to some form of heavy metal Yusuke and Kuwabara listened to only it wasn't as so intense. He could even hear the words "Disorder, disorder, disoorrder."
(Domie: AH, Toxicity By System Of A Down)
Domie turned to Hiei noticing that he was watching.
"Aren't you going to make your breakfast?" Domie asked while she was still typing on the computer.
"Hn, I'm not in the mood for cooked foods." Hiei crossed his arms stubbornly.
"Well you need to eat something, and I can see that you are going to be a lazy bastard who will never make your self any thing this morning. So take control I'll fix you breakfast." Domie said standing to her feet before remembering. "Oh I'll notify Prop so he won't get confused." She bent her arms and her back slightly and started typing
'prop, i at m's house i need to fix guy breakfast cause he being lazy bastard he in control of my char k? let you know when i back' The PM was automatically sent to Prop who responded immediately.
'sure kai look out for him, brt.' And with that an assassin walked on screen with the curser moving over him revealing that his name was Proaghandi. Hiei received a message box that simply said 'hey'
Hiei amazingly knew how to type in English and he typed 'hey' right back.
'you know kai in rl? r you friend of hers?'
'no.' Hiei typed and sent.
'd you know m?' Prop sent right back.
'a little'
' r you staying at her house cause her mom won't let u go any where else for night?' Prop was a very perceptive person in both the game and in real life.
'yes.' Hiei typed.
Seeing that Hiei could handle this by him self, Domie turned to the counter next to the stove. She pulled out a glass from the cupboard and cracked some eggs in it. She then poured the last bit of Uma's sea salt, which wasn't much, in to the glass. She didn't need to cook it because she could sense Hiei's Youkai and knew immediately that Hiei was a demon so he might like to eat the raw eggs.
She carried the eggs in a glass over to the computer only to see the Messages reading:
'did you know that kai is our guild leader?'
'no.' Hiei typed.
'well she is.' Prop had proudly typed.
'So does this mean that I can order you around?' Hiei sent.
"No. u rn't kairos skyeyes i won't listen to u if u did order me around.' Prop sent back.
"Damn it!" Hiei said verbally.
(Domie: In Ragnorock the use messages to communicate to other players and they slaughter grammar and hardly use the shift key.
Donamarine: It's the good thing you play Ragnorock because I don't.)
Genkai drove out of Seattle after paying a visit to Pike's Market and The Seattle Aquarium. Yukina stared out the window in a depressed state of mind. She was so sure that she could free those sea otters. Botan told her that these sea otters were raised in captivity and would go to humans for food and that was not a good idea for sea otters in the wild. It only remind her of the time she was trapped in Turkine's Mansion. (Donamarine: I don't know how to spell the name of the ugly guy who kidnapped Yukina in the Spirit Detective arch or first season of YYH.)
Shirzuru could feel the koormie's depression.
"How about some music since we have a six hour drive ahead of us?" Shirzuru reached for the radio and turned the dial for a radio station.
"Great idea Shirzuru!" Botan quietly cheered with excitement.
"That she's back in the atmosphere with drops of Jupiter in her hair. She acts like summer and walks like rain, reminds me that there is a time of change. Eh hey. Since the return on the stay on the moon she listens like spring and talks like June. Eh hey eh Heay.
Tell me did you sell across the sun? Did you make it to the Milky Way to see the lights of Venus? Man heaven is over rated. Tell me did you fall for a falling star? One with out a permanent scar and then did you miss me when you were looking for your self out there?
That she's back from the sole vacation tracing her way thought the constellation. Eh hey. She checks out most while she does tribow reminds me that there is room to grow eh hey that she's back in the atmosphere, I'm afraid she might think of me as plain no change sorry bout of a man who was to afraid to fly south and never did land. But tell me did the wind sweep you off your feet, did you finally get the chance dance along the latter-day head back to the milky way, tell me did Venus blow your mind?..."
"This sounds like a good song." Shirzuru shrugged as they turned on to Interstate 178.
(Don marine: I do not own Drops of Jupiter by who ever sang it. I can't remember who sang it at the moment.)
An;
Domie: Damn it! We're out of pop corn! And right in the middle of the Chapter too!
Donamarine: Okay can we now answer reviews?
Domie: sure.
Donamarine: to Icy Tears: 'Why is Uma seemingly obsessed with getting healthy food into her children?' Uma had a hard child hood growing up with a single mother who was a part time ocean goddess. Not that Donamarine was a terrible mother it was just that she had to hide Uma from her father thus making Uma's child hood hard. Other wise she would grow up in her goddess form. Gods also have this instinct to protect their offspring from any of the dangers and Uma has the instinct running strong in her veins that and she some times went hungry despite the fact that Donamarine worked hard to keep food on the table. Yes some times over protective mothers can be scary.
Hiei: HN where is the sweet snow?
Donamarine: Hiei!
Domie: Oh I invited him in from the computer during the chapter.
Donamarine: Okay... Is it alright if continue answering the reviews?
Domie: Sure.
Donamarine: to Bradybunch4529: I Can't Believe I forgot The Polls! You love the fact that Genkai kept her attitude with Donamarine the ocean goddess? Thanks I had actually imagined Genkai saying that line when I wrote it. Uma is actually a character based off of my mother. I had no intention of making her seem like she is a combination of Keiko, Botan, and Genkai. Yes Uma does not take no for an answer especially if minors are involved. She also thinks that Hiei is a teenager so she mothers him any way.
Random Elf with black hair with red streaks: Hah I will steal the bowl of popcorn!
Domie: Uh that bowl is empty except for the kernels.
Random elf: well, I could always shoot the kernels down Jhar's throat…
Domie: right.
Donamarine: who is Jhar? And Domie did you invite him too?
Domie: yeah so…
Random Elf: Jhar is a wizard
Donamarine: how many characters did you invite?
Domie: that is about it.
Donamarine: good can I continue with the reviews now?
Domie: Sure
Donamarine: to What a scene: Thanks for answering my polls but uh… I think you miss understood what I meant by original characters. I meant Medea, Domie, Alex, Chandra, Blackie, and every character in this fan fic who does not appears in the show.
Medea tumbles out of the computer: Okay I am defiantly not where I belong. (spots Hiei) Oh Hiei, mom noticed that you where gone and she sent me to look for you.
Hiei: That Onna needs to get a life I'm perfectly capable to care for my self.
Medea: I know that but TRY telling my mother that… (Looks at Donamaraine) Hey it's that crazy girl who named her self after my grandmother!
Donamarine: I'm not crazy! Or at least last time I checked…
Medea: No you're sane I can feel it… (Looks at Domie) Hey you look like my friend Domie!
Domie: Uh my name is Domie.
Medea: O.O this world gets smaller and smaller…
Donamarine: Can I continue with answering the reviews?
Medea: Yeah go ahead.
Donamarine: Thank you To Dark Inu Fan: so acting like nothing happened sounded like what you and your group does huh? Uh I already had what they were having for breakfast written already by the time you reviewed but the doughnuts I think I will save for another day… Thanks for reviewing.
And To poltergeist report: A trudgoen is a staff with a sickle blade thanks to the description from Bradybunch 4529 and A glaive is a five foot staff it an eighteen inch blade. As for a charckram I don't know. Thanks for letting me know about my grammar. Thanks for the complements.
Domie: Okay guys that is the end of the chapter. It's time to go.
Donamarine: Please exit out of the computer where you came from.Thank you for coming to celeabrate Domie's 16th Birthday.
Medea: Sure thing.
Hiei: HN
Random elf: Thanks for the kernels.
(Medea, Hiei, and Random elf exits out though the computer.)
Donamarine: Do you mind if I quote my little sister TassthePhoenix? ...Okay...That was interesting, and a little crazy. I hope it won't drive away reviewers…
Domie: Doubt it.
Donamarine: Happy Birthday Domie.
Domie: Thanks.
Now for the poll:
I'm writing a novel or it can become a Manga about Medea when her powers appear. If you came across the story in either novel story or manga would you read it?
If you guys like it will give you reviewers a sneak peek in the bonus features chapter.
Now for the changed Poll results. What a scene since I think you misunderstood the OCs Poll I didn't add your OC Poll results but I did add your other poll results.
Male YYH:
Kurama:4, Jin:2, Sakyo:1, Yusuke:2, Yoko:1 Hiei:1 I don't know: 1
Female YYH:
Botan: 2, Shirzuru:3, Keiko: 2, Genkai:2, I don't know:2
Under standing Chapter eight:
5:0 4:2 3:0 2:0 1:0
Good thanks for letting me know.
Blackie:
Ok: 1
Pretty cute:3
Pulsero:
A: 1
B: 3
D: 4
Favorite OC:
Alex: 1
Medea: 3
Shairvani: 1
Blackie: 1
Domie:1
Favorite parings:
Keiko and Yusuke: 3
Botan and Kurama: 3
Hiei and Ayame: 1
Yukina and Touya: 1
Sakyo/Shizuru
Botan/Hiei:1
Hiei/Oc
Don't Know: 3
Reunion:
Yes:7
Chapters
6:1
2:1
10:1
Don't have any: 3
Keiko's weapon:
Bow and arrow: 3
Boomerang: 1
Axes: 1
Sythes: 1
Trudgeon: 1
Glaive: 1
Chackrams: 1
Katars :1
Deleted Scenes Chapter
Yes: 7
No: 0