Thanks everybody for the wonderful reviews, and whoever it was that said i didn't have enough dialoge in my writing, i'm srry, but i have a hard time with that, so i limit it. Here's chapter 5! enjoy
Chapter 5: La Poema (The Poem)
School
Danny, Sam, and Tucker are walking to Danny's locker, talking about the night before.
Danny: so what do you guys think of Destiny Water?
Sam: well, we know she's good because she helped you, and she's powerful.
Tucker: yea, and at the same time, she was cute.
D/S: ...
Tucker: hey, a guy can dream can't he?
Sam: sure, whatever Tucker.
They get to Danny's locker, he opens it, and a note with a poem on it falls out
Danny: hmmm, what's this:
reading
Danny,
i know you, but you might not know me.
i think you're a great guy, and with all the personality
as an added bonus, you're even cute
so i've decided not to keep myself mute.
if you want to see who i am very soon,
meet me in the park, on the Friday of Good Friday at noon.
D-Girl
Danny: wow, that's a really weird sounding note, do you guys think i should go?
Sam: she seems like she really likes you, but what i don't get is how she knew you
Tucker: dude, i think you should go for it, what have you got to lose?
Danny: i guess you're right
Sam: yea, and Danny, wear the Fenton Phones so we can keep in touch and we can have your back the whole time.
Tucker: and we can hear whatever she says
Sam: and i can give you advise on what she means by certain things
Danny: thanks guys, i now know why we became friends.
bell rings
All: oh crap, we're late for Lancer's class!
They all run to Lancer's class, the next day, Danny will go and meet his mysterious secret admirier.(sp)
to be continued...
and for my next chappy, i would like 15 reviews plz, as u can see i go by a pattern, lol