Haruka thank you I was hoping it would be sort of funny,
Chips Dip um, yeah, glad u like Chaud he my fav. To and no I don't think Yai and him should be together (she's sort of snobby)
Metamorpha thanks I don't know what a Hilary house is though, (Luv is dumb) and thanks for the spelling.
Captain M : the Fic master. You're an awesome reviewer! And im trying to work on the grammar I think Ren will be round more just to bug Yai. I think my summary is very misleading and im going to fix that as soon as I can. This will be love but, not the kind you're thinking of, and he does like her but not the way you might think. (Yes I'm very misleading.
Wolf Lupin you're a jerk, but what ever, I don't know what you mean by encouraging the characters so Plz tell me. (O yeah and if u burned your brain how the heck are u typing?) P.S. I happy! U made my Happy! I have my very own (for now at least) critic, yay!
Reviewer person. Yes there will be pranks! I can't wait to see what I concoct (im freaking my self out. Anywho, sorry I should take romance off the thing, no romance between Rena and Chaud unless their acting, (can't wait) I have a plan for the two. Plz don't hate me when this is through.
Haunted house chapter three.
The next day bright and early the group met in the living room of the Farrow House.
"So are you guys ready?" Ren asked
They all nodded in agreement.
"Great! Ok, not too much to do, um, Yai, Maylu and I will work on the costumes like sewing and things. Uh, Chaud and Tori, you guys will get a map to look around all the corners of this place, also, some doors might be stuck while you're looking just give them a hard tug. And Lan, and Dex, you guys will be painting, um, the lounge and the entrance. We all get these Walky Talky's we can all talk to each other not just two people. Call if you need help." Ren said
Yai was so tired of this Ren girl, I mean she seemed like the perfect girl friend. What if she and Chaud got together! She was strong and pretty, and knew how to sew but she could just as Easley drop kick an alligator, talk about a split personality, AND, she smiled far too much, especially at Chaud.
Yai was thinking all this when a voice came over Rens walky-talky hey Ren! Were having tons of trouble with this door, why not come and take a look. Chaud shouted over static of the walky-talky.
"See you in a flash!" she said and took off.
Then, Yai took off after Ren! " heh, what would happen if I could open the door and not her? I bet I could if I beat her there!" Yai said
Yai took off at full speed and caught up with Ren "im going to open that door, you just stay back and watch." Yai said
Ren Blinked twice. She's gunna what? Ugh! She had better not hurt herself.
They both got on the sean the same time but Yai beat Ren to the door,
"Here let me see if I can open It first," Yai said and tugged her hardest, when it wouldn't budge she examined it, "it wont open because you have it locked. "yai said and unlocked it.
By the look on Chaud's face Yai wasn't supposed to open it, Ren was, and this was one of the first places to explore, they were moving to slow, this could only mean one think, it was a prank.
" Yai don't—" Ren was cut off by Yai's choked scream. She was met with a tub of oil! The oil to polish the wood work! That must had been the stuff that didn't work! And know, Yai was soaked in it.
"Chaud you big jerk! You wanted to pull that on me! "Ren said
"How could you! You both did this! You, you lured me here and you set the trap! You're all so mean!" Yai sobbed. Then oil and all she ran out of the building.
"There you go Chaud, one mean prank goes the wrong way and this happens," Ren said in a sober voice, "I thought you were different then that, a workaholic but I didn't think you were mean." She turned away, "I- I think we've done enough for today, lets go home."
Sorry not so funny, I hope I did better with grammar and spelling though, Plz review!
