An: All these reviews happened so quickly… Thanks for your comments.
Disclaimer: I don't own YYH.
Claimer: I do however own the OCs and Keiko's new power.
Reviews:
Dark Inu Fan: Yeah, that is a nice name. Do you really have a class mate named Bear? Cool. I will keep up the good work.
poltergeist report 101: Oh… so a staff with a sword attachment is a kind of scythe. Okay. Um it was a poll result from interviewing my sister TassthePhoenix and well she is attached to swords and I wanted an original (as in something that isn't already used in YYH like whips, swordsand guns…)weapon so we went for a compromise. Oh and thanks for participating in my poll. I will update again soon.
BradyBunch4529: Wow I see you absolutely love the defense dome. Yea, Yusuke having to learn that he can't always protect her is such a surprise because he has been her first line of defense but when that first line of defense is gone like when Yusuke's on a mission what will Keiko do? How did I manage to add Yusuke Keiko fluff? … How did I manage that? The going to school scene was a scene that I thought up moments before I wrote it and found that it made an excellent plot point which is some thing that I need to do because I found that I was taking too much time with the breakfast scene with all those subtle hints about the characters and foreshadowing that I need to get a move on in the plot. Yes Jin is very cute.
Chapter 19
The Single Sense (Uh oh), and Tag.
"Did you get a good look at him?"
"Yeah, I did, isn't he the hottest?"
"Nah, the short one is mister hot, dark, and handsome…Sigh"
"What do you think Muriel?"
"The one with long red hair is just as attractive as Hussein, Oh why does Jorryn have to have such hot cousins." A clique of girls whispered to each other sitting in their desks behind Medea and her "cousins." They were all looking like the stereotypes formed by Barbie.
Muriel had dark hair and brown eyes that could pierce the self esteem of any younger girl who had the potential to be popular.
Medea rolled her own eyes at the conversation behind her and went back to taking notes. Muriel lived in her own paranoid and delusional world.
A bunched up piece of paper went flying and bounced off the back of Kurama's head. He caught it before it landed on the desk behind him. He opened up the scrunched up note to find another love message from an admirer.
He had advised Hiei to glance down it carefully as if he was reading it and looked for any thing out of the ordinary, like love spells or the remains of someone's idea of a sick joke, just incase any of Medea's class mates were gifted (however unlikely) before stuffing into his pocket to dispose of it carefully. So Kurama took his own advice.
Then the savoir know as the bell decided to help the two demons by ringing to end homeroom.
Hiei let out a sigh of relief as he got out of the desks to stretch. Then he strolled by the waste basket and dumped all of his secret admirer notes in the waste basket. Kurama copied him only into the recycling box at the door.
Yusuke shredded up some notes he received but they were ones that stated: "if you break up with your girl friend, come and seek me out…" How did they know he had a girl friend?
Kuwabara also had a few notes too stating similar things to Yusuke's only they also stated that he seemed to be a guy with a lot of honor and other things like that.
"It's begun." Medea whispered to her guests.
"What?" All five Japanese visitors asked.
"Um I think I'm not the best person to tell you guys." Medea said turning a corner of the hall way and headed down some stairs as quickly as a running cheetah. She turned in order to looked up the stairs calling "Are you guys coming, or not?"
"Oh why not head to Gym class with out us, why don't you." Domie remarked sarcastically popping up right behind Yusuke before racing down the stair faster, if possible, than Medea.
"Yeah! Gym Class! The least boring class around, next to history that is!" Alex cheered throwing her fist up in to the air triumphantly before disappearing and reappearing right next to Domie with a new appendage on her shoulder.
It was grey with a long bushy tail. It had large black eyes that leaked with innocence and as much excitement as Alex. It sat on its hind legs and had its forepaws seemed to mimic Alex's gestures. It had two buck teeth and its tail was erect like an excited puppy.
Domie immediately noticed Alex's pet.
"Alex, why do you bring your pet squirrel to school?" Domie asked growing irritated at the little fluffy creature on her friend's shoulder.
"What's wrong with bringing Jeffrey to school? Medea brings Blackie to school all the time. Right Blackie?" Alex stubbornly replied.
"Right!" an invisible Blackie answered quietly so he could not draw attention to passerby.
"Blackie is invisible, Jeffery is not Alex." Domie stated at the bottom of the stairs while Yusuke, Keiko, Kuwabara, Kurama, and Hiei began to stride down the three stories to catch up with the girls at the base of the staircase.
"So, at least a squirrel is a creature everyone can see every day. No one would ever believe that a little creature that resembles a bat and a dog was running a round the school with out thinking that it was a wild rumor or that he or she was high on something." Alex retorted picking up her pet and turning him towards Domie. "Aw come on, isn't he cute?"
"Get that thing away for me or I will throw a frisbee at him!" The girl Jeffery was facing spoke with her voice subtlety rising.
"Admit it your afraid of him aren't you." Alex mention slightly smug.
"No I'm not I just hate squirrels!"
Hiei hned in agreement, he didn't like annoying squirrels always bugging him while he was trying to sleep.
"For how long have you hated squirrels? Maybe you were traumatized when you were little…"
Medea decided to intervene in her friend's argument or they would be late for their next class. But before she could open her mouth Chandra was brought in to the argument.
"Well around the full moon Chandra might see Jeffery as a snack." Domie brought in.
"Domie! I will never eat any thing that has emotional value to any one I know. Even Tala won't eat any squirrels during the full moon.She can't even catch one." Chandra snapped. Her mouth made snapping sounds of her teeth coming together with slight force, just like a dog who was trying to snap at flies.
"Whoa, someone's PMSing." Yusuke muttered.
"Yusuke!" Keiko bobbed him in the back of his head with a paperback book she was carrying titled Sabrel. (An: that is such a good book. I don't own even a copy. The book belongs to Garth Nix.)
Chandra seemed to have heard Yusuke from one and a half stories away.
"I heard that!" Chandra shouted but before she would dash back up the stair Medea knew this was time to intervene.
"Uh Guys, we're going to be late if we don't get to the locker rooms now." Medea said, stepping in between Alex and Domie, as well as Chandra and the staircase.
"Right." Alex placed Jeffery on her shoulder while she dashed off down the hall with Domie and Chandra following Medea turned to the Japanese students and gestured her guests to follow her as they stepped off the staircase.
As they reached the locker rooms Medea with an invisible Blackie in her arms and turned to Keiko and the members of the Tentei. She handed Blackie to Kurama.
"You boys can head toward the boy's locker room and ask the teacher for some spare clothing and show him your tags. Keep Blackie with you. Keiko you can come with me and I'm sure the female teacher can lend you some spare cloths." Medea directed before leading Keiko inside the girls locker room.
"Well shall we?" Kurama began.
"Yeah let's go." Kuwabara turned heading towards the room with a sign that read Boy's locker room.
"Yeah, yeah," Yusuke turned while Hiei hned and all four headed down to the locker room.
Once inside Medea lead Keiko to a locker with numbers chipped off and opened the locker up. Once Medea had access to her clothing she pulled out a white shirt and a pair of black shorts and pressed them in to Keiko's hands.
"There, I haven't worn them so they should be okay." Then she pulled out another pair of P.E. clothing. Once Medea and Keiko were dressed some random girl dropped a tube of lip gloss.
"Oh! I've dropped my favorite tube of lip gloss and I need it!" the girl squealed. The tube of lip gloss rolled toward Medea and Keiko before rolling under the lockers and out of reach.,
"I'll get it." Medea leaned over the bench and reached underneath. Her hand brushed up against cob webs which Medea ignored, and felt her fingers tapping on top if the tube and coiled around. When Medea gave it back to the girl she cuddled it like it was her first child that was just rescued from a fire.
"Thank you so much!" the girl cheered.
"Uh… It was no problem." Medea developed a sweat drop and backed away slowly. When Medea turned around she heard a "Now I can kiss the hot red head from Japan."
"Uh are you sure he will appreciate that some random girl he had never met in his life comes up only to kiss him?" Medea stopped turned around to the fantasying girl.
"…And how the hell do you know that?" the Lip Gloss Girl snapped like a spoiled brat.
"Dude… He's my cousin." Medea retorted before turning to Keiko to lead her out of the girls locker room.(An: I have a cousin in real live who goes to my school to, and I've always wanted to say that line. Yet noone has asked me so I gave Medea a chance to say that line.)
As they left the locker room, something caught Keiko's eyes. It was a sliver chain and an inch long bottle filled with blue sand dangling down Medea's front. Keiko stared at the pendant while Medea directed her down the hall.
"That's pretty I don't think I've seen it before, where did you get it?" Keiko asked.
"Oh, this old thing, I wear it every day under my clothing, sometimes I have it hang out side of my shirt. I've had it all of my life." Medea smiled as she fingered it.
"Wow."
"Well come on we better get going or the boys will be left with the flocks of girls who have been attracted to them by the single scene."
"The what?" Keiko stopped and turned towards Medea.
Domie, Alex, and Chandra were standing in row call and after their names were called the came over to hang with Yusuke, Kuwabara, Kurama, and Hiei. Medea and Keiko entered the gym moments before Medea's name was called so they were considered on time.While they entered Medea retucked her pendant back under her shirt before anyone else noticed.
Once the student's were accounted for the gym teacher looked up from his clip board and shouted with a voice that fill the gym "Now we can run laps around the gym for seven minutes, please do not stop, walk, and chat until I figure what is today's warm ups."
Few of the students obliged, most of which were Medea, Keiko, Domie, Alex, Chandra, Yusuke, Kuwabara, Hiei, and Kurama. The American girls ran with endurance that their peers lacked and some of which were just slowly waking or standing and chatting and the P.E. teacher wasn't even paying attention to what the class was doing.
Domie, Alex, Chandra, and Medea were already running laps around the groups of students. Yusuke, Kuwabara, Kurama, Keiko, and Hiei quickly figured out that they were supposed to do.
Seven minute's of non stop walking or running the gym teacher lifted his head from the game of tic tac toe against the hardest competitor… himself.
"Alright," He shouted. "I've decided that our warm up will be Everybody's it."
The eruption of reactions was astounding. Most had either an expression of shock on this new torture and protested. Some almost screamed and one girl practically fainted.
Keiko suddenly felt sympathy for the victims of the group especially those whowouldbe tagged By Yusuke and Hiei. Then her eyes noticed the reactions of Medea and her friends and felt another twang of sympathy.
Medea's reaction was one of 'wow' as f she had been given a rare yet mild treat. Domie's reaction was just a shrug. Alex just smiled and Jeffrey just dove in to the refuge of Alex's curly blond hair. Chandra suddenly had the eye of a hunter and her eyes began to search for targets.
Once the Teacher shouted the word "GO!" all hell broke lose.
Students suddenly were running away from Medea and her friends while giving the Japanese guests a wide birth in case Medea's ability in tag was genetic.
Hiei instantly decided that he like this game and was gone in a flash.
The rules were that the tags had to be harmless and that once you were tagged you had to sit until the teacher decided that the round was over and those sitting had to do 20 sets of the exercise, normally it was push ups.
Medea was swift and no student was able to tag her but the students suddenly found that they had a new speed as they tried to out run her. They were usually unsuccessful.
Chandra was also swift but she would stock her targets subtly until she was close to them and she would spring to action like a hunting wolf only she her moves always ended with a tag.
Domie would just charge and tag any one in her way. Her targets were usually bunches of people who tired to stick together in groups.
Alex ran around her tagging victims were tagged from behind and were at random.
Hiei's targets were the most numerous of the whole class possibly because he was moving too fast for people to see.
Yusuke wasn't far behind him in a few tags.
Kurama managed to tag a few and they were polite taps.
Kuwabara had accomplished a little higher number compared to Kurama and they were usually students caught by surprise.
Keiko was also caught by surprise but the tagger was a girl with piercing brown eyes and dark hair. Then Muriel of the Piercing Eyes was tagged by Yusuke.
Medea ended up being tagged by Domie, who was tagged by Hiei. Alex managed to tag Kurama while she was tagged by Hiei also but she had gotten him at the same time.
The only two student's who were left were Yusuke and Kuwabara but the teacher blew the whistle when they had tagged each other at the same time.
The rest of the morning flew by quickly with the rest of Medea's classes after Gym Domie had to go to French, Alex had Ancient History for her project on a Viking Archeological site in Sweden, and Chandra had a paper due in Myths and Legends class about the myths ofmagical wolvesand how they were first stared as a legend. All of the classes were double blocks.
Lunch went slower than a frozen solid glacier. Girls instantly flocked Hiei and Kurama. Each of them seemed to have the same request of a date with them.
Hiei having no idea what to do fled the scene in a flash with the girls seemingly tracking him down. When Hiei made his daring escape Kurama managed to sneak out of the crowd only to be caught by them. Kurama found him having the need to run out side with girls in hot pursuit.
"I see the girls have already started following their single senses poor Kurama, poor Hiei. They won't leave them alone." Domie sighed swinging her purple lunch box from her shoulder.
"What the hell is the single sense?" Yusuke asked in his normal tone.
"Yeah, what exactly is it. Is sounds like nothing I had ever heard of." Kuwabara mentioned after Yusuke.
"The single sense is a set of senses girls have to attract them to potential boyfriends. They are especially attracted it they are attractive. How ever it has nothing to do with personality traits, just looks." Domie explained.
"…And how do you know this?" Yusuke questioned.
"Dude I have the single sense, but I'm not a flockier like the girls harassing Hiei and Kurama."
"Yet how would you have the single sense?" Kuwabara inquired.
"Dude I am in fact female thank you very much." Domie informed the boys leaning forward and smirking at the looks on their faces.
"Yeah we knew that it's just" Kuwabara began in shock but then was interrupted.
"I not the type of girl who acts like a rabid fan girl."
"Oh." Both boys answered in unison.
"But then why aren't any girls following us?" Kuwabara asked.
"The girls could sense that you already had girl friends, so to prevent problems between girls, single girls generally try to avoid them." Domie informed them picking a table in a deserted table in a distant corner so Hiei and Kurama could join them with out drawing too much attention. Then she unzipped her lunch box.
Medea led Keiko back from the Lunch line with a lot of food on their trays.
"… See Keiko they don't mind that we take all this food from the salad bar because it was already paid for." Medea stated while Keiko looked with a concerned expression on her face like she was shoplifting or something. "Don't worry your not stealing. They are already charging my lunch account so you guys can also have your lunches."
"Oh. Here Yusuke this is for your lunch." Keiko said turning to Yusuke and giving some… what looked remotely like a sandwich. Yusuke gave this expression like it was really alive. Not that his demon heritage would mind it moving it just made his human heritage squeamish. Kuwabara felt the same way.
An: There Chapter 19 is done on my dad's lap top at my great aunt and uncle's house. For Christmas I received a MP3 player, so I can use that to keep my fan fic which seems to work better than floppy disks. I'm so happy! Now I have a poll. Since I dropped a lot of clues for Chandra's ability I'm going to let you guess what she is.
So, the Poll is: What do you think Chandra's power/ ability is. Or What is she?
The second poll I'm adding is the poll I added a few chapters back that no one participated and I what to know what you guys think. If Medea's story was in a book, Manga/graphic novel, or anime would you read and watch it?
Please answer both of the polls. And Action lovers, Action will happen in later chapters but I don't know when. Please Review. Oh and poltergeist report 101 you don't have to participate in the polls because you have already answered it. But if you want your participation in the poll results, you could if you want to.
Male YYH:
Kurama:5, Jin:2, Sakyo:1, Yusuke:3, Yoko:1, Hiei:2, Matari:,1 Kuwabara:1,Touya:1 I don't know: 1
Female YYH:
Botan: 3, Shirzuru:4, Keiko: 3, Genkai:3,Yukina:1 I don't know:2
Under standing Chapter eight:
5:0 4:3 3:0 2:0 1:0
Good thanks for letting me know.
Blackie:
Ok: 1
Pretty cute:4
Pulsero:
A: 1
B: 4
D: 4
Favorite OC:
Alex: 1
Medea: 3
Shairvani: 2
Blackie: 1
Domie:1
Favorite parings:
Keiko and Yusuke: 3
Botan and Kurama: 3
Hiei and Ayame: 1
Yukina and Touya: 1
Sakyo/Shizuru:2
Botan/Hiei:1
Hiei/OC:1
Don't Know and/or don't care: 4
Reunion:
Yes:8
Chapters
6:1
2:1
10:2
7:1
Don't have any: 3
Keiko's weapon:
Bow and arrow: 3
Boomerang: 1
Axes: 1
Sythes: 1
Trudgeon: 1
Glaive: 1
Chackrams: 1
Katars :1
Staff with sword attachment:1
Deleted Scenes Chapter
Yes: 8
No: 0
Action: 8
Novel:
Yes: 3
No: 0
Defense Dome:
Pretty Cool: 2
Bloody Perfect: 1