A Cinderella Story.
A/N: Ergh, I have like 30 or so minutes to invent the rest of my story and the rough copies due tommorow! Ergh! Plus I have I think 2 tests but I ain't sure... I know one's first period(Science) I didn't study! Ergh! I probably have all sorts of homework that I didn't do yet but I really like this story... sorta! It's not exactly original compared to some of them in my class like where the gurl meets a bike gang and tell her how to be nice... But ya! Anyway if anyone's reading this I hope you like! O yes and this chapter is very short! She just... buys a dress! The next chapter will probaly be short too!
Disclaimer: I think I forgot this in my last two chapters... I feel so bad!(sarcasm!) I don't own anything I write! Not even the plot! I own the characters, umm, this page (my notepad and book) and umm.. That could possibly be all... O yes and I own this! "..." (Don't ask y, I put it everywhere!) I mean the ... part! Not the quotations! But u knew that right!
Chapter 4: Wow, what a pretty dress!
Lunch the next day, Stefanie and Bethany went to a store next door called " Cinderella's dress!" It wasn't the nicest store but it was the closest.
They didn't really like any clothes there. There were some grey dresses in a corner that looked as if the greyness was from dust and equally "dusty" dresses of red, blue, green and yellow. Neither Bethany nor Stefanie liked any of these! As they walked farther and farther through they saw a couple of nice dresses they might of liked before looking at the price tags... 150.99 for a rental! And it wasn't even really all that pretty after seeing the price!
Went they got to the back of the store they noticed they had about 15 minutes left but no dress in hand. Bethany noticed a door.
"Stefanie, do you see that door there." Bethany asked pointing to it.
"What door? No?"
"I see a door though?"
"I'm going to see if it opens!" Bethany said walking slowly to the door and it opened easily. Stefanie gasped she saw a hole in the wall but no door.
"Follow me, Steff!"
"Right!"
As they walked in they lovely dresses that should of been out on display instead of what looked like a tidy storage room. The first Bethany saw was a black dress hanging on the wall. It had thin straps and it intertwined in the back making an X. At the bottom it was a little puffy and made it look just right! It came with copper scrunchy with glitter on it. The dress it self had golden glitter on one side going down the leg. Bethany looked at the price tag and gasped. It was only 21.98 to rent for the night. She looked at the dress all over to make sure there were no holes or anything in it but it was perfect!
"I pick this one!" exclaimed Bethany.
"Wow, it's so pre---, but something had caught Stefanie's eyes too, it was dress a dress similar to Bethany's but red with blue glitter and a silver scrunchy.
" Wow, this is one is just like yours but different colours... Is it ok if I get this one?"
" Of course it is! And wow look it's the same price!" Bethany said grinning.
When they got to the cash register to pay the cashier gave them a funny look. We don't sell these dresses here do we? I mean they're very rare for one thing and I've never seen or ordered them? But she saw the price tag (She did all the tagging) and said she must have done something by mistake but that she'd sell them anyway until she saw the price tag. 21.98. There is no way, I did that! But the more times she looked the more she was certain she did it and she couldn't just change it.
When, Bethany reached in to her wallet she noticed the money wasn't there and remembered she had left it in her drawer!
"Oh, no I forgot my money, Now what am I gonna do!"
Stefanie rolled her eyes.
"Ma'me, could you please keep this until tomorrow so that we may be able to purchase them? "
"I guess...," The cashier mulled slowly thinking this over, "but it costs 7.50 to hold something 25.00 or less." Before Bethany could say anything Stefanie held out 15.00 and carefully placed the dresses on the counter.
"Thank you" They both said as they rushed out the store as they had about 3 minutes before the bell. They ran as fast as they could while Bethany tried to tell Stefanie she didn't have to pay for her.
" Sure, I did, didn't you want the dress and a dress that nice and that cheap would be gone before you could say dance!"
"I guess...Ya ok, thank you, I will pay you back though!"
" No, you won't, we still need to do your hair and other stuff! THAT'S gonna cost a lot of money you know!"
"Fine!" Bethany said reluctantly, but this was the first time she was going to get really dressed up for the dance.
The next day at the store.
The next day at the store, Bethany and Steff went to look around once more to see if they had changed their minds. When they came to the place they had been last time, Bethany didn't see the door? But where was the door? Now that wasn't the smartest thing to say since Stefanie couldn't see the door? Bethany looked at Stefanie.
"There's no door?"
"Maybe we're just looking in the wrong spot?" offered Stefanie.
But Bethany was dead sure the door was there because it was right below the giant clock?
"Oh well, maybe you're right let's get our dresses then!"
When they left the store they were quite happy indeed!
A/N: La la la... revised version of this chapter done! I feel I already revised it but obviously not... There was like 5 mistakes in one sentence! I can't believe I gave this to my teacher! What was I thinking! Oh well… Seeya Mizuki
