Hi, folks! Yes, you may be surprised that this is back up and written by a different writer, but let me explain. I emailed Kagome51, the original writer of this story, and she has given me permission to try and rewrite the story! Thank you very much, Kagome51! I would've had this up earlier, but I've been so busy lately with homework and basketball, and…you know. Of course, when I reach the part Kagome51 left off, I may need a little help with what happens next, because this wasn't my original idea. One more thing, I decided to lower the rating to K+ because I never swear, so I'm keeping the language down. I hope that's cool.
Anyway, wish me luck, and here we go! I don't own Danny Phantom, by the way.
"Let's go, just five more minutes!" Danny Fenton groaned in frustration as he looked at the clock for about the millionth time in the last hour. It was only five more minutes until school was out for the year.
He and his best friends, Tucker Foley and Samantha Manson, were in biology, their last class of the day, and the year. Tucker was asleep across the room, while Sam, whose favorite subject was biology, was taking some last second notes as she sat next to Danny.
Danny sighed as he gazed at the teacher without really hearing what was going on. Sam smiled, noticing his spaced out look. She started to wander.
She thought, It's been two weeks since his first spell. They're getting more frequent too.
The spells Sam were referring to were sudden fainting spells Danny had been getting. Two weeks ago Danny got dizzy and fell down the cement steps in front of the school. Four days later he had another. Three days after that he had a third, only this time he lost consciousness. By now, every day at least he got a spell. He hadn't had one today so he was due for one anytime now. None of the three knew why and he sure wasn't going to tell his mom, dad, or Jazz. She just hoped it didn't get worse for his sake...and for hers.
At last the bell rang and Danny ran out of class, screaming. Sam rolled her eyes and calmly gathered her things. Tucker followed, asking, "What's his rush?"
"Who knows? It's Danny," she replied.
Danny walked back in a few seconds later as he scratched the back of his neck in embarrassment.
"Heh heh...sorry, guys. Just happy it's finally summer vacation," he apologized smiling dopily.
Sam smiled, "Don't worry, Danny. We know you." Then she walked out.
Danny shouted, "What's that mean?" as he ran after her, with Tucker following.
When they got out of the school they walked together over to Danny's house where they planned on watching some movies as a "Getting out of school" party. They made their way up to his room and he threw his stuff in a corner.
Danny whooped in excitement, "Yes! We're finally out until next year!"
"I hear ya!" shouted Tucker.
Sam kept quiet and she smiled in agreement. But her smile was quickly replaced with a look of fear.
Danny started holding his head, "Uh...guys...I think it's happening again."
Just like he had been, Danny lost his footing and fell forward. Sam rushed to his side, concern clearly written on her face.
As Danny slipped into the state of unconsciousness, Sam quickly turned to Tucker, "Tucker! Get some water!" Tucker nodded and ran to the bathroom and filled one of the cups full of cool, refreshing water.
He ran back into Danny's room. He hated the sight he got back to. Sam looked at him with tear-filled eyes, her cheeks stained from the salty liquid.
"He...he's not breathing..."
Tucker dropped the cup.
(Theme song)
There's Chapter 1! A little short, but it's the way Kagome51 put it to start, and this seems like a good place for me too. You don't have to review, since there were already a lot for the original version. I'll have Chapter 2 up soon!
