I feel really bad for not updating so I wrote a really quick chapter and posted it without proof reading.. IM REALLY SORRY!
Okay for all of those who care about whose winning in the voting are (as of today)
Paul:8
Jesse:3
Im thinking that if it's a tie at the end I'll have two chapters...one with a Jesse ending and one with a Paul ending. (The jesse ending will be published first cuz I kinda like him better.)
Thanks for the reviews!
As I walked into the house the fist thing I saw were 2 kids sitting at the table. The older one looked really pissed off but confused at the same time. He appeared to be a stereotypical jock, you know cute, dumb and completely unaware of his surroundings...the whole package.
The other boy was freckled, had bright red hair and a nerdy look about him. He also seemed to be causing the confused look on the other dudes face. "You see Brad, the soil then... oh hello I don't believe we've meet." Is what the younger one was saying when me and paul walked in. "Erm, hi I'm suze and this is paul...were friends of your brothers." I said this kind of nervously because the little guy looked as if he was judging me.
"Its very nice to meet you I'm David." The freckly one said to me with a smile, I kind of assumed that he was the smarter one of all the brothers.
The older one grunted at me in greeting mumbled his name (Brad) and looked behind me at Andy and said "can we eat now?"
Andy gave Brad a warning look and said "I'll go get the meatloaf." When I heard we were eating meatloaf I wasn't exactly jumping for joy, I mean usually when I think meatloaf I think shitty cafeteria food. But not this meatloaf my friends, ooooohhhh no this was super meatloaf. I swear I never really thought meatloaf could taste this way, I guess I was wrong.
But um I guess that enough about meatloaf. There wasn't much conversation at the table. All the guys were too busy shoveling food into their faces like freaking animals and me and andy were too busy watching, him with a look of distaste on his face and me with a look of complete shock.
I decided that it was time to leave the table and try to find jakes mom and um, I was starting to feel sick.
"Um...this is really good." I said. Andy replied thank you not tearing his eyes away from his sons. "Uh, which way to the bathroom?" I asked, I know real smooth.
"Down the hall and to your right." Andy said.
I walked down the hall darting my head in all directions but I saw nothing. "whatever." I thought
"less work for me." Just as I was calming down I caught a glimpse of a glowing figure outside, and let me just say...it sure as hell wasn't jake's mom.
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