Hey my faithful viewers. I'm not going to put another chapter up until I
get some reviews. I'm trying to find out what I need to improve my story.
Sorry but I'm in the learning process.
All right I know that I put that Inu tells Kagome the truth too soon and the werewolf thing is a little lame but I promise to make up for that later on during the story OK.
After we discover the truth behind InuYasha and now introduced Ayame, Inu leaves and tells the two that where he works at in a club called "Fire Flight". The Two ladies are getting ready to go with Kouga and Sango. Ayame with her red hair and beautiful skin as well as Kagome lushes body both are trying to find just the right out fits to put on. Finally deciding on an outfit Ayame wears a red mini-skirt and black knee high boots with matching black and red tight shirt. Kagome wears a black tank top with black booty shorts also wearing black knee high boots. When the see the others outfit they give each other a thumps up.
"I hope Kouga like this outfit I have on," Ayame says with a little sigh. "Damn Ayame, how long have you been after him?" "About two month's but I think he likes you." "You know what don't give up. He will come around sooner or later." "All right," Ayame smiles and cheers up," Besides no use going to a club being sad."
Kouga and Sango arrive at their apartment Sango wore a black leather hulter top and leather booty shorts with ankle length leather boots. Kouga in a red muscle shirt and black jeans. He looked at Ayame and Kagome and almost passed out by the beauty of the two. After shaking it off, they departed to go to the club.
On there arrival Miroku was working on the outside. He saw Sango and Kagome with two other companions. He let them in as he tried to keep the strays out. Once they entered they found InuYasha and another man that looked like him but slightly taller and older right next to him. All three men were wearing black pants and blue shirts, but InuYasha was wearing a black Jacket with his outfit. He noticed Kagome and resisted the urge to take her then. Kagome walks toward InuYasha and hugs him tight.
"Kagome this is my brother Seshomaru," He looks at his brother as to have a look saying "be nice". Kagome extends her hand to greet him. He reluctantly took it and said rather coldly and replies," It's nice to meet the girl he never shuts up about." InuYasha looks at his elder sibling with utter hatred. "Kagome kisses him which calms him down and heads to the others. Once with them the girls hear the song "Milk Shake" Play.
As they enter the dance floor another girl and her friends challenge the three to something like a dance off. The music plays as the dance. Sango recognizes one of the girls as Kagura. Kagura with Kanna and Kikyo start to dance. Kagura dressed in a white and blue dress, Kikyo dressed in all red shirt and skirt outfit, while last but not least Kanna dressed in an all white pants outfit with black shoes and jacket. They flip backwards and dance in rhythm. As the song continued they twirled and danced. They did splits and danced while flipping. Not caring that some of the girls' underwear was showing. Kagome and friends laugh as the song and the routine came to a close. Unfortunately, Ayame wouldn't dance because of her out fit. Luckily the female siblings were there watching and soon came to embarrass these wannabe dancers.
"Kagome let us help." Kaito says while smiling, but something wasn't right about "Yeah Kagome, we love this kind of stuff," The two siblings look at Kagome.
Kaito the older sibling is wearing black leather pants with a halter top and Chimera is wearing a blue shirt with fishnet shirt and stockings and blue booty shorts.
"Alright, you win"
Missy Elliot "HOT" was on how fitting for them. Kaito and chimera braked dance to the beat. Then doing a handstand twirl and land then flip. Kagome and Sango then in turn danced with grace and force. Showing there agility they in turn flip and there legs are caught by the two siblings. After that they use there leverage to hop over there shoulders. The brothers were both mesmerized by there agility, as well as, Miroku and Kouga. As they kicked and twirled and danced Sango did a split under Kagome as she flipped over and sat down in a chair. Kaito and her sister both laughed as the rest of the club was at a stand still. Applause roared through the club, self-evident of who won.
"Sango don't think that you are better than me this has just begun," Kagura says with venom as she is approached by a dark haired man. He was handsome except for that fact that to the others he was plan creepy. Kaito whispers something into her sister's ear and they both nodded.
"Girls, he has bad vibes I don't trust him or either of them for that matter," Kaito looks as if she was ready to leave in a hurry unlike her to do such things," InuYasha we are going to leave soon. I'm sorry that this has to happen but for everyone's safety I think we should go." "Hell no," he says with utter defiance," You all are going to stay. I, my bother and Miroku are bouncers here. You will be safe." "Mere humans can't stop him, he is a vampire a very powerful one at that," Chimera looks at the others," I will not sacrifice these people to his blood lust"
Kagura looks up and smiles," Too late you fool. Naraku my lord show them exactly what you are able to do." Then he smiles bearing fangs and all and goes straight for Chimera. Kaito sends a spell toward him that catches him off guard and he can't move. "HURRY!!!! HE CAN BREAK IT SOON!!!"
The others come and run to Sango's car and a black Lincoln Sudan. They all go to InuYasha's place were to there amazement looked somewhat like a palace. Miroku then placed a spell barrier to keep away the unwanted visitors. You all shall be safe here. Miroku looks at Kaito and Chimera what was that all about and how come you can cast spells.
Okay people I know It's not all that but hey I'm trying. REVIEW PLEASE.
All right I know that I put that Inu tells Kagome the truth too soon and the werewolf thing is a little lame but I promise to make up for that later on during the story OK.
After we discover the truth behind InuYasha and now introduced Ayame, Inu leaves and tells the two that where he works at in a club called "Fire Flight". The Two ladies are getting ready to go with Kouga and Sango. Ayame with her red hair and beautiful skin as well as Kagome lushes body both are trying to find just the right out fits to put on. Finally deciding on an outfit Ayame wears a red mini-skirt and black knee high boots with matching black and red tight shirt. Kagome wears a black tank top with black booty shorts also wearing black knee high boots. When the see the others outfit they give each other a thumps up.
"I hope Kouga like this outfit I have on," Ayame says with a little sigh. "Damn Ayame, how long have you been after him?" "About two month's but I think he likes you." "You know what don't give up. He will come around sooner or later." "All right," Ayame smiles and cheers up," Besides no use going to a club being sad."
Kouga and Sango arrive at their apartment Sango wore a black leather hulter top and leather booty shorts with ankle length leather boots. Kouga in a red muscle shirt and black jeans. He looked at Ayame and Kagome and almost passed out by the beauty of the two. After shaking it off, they departed to go to the club.
On there arrival Miroku was working on the outside. He saw Sango and Kagome with two other companions. He let them in as he tried to keep the strays out. Once they entered they found InuYasha and another man that looked like him but slightly taller and older right next to him. All three men were wearing black pants and blue shirts, but InuYasha was wearing a black Jacket with his outfit. He noticed Kagome and resisted the urge to take her then. Kagome walks toward InuYasha and hugs him tight.
"Kagome this is my brother Seshomaru," He looks at his brother as to have a look saying "be nice". Kagome extends her hand to greet him. He reluctantly took it and said rather coldly and replies," It's nice to meet the girl he never shuts up about." InuYasha looks at his elder sibling with utter hatred. "Kagome kisses him which calms him down and heads to the others. Once with them the girls hear the song "Milk Shake" Play.
As they enter the dance floor another girl and her friends challenge the three to something like a dance off. The music plays as the dance. Sango recognizes one of the girls as Kagura. Kagura with Kanna and Kikyo start to dance. Kagura dressed in a white and blue dress, Kikyo dressed in all red shirt and skirt outfit, while last but not least Kanna dressed in an all white pants outfit with black shoes and jacket. They flip backwards and dance in rhythm. As the song continued they twirled and danced. They did splits and danced while flipping. Not caring that some of the girls' underwear was showing. Kagome and friends laugh as the song and the routine came to a close. Unfortunately, Ayame wouldn't dance because of her out fit. Luckily the female siblings were there watching and soon came to embarrass these wannabe dancers.
"Kagome let us help." Kaito says while smiling, but something wasn't right about "Yeah Kagome, we love this kind of stuff," The two siblings look at Kagome.
Kaito the older sibling is wearing black leather pants with a halter top and Chimera is wearing a blue shirt with fishnet shirt and stockings and blue booty shorts.
"Alright, you win"
Missy Elliot "HOT" was on how fitting for them. Kaito and chimera braked dance to the beat. Then doing a handstand twirl and land then flip. Kagome and Sango then in turn danced with grace and force. Showing there agility they in turn flip and there legs are caught by the two siblings. After that they use there leverage to hop over there shoulders. The brothers were both mesmerized by there agility, as well as, Miroku and Kouga. As they kicked and twirled and danced Sango did a split under Kagome as she flipped over and sat down in a chair. Kaito and her sister both laughed as the rest of the club was at a stand still. Applause roared through the club, self-evident of who won.
"Sango don't think that you are better than me this has just begun," Kagura says with venom as she is approached by a dark haired man. He was handsome except for that fact that to the others he was plan creepy. Kaito whispers something into her sister's ear and they both nodded.
"Girls, he has bad vibes I don't trust him or either of them for that matter," Kaito looks as if she was ready to leave in a hurry unlike her to do such things," InuYasha we are going to leave soon. I'm sorry that this has to happen but for everyone's safety I think we should go." "Hell no," he says with utter defiance," You all are going to stay. I, my bother and Miroku are bouncers here. You will be safe." "Mere humans can't stop him, he is a vampire a very powerful one at that," Chimera looks at the others," I will not sacrifice these people to his blood lust"
Kagura looks up and smiles," Too late you fool. Naraku my lord show them exactly what you are able to do." Then he smiles bearing fangs and all and goes straight for Chimera. Kaito sends a spell toward him that catches him off guard and he can't move. "HURRY!!!! HE CAN BREAK IT SOON!!!"
The others come and run to Sango's car and a black Lincoln Sudan. They all go to InuYasha's place were to there amazement looked somewhat like a palace. Miroku then placed a spell barrier to keep away the unwanted visitors. You all shall be safe here. Miroku looks at Kaito and Chimera what was that all about and how come you can cast spells.
Okay people I know It's not all that but hey I'm trying. REVIEW PLEASE.
