Disclaimer: i do not own star wars...(But someday...bwahahahahaha) this is my version of Star wars. There is the same technology and stuff, but different storyline and characters and such...
Star Wars
Episode 1: The Jedi Fall
A Jedi Starfighter flies through a huge battle between the Jedi and the Sith Lords. Ships were blowing up left and right. The battle itself, was between the Jedi and the army the Sith had created. Droids. The droids were varied depending on the kind of battle that was going on. On the ground, huge, thick armoured droids dominated. It took at least two Jedi to take these black droids down. In the air, pilot droids, skinny huminoid droids flew ships from fast starfighters to massive carrier ships. The Jedi Starfighter landed and the cockpit opened slowly. Out came a tall human with short blonde hair. He wore a brown cloak and tunic just like most Jedi. He grabbed a lightersaber from his belt and ignited it. A blue bladed emerged.
He ran towards an army of Jedi and jumped over them using the Force. He cut down a few smaller droids and helped a few Jedi destroy two of the huge droids, which were known as Exterminators. The smaller ones, were called Latchers, because they latched onto faces and pulled the skin off of their enemies.
"Zeon! Behind you!" A scout called on the comlink. Zeon, who was the Jedi's name, looked behind him. At least 10 Exterminators were behind him. He called upon the Force and pushed the front ones into the ones behind them and they all collapsed. He ran up to them and before they could get up, he stabed each one in the head with his lightsaber.
Suddenly, a whistling sound could be heard. He looked up and saw bombers. A whole fleet of them. Each one dropped more than fifty bombs. The bombs landed right in the middle of the Jedi army. Dust formed everywhere and the Jedi couldn't see. Zeon fell to the ground and crawled into a hole made by missles from an Exterminator.
Later
Zeon peeked out of the hole and saw thousands of dead Jedi. He saw Scavengers, small flying droids, looking for survivors. He slowly crept out of the hole and found an undamaged droid starfighter. He climbed into the cockpit and flew off into space.
Okay everyone, it's probably not that good, and most likely too short. But i'm not very good and/or suckish. But please review and tell me what you think. No flames, only constructive critisism.