Denneylaw:
I promise that after the boring predictability of how they found their first spirits, that's when the story will really take off. For this to work though, I have to put them through what Takuya and the others originally went through. You'll like the whole new direction I'll be taking this story though, so please read on and review. Thank you.
Kumamons' chilling battle-Chapter V:
Night has fallen in the Digital World, and the kids,Pikachu, Bokomon & Neemon arrive near a broken bridge, so they can't get to the other side. "Now how do we get across, we don't have any pokemon that can fly us across." said Ash. "I could have Beautifly use String Shot." said May. "Nice plan except," stated Brock. "that I don't see anything he can use it on to attach to. Not to mention that the ground might be unstable." They sighed in disbelief. Just then, Max noticed a path down the cliff, so they go downwards.
In the bottom, they cross a river, and arrive at the Ancient Ruins of the Legendary Spirits. Bokomon explains that Human & Beast Digimon used to fight a lot, and Lucemon came to bring peace. However, he became cruel, and Digimon suffered under his reign. Then, 10 Warriors rose up against him, and defeated him. Thus, they became heroes, and the symbols of their Spirits lived onwards. From the carvings, Max & Brock recognizes one of the symbols as Agunimon's, and another one as Lobomon's. Then, May & Max wonder about having a Spirit, and Gary thinks that not everyone can necessarily have one. Just then, they saw something coming towards them. These creatures looked like walking candelabras. "What are those things?" Ash asking no one in particular. "Those are Candlemon." said Bokomon. The Candlemon appeared, along with an Elder one.
The Candlemon think that the kids want to take over their territory, but Bokomon says that they're here to save the Digital World by using the Spirits. "Oh, is that so? Well then come this way." "I wonder what they're gonna do?" asked May. The Candlemon invited them to a welcoming party, but it was just a trick to make them sleep by using the Sleep Clovers's smoke. "Maybe this will show you who's in charge around here." They said. But Pikachu, who had resisted the Sleep Clover Effect, shocked the others awake and Brock had an idea. "Forretress, use Rapid Spin to blow away the Sleep Clover." Forretress spun around really fast and the air was clear again. Brock recalled his pokemon as they all jump in the river, and start to duck the Candlemon's attacks by diving in the river. They swam downstream until they reached a cave. Inside, Ash decided to go on the offensive. "All right, you guys wait here while I go out there to fight." he said. Pikachu started to protest, but knew how stubborn Ash could be.
Two Candlemon was fastly approaching and Ash got ready to spirit evolve. "Execute, Spirit Evolution!" Once again, he was Agunimon. The others cheered Agunimon on, as the Candlemon Elder identifies him as the Legendary Warrior of Fire. Agunimon starts to attack the Candlemon, but to no avail, they were not affected by the fire attack. Instead, it only made them stronger. "Ash, you idiot," Gary thought. "he should have known better, you can't weaken a creature with their own element!" The others start to run away, but find out that there's a slippery piece of ice right in front of them, so their only way is the way they came from. The Candlemon started paralyzing Agunimon, and Max starts wishing for his Spirit, although J.P says that the Legendary Spirits won't pop out of nowhere like that. Suddenly, the ice wall breaks, and a Spirit comes out, and goes near Max. He scans it in his Digivice, and activates it. "Execute Spirit Evolution! Kumamon!" Brock and May stare in amazement, as they saw where Max stood before, now stood a small bear made of snow. Kumamon uses his Frozen Wind to attack. Bokomon identifies him as Kumamon, the warrior of ice" by using his book. Kumamon freezes one of the 2 Candlemon, and the other one evolves into Wizardmon.
Kumamon tries attacking Wizardmon, but it's no use. Wizardmon disappears, and starts attacking Agunimon, who dodges all the attacks. Now, Wizardmon multiplies himself, and they all surrounded Agunimon. They try attacking, but Agunimon jumps into the air. "Which one is real?" he asked. Kumamon sees that only one of the many Wizardmon has a shadow. Agunimon, hit the one casting the shadow." he said. "Right." he replied. Agunimon attacks him. It's the real Wizardmon, as the others were just replicas, and Agunimon whips out his Digivice. "Fractal Code Digitize!" Agunimon scans Wizardmon's Fractal Code, and Wizardmon reverts back to Candlemon. May rushed out to congratulate her little brother, as Agunimon thanks Kumamon for his help. Candlemon tells the Elder Candlemon that the kids have the real Spirit power. Elder Candlemon tells the kids that it was just a test to see if they really possessed the Spirit power. Agunimon & Kumamon reverted back to Ash & Max, and they wink at each other. "Well, if that's how you test out on friends, I'd hate to see what you do to your enemies." said Brock. May almost fainted and Gary seemed peeved. Ash releases the Fractal Code from his Digivice, and the bridge is repaired. A train passes on the bridge, carrying what seemed like a red-headed girl and four others. As the train moves onward, a mysterious shadow follows closely behind the train. No one noticed what happened next.
Well, how do you like that, a lot longer than my other chapters, huh? I even tried to include Pikachu a littlte more. Please read on as things will grow more exciting soon, I promise, as soon as I get my muses up. Oh, and I almost forgot, reviews are welcome, congrats and/or flames. So please review soon. And also, if you want, tell me if you plan to print these out for your own. I print and collect stories like these myself. Later.
