Alori: Wow!! We got 2 reviews!!!! YAY!!!!! What can I say, the second chapter was brilliant! Heh heh....I should watch my head's weight...It's getting a little big...Okay, so, I hear that you all liked Mara stealing Jack's journal, well, I thought that was pretty funny too! (It was MY idea, and I wrote it!) These next two chapters are what I'd call the Tortuga Escapades! But, for simplistic sake, we're just calling it "Days 7,8,9" and "Days 10,11(well sort of), 12"
Weiryn's Daughter: (to Alori- yes you wrote it but with my brilliant ideas- turns back to reader) Yes, we are very happy that we got some reviews. In response to one of them, Alori is revamping the story and posting it under her. Make sure you watch out for that! However, we will leave this story up, and finsh posting it so that you can read the orginal and the modified one! Oh yeah the Disclaimer- WE WISHED WE OWNED PIRATES OF THE CARRIBEAN BUT WE DO NOT!
Shout Outs-
Mepb- thanks so much for reviewing
Lashandra- Thank you for your idea; as you can see above we have taken it into consideration!
Day 7
I finally have gotten my Journal back from Mara. That little luv' needs a lesson in manners. . .Then again, maybe I'm the one who needs some. . .What am I saying? I'm Captain Jack Sparrow! I don't need manners! Anyway, I think I scared her enough that she won't take my things or commandeer my room. Do you know what I did to her? Well, after I broke the door down, I took my journal from her and said the very words that sent shivers down Elizabeth's spine when Barbossa said them. I told her that she was 'taking an awful big advantage of our hospitality' and that pretty soon I'd be asking her to 'return the favor'. She thought I said one thing when all I meant was she'd better be good or I'd make her clean the ship. I've got her all fixed up, she's not going to do anything bad anymore. At least stuff like pilfering my journal.
Day 8
We finally reached Tortuga! The greatest town on this whole planet! You can visit every port town you come to and you'll never find one that has the sweet nectar Tortuga gives you. None will give you as much rum either. After we docked, Mara asked if she could come ashore with us. I told her no. She pouted when I told her that, but I think she finally came 'round. She left me cabin smilin' and happy. Even though I like to think this is true, most likely she's come up with some escape plan. So I'm havin' Mr. Cotton stay behind and watch Mara. He voiced no objections to my decision so.......Anyway, I'll talk ta you later after I've done some business here in Tortuga. Oh, and after I've gotten some rum.
Day 9
I'm too drunk to write mack. Wut did I jes say? I don now. May b I should sleap. Iv got a heodack the siz of me heod. Or iz that haed? Not sure. God night.
Alori: Soooo, did any of you need a translation for that last part? After all, it was French. No? Then here goes! "I'm too drunk to write much. What did I just say? I don't know. Maybe I should sleep. I've got a headache the size of my head. Or is that head? Not sure, Good night." It sounds better in French, that's for sure.
Weiryn's Daughter: Thank you to all who reviewed- And to those who didn't we will stalk you down and-
Alori-Thank you again, and come back soon for the next chapter! Which we will not be posting until we get 5 reviews on this chapter!
