Sweet Emotion
Author: LadyMonarchDragon
Summary: On a routine trip to the grocery store, Shindou Shuichi finds a kid in an alley. His memory is gone, and everyone has some serious sorting out to do.
Author's Note: Hello, again, my friends! I was not gonna write a new chapter, but the Shuichi and Yuki in my head kept telling me to write one. Ouch, my fingers hurt too, because I'm already working on the sequel! I now know exactly how and when this story will end, and what the next story will be about. I'm all over it!
Cutelilpuppieyez: ah! omg that last part was so scary! i was frightened! meanie! (just joking ) eew for dirty scary old men, (and mean old hobos!) hehe im glad you updates alot, and right now I'm going to go tell my friend to come review your story!
uhoh! what's going to happen to Kaito! ah im scared i hope that Shuichi and Yuki find him in time! update before all of my nails are gone
oh
no! i hope that evil man doesn't go near poor shuichi and his friend
is creepy too! ahh!
oh i was so happy that Yuki is being nicer
to Shuichi, like he should...could you maybe have more of Hiro and
Suguru in the next chapter (not necessarily together, just
there...you know, if it doesn't kill the story?)
p.s i luv how
you refer to Shuichi as Yuki's "love"
poor
Yuki! oh he so proud too, i hope they don't hurt him too bad :( i
hope shuichi finds them soon!
aw the part about Yuki going off to
cry by himself was so sweet, i can just imagine him doing
that!
Saruwatari is such an evil man, i hope he dies
Takato the Dreamer: Aww... poor guy :(.. Update soon!
Aw poor Kaito :( I love this story though! You already updated so im printing out chapter 8 for study hall CANT WAIT! And i shall review when i get home!
TWO CHAPTERS IN A DAY! You are SO awsome! I HATE these people... i was kind of hopeing it WAS shuichi so they would help eachother and fall in love. ...I love Keito and i want him to be with Shuichi! Congrads on the updates! (For some reason... i cant get you to author alert... i keep clicking it but i never get the mail :(.)
Kalidescopereflections:
ewew
my friend cutelilpuppieyez just came on msn and gave me a good
talking to, and i'm very sorry because i did read your story before,
and i absolutely loved it, but i was too lazy to review! waah im
sorry please forgive me!
i really like the last few
chapters...(heheh angst!) especially the part about the hobo...gr.
...i just want to kill that meanie Takumi!
update soon please and
i will review everytime i swear! toodles for now!
FranceGamble: Very good chapters! I'm enjoying them. Sorry for the late review, work calls you know. I'm glad I gave you confidence again to continue writing. I know other people will start reading this. I've already gave the story to my cousin and she's added it to her long list of "need to read" stories. She should get to it soon, and she always reviews.
Well, I must go. I hope to see a new chapter soon. I'm starting to get worried for poor Kaito. I hope Yuki and Shuichi find him soon.
France
Author's Note: Sorry, DARK WRYDER and pikapikaryuchan, I didn't write your reviews b/c I was running out of space.
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" Thanks so much for helping me, Ryuichi."
" No problem, Shu-chan, na no da! Kumagoro's glad to help too!"
"With your help, Ryu, we'll find them for sure."
Ryuichi sat down at a bench along the bus stop. Shu sat down beside him. " I'm worried though, Shuichi. Kaito's just a boy…he could never stand up to a kidnapping psycho! I'm worried for Yuki too, but he can take care of himself. Poor guys."
Shuichi looked at him. How did Ryuichi always know what he was thinking? It was spooky. It was almost as If Kumagoro read Shuichi's mind and told Sakuma everything. " Me too, Ryu-kun."
Shuichi looked up at the clouds. They were light and fluffy, because today was unseasonably warm. People were out enjoying the sun, and if Kaito and Yuki were okay, Shuichi would go to the beach.
"Shuichi?"
Shuichi looked over at Ryu. " Yeah?" The older man was watching the clouds too. " D'ya think we should call the cops? I mean, then we'd have the whole police force out looking for both of them and we'd more than double our chances of finding them."
Shuichi considered this. " I don't think that's a good idea. If the kidnapper finds out, he could kill them both, ditch the bodies, and it'd look like they'd never been there."
Ryuichi considered that possibility. " Yes, but on our own, we can only search outside. We can't very well go into people's houses and look. Only the cops can do that." The Nittle Grasper singer looked casually across the street, and saw an ice cream shop.
"Oooh, Shu-kun, let's go get some ice cream! Please?" said Ryuichi, begging. "Yes I want ice cream too!" exclaimed Kumagoro in agreement. Shuichi grinned a shadow of a grin. " Sure, let's go get some ice cream."
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Yuki! Yuki, wake up!" Kaito shook the man, who was heavily bruised. "Uh…Kai..to?" Kaito broke into a grin. " Oh, Yuki! You're alright!" Yuki sat up, and remembered all the events leading to where he was now.
" Kaito, we got to escape…" said Yuki, wincing a little. He looked at the younger boy. There was a cut that was turning to a scar under his eye, and the bloody whip marks were clotting nicely. His ribs were visible, and he was severely skinny. Kaito's hair was matted with blood and semen. The brunette's lips were chapped and cracked. Bruises covered the boy's body, and he seems to be held together with duct tape.
" Yuki, we can't. The door's locked, and there's no other way out of here…" Kaito stopped abruptly, as he looked at the sunbeam on his leg. "Yuki, look…" The blonde followed his gaze, and saw the window. Yuki grinned mischievously, and Kaito smiled for the first time since his got here. " Kaito, let's break out of this dump."
Kaito got up on wobbly legs to look out the window, but it was far too high, up near the ceiling. " Yuki, we can't reach the window." Yuki tried to get up too, but the handcuffs prevented him from using his hands to move. Kaito noticed this, and walked over to the handcuffed novelist.
" I think we can break these cuffs…" Kaito tugged at the chain, to no avail. " That's not gonna work…" whispered Yuki, and closed his tired eyes. Kaito furrowed his brow in concentration and frustration, and tugged again, reopening some cuts on Yuki's wrists from the cuffs being too tight.
" Ouch! Kaito, that hurts!" exclaimed Yuki, trying to wrench his wrists out of the brunette's grasp. " Sorry, Yuki." Kaito stopped pulling and blushing, putting his hands on Yuki's bare waist. Yuki blushed too, and Yuki braced his legs to stand up, and Kaito pulled from the blonde's abdomen.
Soon Yuki was standing up, and the two were trying to figure out how to both climb out the window, and to snap off Yuki's cuffs. They decided to move the bed.
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Saruwatari grunted, reading a story about some spelling bee champ in the newspaper. It was dull, but he had nothing else to do. He grinned evilly, and decided to go rape the kid. He got up, threw the newspaper on the ground, and heard something. It sounded like a piece of furniture being dragged across the floor. His face went pale, and he ran to the torture chamber.
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" Al…most…there…" The bed scooted across the floor, till it was against the wall. " There. That will work." Since Yuki couldn't push the bed, he was gauging how close to the wall the bed should be. " Ok, now let's get out of this nightmare…"
The door slammed open, and Saruwatari was pale and confused, to flushed to quizzical, to red and angry. " How…dare you…TRY TO ESCAPE!" the man walked over to Kaito, and punched him arrow straight in the stomach. He did it again and again, till Kaito couldn't move anymore. " Stop! Leave him alone!" cried Yuki, fearing that the angry man would kill his friend.
" He didn't move the bed! I did!" yelled Yuki, trying to distract the enraged blonde. Saruwatari laughed cruelly. "You can't even touch your nose, much less move a bed!" Yuki gritted his teeth, and said, " Who cares? It was my idea! I bullied him into doing it. Punish me, and leave him be!" Saruwatari grinned again, and grabbed Yuki by the throat. He squeezed slightly, and said, " Let's do this in the other room." Saruwatari dragged the man out of the room, and closed and locked the door.
Kaito couldn't move. He was sure at least one of his ribs were broken. " Y-yuki…" He closed his eyes, and didn't open them again.
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At the ice cream shop, Ryuichi and Shuichi sat at one of those outside tables. "Aren't ya gonna eat your cone, Shu?" said Kumagoro, digging in. " Yeah, Shuichi, your ice cream's melting."
Shuichi looked down, and grunted. " Ryuichi, maybe you're right. Let's go to the police." Ryuichi looked at his friend. " But what if the scenario you mentioned happens? We'll never see Yuki or Kaito again!" Shuichi looked right at Ryuichi, and said," Well, we'll just have to take that chance."
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So, that's it! That's the chapter! Yay! Review!
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