Denneylaw:

I'm back and now I have a top of the line Dell. I've read your request and I'll try to make it more readable. Also, I will try and cut down on the cliches a little less after blasting off those Rockets one more time. By the way, I follow the American version. Has anyone seen the newest season yet? It was cool. Now, on with the story before things get too new.

Hurricane and Thunder Power-Chapter XIII:

As the fierce battle waged on with Cherrymon against Beetlemon, Cherrymon continued to pelt him with cherries. They were really starting to sting when just then, Beetlemon had an idea. He charged in and leapt over as Cherrymon attacked and came down hard with a Thunderkick. Just as he absorbed his Fractal Code, he saw what he was guarding. Directly behind where Cherrymon was standing was a beast spirit. As soon as he absorbed it through his D-Tector, he was kicked from behind. "Ow, hey that was a cheap shot!" yelled Beetlemon. "Hand over your spirits and no one gets hurt, eh." asked Arbormon.. "I don't think so, time to take it up to the next level!"

Meanwhile, Ranamon sat by a lake. There, she glimpsed at something in the lake. She ran up to it. There was a mirror. "Mirror, Mirror, in the lake, who's the fairest girl of all?" "I'll tell you." Mercuremon appeared in the mirror and said. "You were the fairest of them all, but Kazemon may be more beautiful than us all, and she is also the most beautiful and strongest in the Digital World!" ""What! No! It's me!" Ranamon got mad at the thought of Kazemon, when just then, she spotted her in the distance fighting MarineDevimon. "Hmmmm, sounds like my pet found fresh meat. I hope he will at least save a little piece of the action for me." remarked Ranamon. "Female Digimon fight.. sounds fun." Mercuremon laughed to himself.

Beetlemon just beast spirit evolved to MetalKabuterimon, a big blue tank as he faced Petaldramon, a giant tree lizard. As MetalKabuterimon powered up for an attack, his attack barley seemed to harm his opponent. He figured he must be using the earth to ground his attacks. Petaldramon then entangled him in his vines as MetalKabuterimon struggled to get free. "It's useless to escape, so don't even try." said Petaldramon.

Kazemon tried to aviod the tentacles as best as she could and tried to strike as much as possible. MarineDevimon swung his tentacles wildly until finally, one of the managed to smack her into the ocean. All hope seemed lost, just as she was about to give up, drifting downward in the lake, she saw visions in her head, visions of her brother encouraging her. "May," he started to say. "Brendan?" she replied. May, don't give up, you can't lose, not now, rescue us from this prison of darkness, you have the power within. Just look inside yourself." "Wait, Brendan, don't go! Come back!" she pleaded. Just then, as she was miraculously guided by her older brothers words, she gave off a strange glow as she shot like an arrow out of the lake and straight into MarineDevimon, as he desintegrated on contact. She then made her way to the island with the Beast spirit and absorbed it. "Fine! Let's bring this to an end, then we'll see who's more beautiful!" said Ranamon as she stood on what appeared to be a water column in the middle of the lake with several other columns of water sprouting out all over.

Just as MetalKabuterimon was being crushed into oblivion, thinking back as Brock, he had an idea. He remembered how heavily a grass type can be affected by a past experience he saw once.

Flashback:

As Pikachu used his thunderbolt attack on Treecko while he was in the air, it did major damage. "I thought electric type pokemon can't really hurt grass type pokemon." said Max. "Usually, but since they can't ground their attacks in the air, it does more damage to them there then it does on the ground." replied Brock.

End Flashback:

Being inspired by this, he reverted back into Beetlemon and with quick thinking, grabbed onto one of Petaldramons' roots and swung him around and around and finally up into the air. He then reverted back into MetalKabuterimon and took careful aim, and just as he was sure about his aim, he attacked. ''Rolling Thunder." His attack was on target as he again reverted back into Beetlemon and absorbed his spirits. In his place lay a more familiar face with green hair. Just then, an eye portal opened up and that's when he dragged him out of there after reverting back to Brock.

Ranamon attacked Zephyrmon her but it was of no use for her. "Gilgamesh Slicer!" Ranamon tried to block her off with columns of water but she sliced right through them and fell down to the sea after Zephyrmon sliced her water column. "All right, no more fooling around, this ends now! Ranamon Slide Evolution! Calamaramon!" Ranamon changed into the Beast Digimon. "Acid Ink!" The rocks were melted by her attack "What are you doing!" Calamaramon got mad and attacked Zephyrmon. "Girls must be kind! Tempest Twist!" She started spinning around fiercely but Zephyrmon attacked her back. "Girls must be strong! Hurricane Yowl!" She yelled as her hands formed a powerful wind based attack. Calamaramon's Fractal Code appeared, and Zephyrmon took the Beast Spirit. Zephyrmon changed back into Kazemon. "This Digivice will Purify your Heart with Fresh Breeze! Fractal Code Digitize!" Ranamon was defeated. Kazemon changed back into May and said. "That was for you, big brother, where ever you may be." Where Ranamon used to lay now lied a red-haired girl with a strange ponytail.

Okay, my chapter titles and story writing could use a little work. If any fellow authors out there has any tips or advice for me, that could be helpful. I'll try and work out this writers block I have. It could partly be because I had to wait so long for a new computer to get back onto one too. Cs and Fs are welcome as I think of another chapter. Later.