rogue4eva: Dude, thanx you so much for telling me where that mistake was,
my
beta reader didn't catch it so I thought it was all good *glares at Azure*
Don't worry, this story is definitely going to continue no matter what,
because
I have huge things in store for it!
ASGT: Glad you like it! Hope you like this chapter just as much!
Peace215: I am so sorry that I haven't written in a while. I know I'm a bad author, but I just haven't had time, between my two Spanish project, my English test, and my journalism story due I just haven't had time to sit down and do anything for me. It's not bathing suits per say, but you'll see what they are, I promise. Yes, blackmailing Scott and Jean are alwaz fun. So glad you liked this chapter and I hope that you like this chapter just as much!
AzureDragoness: HAHAHAHAHAHA, yeah, you do that, but you should be used to all that stuff with what I send you and what you read, I mean, really. I am not your slave damn it! Just because you help me like mad with my Spanish homework does not mean I'm your slave! *looks determined to get her point across* Anyway, glad you like the fic so far, and, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT THE SPATULA!!!
lildaisygirl24: Yes, I do know that some of the younger kids do look up to Jean, but to me, she's just, I don't how to say it, I just don't like her. I've known too many girls like her who screw their friends over. Anyway, I'm glad you like the story, that makes me very happy! Heres your update!
Aurora: lol, I feel so loved from all your reviews! I am so happy you like the story and it had you laughing your ass off. Awwwww I WANNA SEE YOUR FARRETS!!!!! And yes, I know that there are a lot of sleepover stories out there, with Alcohol and the games and stuff, that why I wanted to put a little bit of a twist in mine. Lol, I'm glad my writing is hook worthy. Rogue my fav character too, and im just trying my best to get her personality.
bitrona: lol, who says she's gonna be conscious for the whole sleepover ^_~. What can I say, very few people can have that rich a color of red for hair and have it be natural. Don't worry, pairings are hopefully gonna come soon, along with more games and stuff. Lol, you'll see what Tabby was pointing to ^_~.
SugarSweet11: lol, Tabby's lil fashion show is exactly what it says a fashion show. But tis a special type of fashion show, but don't worry, you'll see when you read! Lol, I don't know if the chasing Scott and Jean will come later after other "accidents" happen to them or not, but don't worry, it will come, that I promise you.
ishandahalf: lol, yeah, gotta love America, having alcohol in the local Wal*Mart. Yes, more fun times in deed, and there are plenty more to come as well. Lol, don't qorry, if your caught, I'll probably be caught with you, because I'd LOVE to have a sleepover in the super Wal*Mart too. So we can both be jail inmates together and cook up fanfics for the viewers! So glad that you like the fic. HOPE YOU CONTINUE READING IT!
hhstyle: That's what I go for, interesting storylines, because I'm just a fuckin' interesting person, and that's scary, lol. I'm glad to like the Jubilee/Bobby thing, if I get anything wrong with them, please tell me, because as I said, I really don't know that much about them.
Metal Dragon1: Oh how right you are hun ^_~.
RoguesHeart: Nah, I'm more of a Reese's Pieces fan. Lol, yes, the games are beginning, and oh how much fun those will be. Don't worry, Red Head Bitch will be sufficiently tortured, and then tortured some more. Dude, while neutering Scott, we can surgically remove the stick out of his ass too. HERE IS YOUR UPDATE!
Lladyred01: lol, I think any guy in a skirt that doesn't have the right legs is scary, but still very very comical. Lol, Bobby and Jubilee make a great pranking team, but you are right, that is as long as you are not the target, or god help your soul. Lol, how does Super Wal*Mart scare you??? Glad you like it so far!
Rogue14: lol, of course Jean isn't a natural red head! They just now have the proof to prove it. WOO HOO! UPDATES ARE GOOD!
Winter: I'm so sorry that no one liked your story hun, but don't let that discourage you from writing. As long as you like what you're writing, then what other people think really doesn't matter. I'm glad you like my story and I hope you keep on reading it!
roguewannabe29: lol, I'm glad that you think you can live another day to read my stuff willingly, that's alwaz an ego booster. I'm glad you like the story so far!
Ok guys, I'm SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SORRY I haven't updated in god only knows how long. School has been such a hassle, it's like the teachers have nothing better to do then to give us homework and projects and tests. Take my advice, NEVER procrastinate an 8 page Spanish project that has you translating A LOT till the last minute, it's REALLY not fun. Anyway, I really hope you don't massacre me for waiting so long to update, but I hope this chapter was wroth the wait!
The guys tried to see what direction Tabby was pointing her head in, but she had righted her head to quickly for them to see. All they new was that it had something to do with clothes since that's the section they were in. All the guys looked at each other in confusion, but when they turned their heads back, all the girls were gone. The guys looked at each other again in silent wonder as to where the girls were and what they were doing. Just then, Christina Aguilara's song Dirrty came blasting over the speakers. The guys looked around startled, not expecting the loud music. Then two spotlights that magically appeared pointed to a stage that also magically appeared surrounded by lights and the back covered by curtains. Jean came out grumpily holding a microphone. She was wearing a neon orange robe, which went to her knees. Her robe was open, showing the neon pink bra that she was wearing. She had fuzzy neon pink bunny slippers on her feet as well. All in all, her outfit blinded everyone. Some of the guys snickered while Scott just turned red.
"I would like to welcome everyone to the special Super Wal*Mart lingerie fashion show," she mumbled into the microphone. Just the, Betsy popped up beside her wearing a purple mesh bra with sequined designs on it, purple underwear that said "Brit" on the front of them, and a, loosely tied robe.
"Luv, you're just doing this way too slow and grumpily, so I'm here to take over for you!" Betsy said as she shoved Jean off the platform where she was, making her fall on the floor exposing the neon blue thong she was wearing. A lot of the boy's catcalled at Jean, making her blush furiously. To the guys, even if she was a stuck up bitch, she still had a nice ass. She quickly got up and stormed away to go find her normal clothes. The guys just gaped at Betsy's outfit. They couldn't believe that Tabby came up with the idea to have a lingerie fashion show. Actually, they could, but they still couldn't believe that the other girls were going along with it.
Ooh, I'm overdue
Gimme some room, I'm comin' through
Paid my dues, I'm in the mood
Me and my girls gonna shake the room
DJ's spinnin (show your hands)
And let's get dirrty (that's my jam)
I need that ... to get me off
Sweatin' till my clothes come off
"Gentlemen, I would like to welcome you to the first and only Wal*Mart lingerie show, with the lovely models modeling different lingerie!" Betsy said enthusiastically into the mic. "First up, we have the lovely Kitty Pryde, or as we like to know her as, The Not-So-Innocent One," Betsy said and directed the guys view to the curtains where Kitty had just stepped out. All of their eyes popped out of their heads, especially Piotrs. Kitty was wearing a pink lace bra that pushed up her boobs, but wasn't a push up bra. She was also sporting pink lacey underwear with the word "Princess" written in the front. She was holding a teddy bear in one hand, and a can of whipped cream in the other. Her pink heels clicked on the wood of the stage that magically appeared a she walked down the runway, the guys eyes glued to her.
Gonna get rowdy Gonna get a little unruly Get it fired up in a hurry Wanna get dirrty It's about time that I came to start the party Sweat drippin' over my body Dancin' gettin' just a little naughty Wanna get dirrty It's about time for my arrival
"Next we have a lovely and very sexy Goth, Rogue as she likes to be called, but while in this gear, she's known as The Soldier." Betsy said and again directed their attention to the curtain. Just as Rogue stepped out, there was a thump heard in the audience. Todd had passed out from seeing his former housemate and what she was wearing. Rogue smiled, as she saw the guy's expressions. If it was possible, the guy's eyes popped out of their heads and all the way to Mexico. All of them, even Scott, were catcalling and whistling at her. She was wearing a camouflage matching string bra and underwear, both that were about a size too small for her, so they accented her hips and boobs and showed off her long creamy white legs. She was wearing an open army jacket over it, sunglasses, and army boots, topped off with a gun strapped around her shoulders. Remy was in complete shock. He could feel Little Remy getting excited about seeing Rogue like this as well. His jaw had hit the ground, quite literally. He had never seen Rogue like this, but he was sure as hell glad he had now. He quickly pulled out a digital camera and started taking pictures of her.
Ahh, heat is up
So ladies, fellas, drop your cups
Body's hot from front to back
Move your ass, I like that
Tight hip huggers (low fo' sho')
Shake a little somethin' (On the floor)
I need that ... to get me off
Sweatin' till my clothes come off
"Next, we have a female by the name Amanda Sefton, but we like to call her The Fierce One," The guys looked to the curtain, barely containing their excitement as they finished off whatever alcoholic beverage they had and grabbed another one in anticipation. They saw a leg come out that was sporting a blue heel. What was attached to that leg that was sporting a blue heel was an outrageously hot human that only Kurt Wagner would know more intimately than this. Amanda smiled and posed a little before she started walking down the runway. She was wearing a blue and black fuzzy leopard print bra, which had a matching thong. On the front was a little black velvet paw print. Kurt was blushing harder than Jean had been, and it was very evident, even through his dark fur.
Let's get open, cause a commotion
We're still goin', 8 in the morning
There's no stoppin', we keep it poppin'
Hard rockin', everyone's talkin'
Be all you got (give it to me)
Just hit the spot
Gonna get my girls
Get your boys
Gonna make some noise...
"Gentlemen, we will now have a 10 minute break, you may look around the Wal*Mart for food or more alcohol to your pleasure," Betsy smiled and bowed, her robe coming undone. The guys knew that they're voices were gonna be raw afterwards, but when they looked at each other, they ALL agreed that it would be worth it.
Ok guys, here ya go, the fashion show part 1. All of you who guessed bathing suits, you were close, but it was lingerie. I figured the guys would never se them like this, and a lot of people model bathing suits, so why not do the lingerie, and believe me Wal*Mart has a nice big ol' section for lingerie. Well, I really hope you liked this chapter and it was worth the wait. I hope that what the characters were modeling somewhat showed their personality and stuff, like Rogue and the solider, because she's like a soldier, strong and determined. Anyway, now I'm rambling, so I'm gonna finish with an: I HOPE YOU ALL REVIEW MY STUFF! I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR YOUR COMMENTS, GOOD AND BAD! But hopefully most of them will be good! LUV YA'LL!!!
ASGT: Glad you like it! Hope you like this chapter just as much!
Peace215: I am so sorry that I haven't written in a while. I know I'm a bad author, but I just haven't had time, between my two Spanish project, my English test, and my journalism story due I just haven't had time to sit down and do anything for me. It's not bathing suits per say, but you'll see what they are, I promise. Yes, blackmailing Scott and Jean are alwaz fun. So glad you liked this chapter and I hope that you like this chapter just as much!
AzureDragoness: HAHAHAHAHAHA, yeah, you do that, but you should be used to all that stuff with what I send you and what you read, I mean, really. I am not your slave damn it! Just because you help me like mad with my Spanish homework does not mean I'm your slave! *looks determined to get her point across* Anyway, glad you like the fic so far, and, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT THE SPATULA!!!
lildaisygirl24: Yes, I do know that some of the younger kids do look up to Jean, but to me, she's just, I don't how to say it, I just don't like her. I've known too many girls like her who screw their friends over. Anyway, I'm glad you like the story, that makes me very happy! Heres your update!
Aurora: lol, I feel so loved from all your reviews! I am so happy you like the story and it had you laughing your ass off. Awwwww I WANNA SEE YOUR FARRETS!!!!! And yes, I know that there are a lot of sleepover stories out there, with Alcohol and the games and stuff, that why I wanted to put a little bit of a twist in mine. Lol, I'm glad my writing is hook worthy. Rogue my fav character too, and im just trying my best to get her personality.
bitrona: lol, who says she's gonna be conscious for the whole sleepover ^_~. What can I say, very few people can have that rich a color of red for hair and have it be natural. Don't worry, pairings are hopefully gonna come soon, along with more games and stuff. Lol, you'll see what Tabby was pointing to ^_~.
SugarSweet11: lol, Tabby's lil fashion show is exactly what it says a fashion show. But tis a special type of fashion show, but don't worry, you'll see when you read! Lol, I don't know if the chasing Scott and Jean will come later after other "accidents" happen to them or not, but don't worry, it will come, that I promise you.
ishandahalf: lol, yeah, gotta love America, having alcohol in the local Wal*Mart. Yes, more fun times in deed, and there are plenty more to come as well. Lol, don't qorry, if your caught, I'll probably be caught with you, because I'd LOVE to have a sleepover in the super Wal*Mart too. So we can both be jail inmates together and cook up fanfics for the viewers! So glad that you like the fic. HOPE YOU CONTINUE READING IT!
hhstyle: That's what I go for, interesting storylines, because I'm just a fuckin' interesting person, and that's scary, lol. I'm glad to like the Jubilee/Bobby thing, if I get anything wrong with them, please tell me, because as I said, I really don't know that much about them.
Metal Dragon1: Oh how right you are hun ^_~.
RoguesHeart: Nah, I'm more of a Reese's Pieces fan. Lol, yes, the games are beginning, and oh how much fun those will be. Don't worry, Red Head Bitch will be sufficiently tortured, and then tortured some more. Dude, while neutering Scott, we can surgically remove the stick out of his ass too. HERE IS YOUR UPDATE!
Lladyred01: lol, I think any guy in a skirt that doesn't have the right legs is scary, but still very very comical. Lol, Bobby and Jubilee make a great pranking team, but you are right, that is as long as you are not the target, or god help your soul. Lol, how does Super Wal*Mart scare you??? Glad you like it so far!
Rogue14: lol, of course Jean isn't a natural red head! They just now have the proof to prove it. WOO HOO! UPDATES ARE GOOD!
Winter: I'm so sorry that no one liked your story hun, but don't let that discourage you from writing. As long as you like what you're writing, then what other people think really doesn't matter. I'm glad you like my story and I hope you keep on reading it!
roguewannabe29: lol, I'm glad that you think you can live another day to read my stuff willingly, that's alwaz an ego booster. I'm glad you like the story so far!
Ok guys, I'm SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SORRY I haven't updated in god only knows how long. School has been such a hassle, it's like the teachers have nothing better to do then to give us homework and projects and tests. Take my advice, NEVER procrastinate an 8 page Spanish project that has you translating A LOT till the last minute, it's REALLY not fun. Anyway, I really hope you don't massacre me for waiting so long to update, but I hope this chapter was wroth the wait!
The guys tried to see what direction Tabby was pointing her head in, but she had righted her head to quickly for them to see. All they new was that it had something to do with clothes since that's the section they were in. All the guys looked at each other in confusion, but when they turned their heads back, all the girls were gone. The guys looked at each other again in silent wonder as to where the girls were and what they were doing. Just then, Christina Aguilara's song Dirrty came blasting over the speakers. The guys looked around startled, not expecting the loud music. Then two spotlights that magically appeared pointed to a stage that also magically appeared surrounded by lights and the back covered by curtains. Jean came out grumpily holding a microphone. She was wearing a neon orange robe, which went to her knees. Her robe was open, showing the neon pink bra that she was wearing. She had fuzzy neon pink bunny slippers on her feet as well. All in all, her outfit blinded everyone. Some of the guys snickered while Scott just turned red.
"I would like to welcome everyone to the special Super Wal*Mart lingerie fashion show," she mumbled into the microphone. Just the, Betsy popped up beside her wearing a purple mesh bra with sequined designs on it, purple underwear that said "Brit" on the front of them, and a, loosely tied robe.
"Luv, you're just doing this way too slow and grumpily, so I'm here to take over for you!" Betsy said as she shoved Jean off the platform where she was, making her fall on the floor exposing the neon blue thong she was wearing. A lot of the boy's catcalled at Jean, making her blush furiously. To the guys, even if she was a stuck up bitch, she still had a nice ass. She quickly got up and stormed away to go find her normal clothes. The guys just gaped at Betsy's outfit. They couldn't believe that Tabby came up with the idea to have a lingerie fashion show. Actually, they could, but they still couldn't believe that the other girls were going along with it.
Ooh, I'm overdue
Gimme some room, I'm comin' through
Paid my dues, I'm in the mood
Me and my girls gonna shake the room
DJ's spinnin (show your hands)
And let's get dirrty (that's my jam)
I need that ... to get me off
Sweatin' till my clothes come off
"Gentlemen, I would like to welcome you to the first and only Wal*Mart lingerie show, with the lovely models modeling different lingerie!" Betsy said enthusiastically into the mic. "First up, we have the lovely Kitty Pryde, or as we like to know her as, The Not-So-Innocent One," Betsy said and directed the guys view to the curtains where Kitty had just stepped out. All of their eyes popped out of their heads, especially Piotrs. Kitty was wearing a pink lace bra that pushed up her boobs, but wasn't a push up bra. She was also sporting pink lacey underwear with the word "Princess" written in the front. She was holding a teddy bear in one hand, and a can of whipped cream in the other. Her pink heels clicked on the wood of the stage that magically appeared a she walked down the runway, the guys eyes glued to her.
Gonna get rowdy Gonna get a little unruly Get it fired up in a hurry Wanna get dirrty It's about time that I came to start the party Sweat drippin' over my body Dancin' gettin' just a little naughty Wanna get dirrty It's about time for my arrival
"Next we have a lovely and very sexy Goth, Rogue as she likes to be called, but while in this gear, she's known as The Soldier." Betsy said and again directed their attention to the curtain. Just as Rogue stepped out, there was a thump heard in the audience. Todd had passed out from seeing his former housemate and what she was wearing. Rogue smiled, as she saw the guy's expressions. If it was possible, the guy's eyes popped out of their heads and all the way to Mexico. All of them, even Scott, were catcalling and whistling at her. She was wearing a camouflage matching string bra and underwear, both that were about a size too small for her, so they accented her hips and boobs and showed off her long creamy white legs. She was wearing an open army jacket over it, sunglasses, and army boots, topped off with a gun strapped around her shoulders. Remy was in complete shock. He could feel Little Remy getting excited about seeing Rogue like this as well. His jaw had hit the ground, quite literally. He had never seen Rogue like this, but he was sure as hell glad he had now. He quickly pulled out a digital camera and started taking pictures of her.
Ahh, heat is up
So ladies, fellas, drop your cups
Body's hot from front to back
Move your ass, I like that
Tight hip huggers (low fo' sho')
Shake a little somethin' (On the floor)
I need that ... to get me off
Sweatin' till my clothes come off
"Next, we have a female by the name Amanda Sefton, but we like to call her The Fierce One," The guys looked to the curtain, barely containing their excitement as they finished off whatever alcoholic beverage they had and grabbed another one in anticipation. They saw a leg come out that was sporting a blue heel. What was attached to that leg that was sporting a blue heel was an outrageously hot human that only Kurt Wagner would know more intimately than this. Amanda smiled and posed a little before she started walking down the runway. She was wearing a blue and black fuzzy leopard print bra, which had a matching thong. On the front was a little black velvet paw print. Kurt was blushing harder than Jean had been, and it was very evident, even through his dark fur.
Let's get open, cause a commotion
We're still goin', 8 in the morning
There's no stoppin', we keep it poppin'
Hard rockin', everyone's talkin'
Be all you got (give it to me)
Just hit the spot
Gonna get my girls
Get your boys
Gonna make some noise...
"Gentlemen, we will now have a 10 minute break, you may look around the Wal*Mart for food or more alcohol to your pleasure," Betsy smiled and bowed, her robe coming undone. The guys knew that they're voices were gonna be raw afterwards, but when they looked at each other, they ALL agreed that it would be worth it.
Ok guys, here ya go, the fashion show part 1. All of you who guessed bathing suits, you were close, but it was lingerie. I figured the guys would never se them like this, and a lot of people model bathing suits, so why not do the lingerie, and believe me Wal*Mart has a nice big ol' section for lingerie. Well, I really hope you liked this chapter and it was worth the wait. I hope that what the characters were modeling somewhat showed their personality and stuff, like Rogue and the solider, because she's like a soldier, strong and determined. Anyway, now I'm rambling, so I'm gonna finish with an: I HOPE YOU ALL REVIEW MY STUFF! I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR YOUR COMMENTS, GOOD AND BAD! But hopefully most of them will be good! LUV YA'LL!!!