Hello my loyal reviewers!! Before I get started, I'm gonna tell you a strange yet true story that happened today at my school. Well, all schools have the incredibly hot, punk boy (kinda like Draco) that every girl likes. Well, my school's hot guy just happens to be in my third period writing class. Well anyways, today hardly anyone was there due to a band trip and skipping, so there was about five people in my third period, including me and him. Well, we were just sitting there talking when all of a sudden he started calling me "his baby girl." So I'm sitting there like 'what?!' because I'm a brain and I hang out with the guys in that class, and his best friend is my third cousin!!! He got defensive all day when any boy came near me, and it was in the least...strange. He also insisted on hugging me at least five times in front of random people, teacher, students, whatever. Then he got all amazed that I liked Metal. So he asked me if I liked bands that he liked and they were GOOD bands, so of course I told him I did. So, he sat beside me in the gym while we watched a movie on the big screen and he apparently made a habit of calling me "his baby girl", hence it continues...Anyways to my reviewers:
Tennisplaya278: Yeah, my goal is to get my readers sympathetic for poor Draco, and just because the story is taking a turn, doesn't mean he isn't good. Keep reading no matter what I do, okay? It will get better, I promise. Yea, he's away from all of our eyes, BESIDES MINE!!! laughs insanely Of course I can think of girl singers, but I want to know your opinions on these things. I only accept rock, metal, or rock related. Tell me what you think!
Evil Gypsy: THANK YOU!! ATLEAST SOMEONE AGREES WITH ME THAT SNAPE IN A CLOWN SUIT IS SCARY!! Yes, and happiness does suck! Rock on dark and dreary!!! I'm scared of clowns too!! ....I love you.(not really but the fact remains)
Piedermort: Do you think that's what the voices tells all of us? Cause that's what they tell me too...except the Jason part...I don't know who that is...Do you think I should kill him? If I met him? I think everyone is scared of Bond...I think he's gay...slightly...That last part made 0 sense to me...heh-heh! Or was it mindless babble?
DaLuver: OK!!! YOU ARE NOT SHORT!!! YOU ARE VERTICALLY CHALLENGED!!! Coughshortiecough
Anyways on with the story! Where are my LOYAL reviewers this time???!!!???!!!
The night quickly overtook the sunlight (a/n hiss) and darkness shrouded the mountain. Rory, who supposedly went to bed at 9:00, four hours ago, was creeping through the familiar corridors to the dungeons. She reached the door and went into the customary procedure of grabbing the key off of the hook and unlocking it. She creaked it open and peered inside. She'd been right, Draco wasn't in his cell sleeping like the rest of the prisoners. She stepped inside and whispered loudly, "Get up!!" Snape and Kel immediately snapped their eyes open, but Sirius continued to sleep. After looking at Rory, Kel jabbed Sirius in the stomach and he woke up as well, startled. They all turned their attention towards her. This must be the escape, but why hadn't they been warned before? She hushed them and swiftly set them free from their cells with the keys she had held onto. She motioned for them to follow her, and they did despite their worries. But then a thought struck Snape. 'What about Draco?' He, however ignored it and simply followed in silence. She led them down the halls that she had just taken to get there and directed them right back to her rooms.
She could her the soft padding of feet behind her stop. Yes, she knew Draco wasn't there. It was not a mistake, but that boy knew more than he let on. He was not one to be caught and he was much more powerful and skilled than his father, she knew from experience. She swung open the door, not caring about the noise it made, and ushered everyone inside. She slipped through Snape and Sirius and walked towards the window. The others followed her and watched as she pushed the window open to its maximum. She leaned out and the Monica standing, looking up in anticipation at the window. A ladder of protruding rocks lined the mountain, reaching a flat surface on the mountain, followed by a steep drop.
Rory conducted Snape into the opening. He looked down suspiciously, and backed up, gasping of fear. Rory looked at her greasy haired Professor and said, "What? Go!" "Errr...I've never told anyone this, but I'm terrified of heights...," Snape said, embarrassed. Rory looked at him unbelieving, while Sirius chortled and Kel laughed mercilessly. Rory rolled her eyes and sighed. "Go on Kel, Sirius." They nodded, still chuckling softly, and Kel went out the window, followed seconds later by Sirius. "Snape. Listen. Just don't look down. I'll help you through this," Rory said reliably. He nodded ashamed. "Okay, now, get out of the window, DON'T LOOK DOWN!" She instructed as he complied and stepped out of the window. "Remember, if you fall, I'll just levitate you down, but only if necessary...Now, find some reliable stones...Good. Now find the next set...Great...Keep listening to my voice...Don't look down...Almost there...THERE!" she yelled joyfully as she looked down at the man smiling slightly with pride, and on the ground.
"THERE SHE IS!!!," a drawly voice called from her doorway, just as her door swung open yet again. She swung around to face the intruder. Just as she thought, the platinum blond hair was unmistakable. It was one of two people, and she knew exactly who it was. 'Draco.' She stared at her classmate in boredom as he drew his wand and yelled, "Crucio!!!" She fell out of the window gracefully simultaneously to when his spell hit her in the upper arm. 'Bad aim.' Her arm glowed dark red and absorbed the blow, leaving a dark blue scar in its place.
"WHAT!?!? That's impossible unless..." Draco yelled, pondering what just happened. He sighed regretfully. Dark magic, everything he had been taught would never work on her if what he thought was true. This girl was great. To do what she did...he couldn't even imagine what it was like. He sighed wistfully again, admitted defeat and went to face his fate.
Rory landed gracefully and stood up elegantly, looking at her accomplices, bored, totallly ignoring her glowing and painful arm. "Okay, we're off then. Monica told me how to get out of here, so come on before they catch us! Lead the way Mon."
Monica nodded, and practically skipped her way down the mountain, the others following, with Rory now levitating Snape down. Though she was...ahem vertically challenged, this girl had a sense of direction and was smart, despite her hyper exterior. Monica had explained that they had put up a "no apparating zone" around the mountain for a mile.
They reached about a half mile, barely speaking to one another, until they got to a large tree. "Here. We'll camp here for tonight," Rory said, sullen. She simply laid down, not caring what the others did. She heard some rustling of them getting settled in and waited until silence settled in.
How could he do that? Just when she started to trust? She had thought this was what he was doing, but she didn't know how bad it would hurt when he did... 'Oh well, I've lived through worse...'
Rory rolled over and saw the others sleeping peacefully. Sirius and Kel, again were cuddled together affectionately, but this time it wasn't cold...She sighed and let her eyes drift closed and her breath got deeper and slower...Her last thought before she slept was '...Maybe this is the worst...'
Ludge yall, Rock on!!
If you love any rock/metal songs tell me! I especially like Slipknot, Hatebreed, Mud vein, etc. wink, wink
Zanza!! Everybody check out www.freewebs.com/lunadaluver!!!!
Tennisplaya278: Yeah, my goal is to get my readers sympathetic for poor Draco, and just because the story is taking a turn, doesn't mean he isn't good. Keep reading no matter what I do, okay? It will get better, I promise. Yea, he's away from all of our eyes, BESIDES MINE!!! laughs insanely Of course I can think of girl singers, but I want to know your opinions on these things. I only accept rock, metal, or rock related. Tell me what you think!
Evil Gypsy: THANK YOU!! ATLEAST SOMEONE AGREES WITH ME THAT SNAPE IN A CLOWN SUIT IS SCARY!! Yes, and happiness does suck! Rock on dark and dreary!!! I'm scared of clowns too!! ....I love you.(not really but the fact remains)
Piedermort: Do you think that's what the voices tells all of us? Cause that's what they tell me too...except the Jason part...I don't know who that is...Do you think I should kill him? If I met him? I think everyone is scared of Bond...I think he's gay...slightly...That last part made 0 sense to me...heh-heh! Or was it mindless babble?
DaLuver: OK!!! YOU ARE NOT SHORT!!! YOU ARE VERTICALLY CHALLENGED!!! Coughshortiecough
Anyways on with the story! Where are my LOYAL reviewers this time???!!!???!!!
The night quickly overtook the sunlight (a/n hiss) and darkness shrouded the mountain. Rory, who supposedly went to bed at 9:00, four hours ago, was creeping through the familiar corridors to the dungeons. She reached the door and went into the customary procedure of grabbing the key off of the hook and unlocking it. She creaked it open and peered inside. She'd been right, Draco wasn't in his cell sleeping like the rest of the prisoners. She stepped inside and whispered loudly, "Get up!!" Snape and Kel immediately snapped their eyes open, but Sirius continued to sleep. After looking at Rory, Kel jabbed Sirius in the stomach and he woke up as well, startled. They all turned their attention towards her. This must be the escape, but why hadn't they been warned before? She hushed them and swiftly set them free from their cells with the keys she had held onto. She motioned for them to follow her, and they did despite their worries. But then a thought struck Snape. 'What about Draco?' He, however ignored it and simply followed in silence. She led them down the halls that she had just taken to get there and directed them right back to her rooms.
She could her the soft padding of feet behind her stop. Yes, she knew Draco wasn't there. It was not a mistake, but that boy knew more than he let on. He was not one to be caught and he was much more powerful and skilled than his father, she knew from experience. She swung open the door, not caring about the noise it made, and ushered everyone inside. She slipped through Snape and Sirius and walked towards the window. The others followed her and watched as she pushed the window open to its maximum. She leaned out and the Monica standing, looking up in anticipation at the window. A ladder of protruding rocks lined the mountain, reaching a flat surface on the mountain, followed by a steep drop.
Rory conducted Snape into the opening. He looked down suspiciously, and backed up, gasping of fear. Rory looked at her greasy haired Professor and said, "What? Go!" "Errr...I've never told anyone this, but I'm terrified of heights...," Snape said, embarrassed. Rory looked at him unbelieving, while Sirius chortled and Kel laughed mercilessly. Rory rolled her eyes and sighed. "Go on Kel, Sirius." They nodded, still chuckling softly, and Kel went out the window, followed seconds later by Sirius. "Snape. Listen. Just don't look down. I'll help you through this," Rory said reliably. He nodded ashamed. "Okay, now, get out of the window, DON'T LOOK DOWN!" She instructed as he complied and stepped out of the window. "Remember, if you fall, I'll just levitate you down, but only if necessary...Now, find some reliable stones...Good. Now find the next set...Great...Keep listening to my voice...Don't look down...Almost there...THERE!" she yelled joyfully as she looked down at the man smiling slightly with pride, and on the ground.
"THERE SHE IS!!!," a drawly voice called from her doorway, just as her door swung open yet again. She swung around to face the intruder. Just as she thought, the platinum blond hair was unmistakable. It was one of two people, and she knew exactly who it was. 'Draco.' She stared at her classmate in boredom as he drew his wand and yelled, "Crucio!!!" She fell out of the window gracefully simultaneously to when his spell hit her in the upper arm. 'Bad aim.' Her arm glowed dark red and absorbed the blow, leaving a dark blue scar in its place.
"WHAT!?!? That's impossible unless..." Draco yelled, pondering what just happened. He sighed regretfully. Dark magic, everything he had been taught would never work on her if what he thought was true. This girl was great. To do what she did...he couldn't even imagine what it was like. He sighed wistfully again, admitted defeat and went to face his fate.
Rory landed gracefully and stood up elegantly, looking at her accomplices, bored, totallly ignoring her glowing and painful arm. "Okay, we're off then. Monica told me how to get out of here, so come on before they catch us! Lead the way Mon."
Monica nodded, and practically skipped her way down the mountain, the others following, with Rory now levitating Snape down. Though she was...ahem vertically challenged, this girl had a sense of direction and was smart, despite her hyper exterior. Monica had explained that they had put up a "no apparating zone" around the mountain for a mile.
They reached about a half mile, barely speaking to one another, until they got to a large tree. "Here. We'll camp here for tonight," Rory said, sullen. She simply laid down, not caring what the others did. She heard some rustling of them getting settled in and waited until silence settled in.
How could he do that? Just when she started to trust? She had thought this was what he was doing, but she didn't know how bad it would hurt when he did... 'Oh well, I've lived through worse...'
Rory rolled over and saw the others sleeping peacefully. Sirius and Kel, again were cuddled together affectionately, but this time it wasn't cold...She sighed and let her eyes drift closed and her breath got deeper and slower...Her last thought before she slept was '...Maybe this is the worst...'
Ludge yall, Rock on!!
If you love any rock/metal songs tell me! I especially like Slipknot, Hatebreed, Mud vein, etc. wink, wink
Zanza!! Everybody check out www.freewebs.com/lunadaluver!!!!