Sorry for the delay in updating, Sunday was my birthday and yesterday I was
up until 7 in the morning with my friend watching movies and six episodes
of CSI Season 2.
I'd like to thank the 3 people who replied to my story, Kaarin that's you too.
Big thanks to Em. I'm glad you liked the first chapter, and I plan to update as fast as I can think up the next addition to the plot line.
To my other replier, last time I checked, boring didn't count as constructive criticism, but thank you for your time.
The usual disclaimer, I only own my stuff. On with the story.
Rating still doesn't apply, but it will later on. Please read and enjoy.
A young girl walked up the CSI Security Desk. The guard looked up at her, she was a nice looking girl probably around 23 or so, nice hair, tall, with a slim but not too slim build.
"Can I help you miss?"
The girl looked kind of nervous, and she fidgeted a bit when he started talking to her, "Umm... Yeah, is Mr. Gil Grissom in?"
The guard wondered why a girl her age would be wandering into crime lab at that time in the evening and asking for Grissom. "Do you have an appointment to see him? "
The girl got even more nervous and she wrung her hands a bit ~ I hope he lets me in, because I wasn't told to have an appointment, I was just told to come at 6:30. ~ "No, but I think he's expecting me, he told me to come at 6:30."
The guard looked her over, she looked nervous but not suspicious, so he grabbed a visitor's badge and held it out to her, "Alright miss, take this, clip it in a visible spot and go in. To get to Grissom's office you need to go down this hallway, take a left and go three doors past the DNA lab, that's his office."
She took the visitor badge and clipped it to her breast pocket and flashed the guard a quick smile, "Thanks a lot."
Greg was working on Grissom's DNA from the previous night's case while singing along to The Who's Pinball Wizard. The test was almost done, and as he looked up from his computer he saw an amazing looking young woman. He couldn't see much of her face because she looked straight ahead the whole time she was passing his door, but he could see that she had shoulder length dark blonde hair and a medium fair complexion. What was startling to him was her choice of clothing; she was wearing a black men's tuxedo shirt with the sleeves rolled up to her elbows over a dark red tank top, he continued looking down her body to see a straight, dark denim skirt that came to right above her knees with a slight slit in the front, the skirt was secured by a black belt with silver studs. The topper came at the very bottom of her ensemble; she was wearing low top Chuck Taylor's (Converse All-Stars) with red ribbon laces. ~ Damn, why do all the good looking ones have to be either criminals or distraught witnesses. Too bad my new partner's a man; this lab could use some more estrogen, especially Greg- friendly estrogen. ~
Grissom was sitting in his office looking over some case files remembering the significance of each case and the part it had played in the lives of his crew when he heard a knock at his office door. "Come in."
The young girl slowly opened the door and stepped into the room, "Mr. Grissom."
Grissom looked up at the young woman who had just walked into his office and stood up, "Yes, how can I help you."
The girl started to fidget a bit again, and Grissom noticed that she seemed nervous about something, "Well, I'm Anna Spiegel..."
She looked at Grissom like he was supposed to recognize her but all she got was a blank stare. She started to get that feeling in the pit of her stomach that a person only gets when they've been royally embarrassed. She barely could get out the rest of her statement, "I'm here for my first day of work."
Grissom looked at the Anna girl with a very confused frown, ~ Who is this kid, and why does she think that she has a job here. ~ "Excuse me?"
Anna's face fell, she thought she had gotten the job, but maybe it was all a very mean figment of her imagination. She tried to explain what she thought she was there for in hopes to salvage her possible job, "I'm your new Forensic Biologist from KU. You told me to be here at 6:30 pm on Tuesday..."
"I know when I told the new lab tech to come, but the new lab tech is a male, and his name is Christopher Spiegel, and I'm sorry miss, but you don't look too much like a Christopher."
Anna's face got even redder than it had earlier, this is something that got her all the time, and it was so hard to explain to even the most intelligent, open-minded people, "Actually... Well... Umm Uh... This is kinda embarrassing, but I really am a Christopher."
Grissom looked quite shocked at this statement from the young woman, ~ She can't be serious, because that's just silly, and she told me her name was Anna. ~ But the look on Anna's face told him otherwise, "You're serious aren't you."
"Yep, I have a story though. See, my parents wanted a boy and a girl, and my sister came first so check girl off of the list, but then the glitch came in and I was born. My parents were...disappointed...and they thought it would be a nice idea to honor the son that they never had by naming me Anna Christopher Spiegel. Has a nice ring doesn't it."
Grissom noticed that Anna seemed to fly through her speech, like she had done it millions of times. He pretty much believe her after that, because her story was so out there that it couldn't be made up, but he wanted to see some proof before he completely believed her story, "Can I see your license please?"
Anna looked quite relieved, she was out of hot water and cruising for dry land, "Here it is sir, my brand new Nevada, state approved, not Missouri, not Kansas license."
Grissom took the slip of plastic from her outstretched arm and looked hard at the picture, then back at Anna, then at the picture, then back at Anna. Finally he looked satisfied, and he handed her back her license, "Welcome to the team Miss Spiegel."
Wow, that chapter's long compared to number one. I hope you enjoy it; it took a long time to think up.
Hey, KU is a number 4 seed in the NCAA Tournament. Hoorah!
Hey, please review and tell me what you think, and what could make this story better. I promise more Greg soon, she has to be worked into the team first.
Bye.
I'd like to thank the 3 people who replied to my story, Kaarin that's you too.
Big thanks to Em. I'm glad you liked the first chapter, and I plan to update as fast as I can think up the next addition to the plot line.
To my other replier, last time I checked, boring didn't count as constructive criticism, but thank you for your time.
The usual disclaimer, I only own my stuff. On with the story.
Rating still doesn't apply, but it will later on. Please read and enjoy.
A young girl walked up the CSI Security Desk. The guard looked up at her, she was a nice looking girl probably around 23 or so, nice hair, tall, with a slim but not too slim build.
"Can I help you miss?"
The girl looked kind of nervous, and she fidgeted a bit when he started talking to her, "Umm... Yeah, is Mr. Gil Grissom in?"
The guard wondered why a girl her age would be wandering into crime lab at that time in the evening and asking for Grissom. "Do you have an appointment to see him? "
The girl got even more nervous and she wrung her hands a bit ~ I hope he lets me in, because I wasn't told to have an appointment, I was just told to come at 6:30. ~ "No, but I think he's expecting me, he told me to come at 6:30."
The guard looked her over, she looked nervous but not suspicious, so he grabbed a visitor's badge and held it out to her, "Alright miss, take this, clip it in a visible spot and go in. To get to Grissom's office you need to go down this hallway, take a left and go three doors past the DNA lab, that's his office."
She took the visitor badge and clipped it to her breast pocket and flashed the guard a quick smile, "Thanks a lot."
Greg was working on Grissom's DNA from the previous night's case while singing along to The Who's Pinball Wizard. The test was almost done, and as he looked up from his computer he saw an amazing looking young woman. He couldn't see much of her face because she looked straight ahead the whole time she was passing his door, but he could see that she had shoulder length dark blonde hair and a medium fair complexion. What was startling to him was her choice of clothing; she was wearing a black men's tuxedo shirt with the sleeves rolled up to her elbows over a dark red tank top, he continued looking down her body to see a straight, dark denim skirt that came to right above her knees with a slight slit in the front, the skirt was secured by a black belt with silver studs. The topper came at the very bottom of her ensemble; she was wearing low top Chuck Taylor's (Converse All-Stars) with red ribbon laces. ~ Damn, why do all the good looking ones have to be either criminals or distraught witnesses. Too bad my new partner's a man; this lab could use some more estrogen, especially Greg- friendly estrogen. ~
Grissom was sitting in his office looking over some case files remembering the significance of each case and the part it had played in the lives of his crew when he heard a knock at his office door. "Come in."
The young girl slowly opened the door and stepped into the room, "Mr. Grissom."
Grissom looked up at the young woman who had just walked into his office and stood up, "Yes, how can I help you."
The girl started to fidget a bit again, and Grissom noticed that she seemed nervous about something, "Well, I'm Anna Spiegel..."
She looked at Grissom like he was supposed to recognize her but all she got was a blank stare. She started to get that feeling in the pit of her stomach that a person only gets when they've been royally embarrassed. She barely could get out the rest of her statement, "I'm here for my first day of work."
Grissom looked at the Anna girl with a very confused frown, ~ Who is this kid, and why does she think that she has a job here. ~ "Excuse me?"
Anna's face fell, she thought she had gotten the job, but maybe it was all a very mean figment of her imagination. She tried to explain what she thought she was there for in hopes to salvage her possible job, "I'm your new Forensic Biologist from KU. You told me to be here at 6:30 pm on Tuesday..."
"I know when I told the new lab tech to come, but the new lab tech is a male, and his name is Christopher Spiegel, and I'm sorry miss, but you don't look too much like a Christopher."
Anna's face got even redder than it had earlier, this is something that got her all the time, and it was so hard to explain to even the most intelligent, open-minded people, "Actually... Well... Umm Uh... This is kinda embarrassing, but I really am a Christopher."
Grissom looked quite shocked at this statement from the young woman, ~ She can't be serious, because that's just silly, and she told me her name was Anna. ~ But the look on Anna's face told him otherwise, "You're serious aren't you."
"Yep, I have a story though. See, my parents wanted a boy and a girl, and my sister came first so check girl off of the list, but then the glitch came in and I was born. My parents were...disappointed...and they thought it would be a nice idea to honor the son that they never had by naming me Anna Christopher Spiegel. Has a nice ring doesn't it."
Grissom noticed that Anna seemed to fly through her speech, like she had done it millions of times. He pretty much believe her after that, because her story was so out there that it couldn't be made up, but he wanted to see some proof before he completely believed her story, "Can I see your license please?"
Anna looked quite relieved, she was out of hot water and cruising for dry land, "Here it is sir, my brand new Nevada, state approved, not Missouri, not Kansas license."
Grissom took the slip of plastic from her outstretched arm and looked hard at the picture, then back at Anna, then at the picture, then back at Anna. Finally he looked satisfied, and he handed her back her license, "Welcome to the team Miss Spiegel."
Wow, that chapter's long compared to number one. I hope you enjoy it; it took a long time to think up.
Hey, KU is a number 4 seed in the NCAA Tournament. Hoorah!
Hey, please review and tell me what you think, and what could make this story better. I promise more Greg soon, she has to be worked into the team first.
Bye.
