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Jordan (Aly). Thommis has been changed to Devin Salrakom and I decided to not use Imonja. I will add more characters in the future. Enough of my babble on with the stoy...


Ch.8 The Palace
When they got to the palace they took Jess and Jordan to stable their horses at the Riders stables so they could run with the other ponies and horses.

"We don't have any stuff except our tack and we would like to keep it with us if possible, I'm sure that people would ask questions and we would like to stay on a low profile." Jess looked to Jordan who nodded and looked at Kel.

"I think that's a good idea. We can get you rooms in the guest wing." Kel led Jordan and Jess to their rooms with a word to Salma to give them proper clothing but to ask if they wanted breeches or dresses.

When they were properly dressed, both in breeches and a shirt, Jordan in crimson shirt and black breeches and Jess in royal blue shirt and black breeches, Kel left to speak with the King.

"So what do you think, I'm definitely excited, I mean this is like a dream. Hey Jordan didn't we talk about this dreaming that we could come here. We're living a dream hear."

"I know isn't it cool we can..." she was interrupted by a knock at the door.

"I'll get it. Hide the saddles Jess." Jess hid the saddles under the bed and stood by Jordan

"Yes what is it?"

"The King asks for your presence in his study at once and I am to take you."

"Oh all right, hold on." Jess went back to grab her wallet out of her pantce then came back to the door.

"Ok lets go." As the servent took them along the corridors Jordan whispered to Jess "What did you grab?"

"Oh that, I grabbed my wallet it has my diary keys and a special coin in it."

"Oh ok" With that Jordan and Jess continued to follow the servant down the long halls.
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