Okay here goes the second chapter...
Chapter 2: Return to Sourrn
Zeon flew the droid starfighter to Sourrn, a planet completely covered in water, with the acception of hundreds of islands. He landed on one of the small ones and jumped out of the cockpit. He found a small building with a door on it. He opened the door and walked in. It was an underground tunnel that led to the other islands. He found scattered bodies and broken droids throughout the tunnel. When he got to another door, he opened it slowly. He looked out to see droid armies marching into the Jedi Temple. The temple had a thousands of rooms, including bedrooms for the Jedi who stay there. This was the only standing Temple left in the galaxy, well, probably not anymore. These droids were blasting cannons at the building, and Zeon could hear screams coming from inside the Temple.
The Padawans... Zeon thought. He opened the door completely and snuck to the side of the temple, climbed the wall and looked through the window. He saw Jedi being slaughtered everywhere. He jumped into the building, using the Force to remain invisible. Zeon walked through some of the rooms and saw frightened Younglings backed into corners. He sighed and said to himself, " Nothing I can do... I could try to save these children but I could risk dying, and I could be the last hope for the Order..."
He went into the medical station and saw all the beds were empty but one. He walked towards it. "Jay-Lynn!" He said. He looked behind him and saw that droids were approaching. Jay-Lynn, or Lynn as everyone called her, had long blonde hair, and light blue eyes. She was about 6' tall. When Zeon wasn't out on the battlefield, he sparred with her in the training room. She beat him almost everytime. She had been stationed here a few days back to defend the Temple from a smaller droid attack. She must've gotten injured... Zeon thought. Without hesitation, he grabbed her and used a Force Jump to get out of the window that was almost touching the ceiling.
He walked to back and used a retinal door, which he had acccess to, that led to a docking bay. He found a small cruiser, that could fit about 6 people. He put Lynn in a seat and got into the driver's seat. He hit a button on the controls and the doors to the docking bay door opened and he blasted off.
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Okay the end of the chapter. Zeon speaks! lol. Again too short, but i'll get more later...probably not...
who said that:) but anyway, bear with me, it's my first fic, so again no flames, just constructive critisism.