A/N1: I changed a lot. Chapter is longer though not "long" and more interesting, not to mention better written.
A/N: Hello! I loved all the reviews I got, so I'm updating earlier than I thought! Anyway, I'll be out of town from the 23rd to the 31st so I doubt I'll be able to post new chapters during that time. So to make up for it, I'll be posting 2 more chapters after this one between now and the 23rd
Ok. Now on to the next order of business. I just posted a new Buffy fic that NO ONE seems to be reading. So if you're a Buffy fan, PLEASE read and review my fic. .
Disclaimer: I'm figuring out how to cast a spell on JK Rowling so that she tells the world that these characters are mine.....d'ya think it'll work?
Chapter 9
The Fight
Lily Evans was sitting at a table in the common room. She looked rigid, as if she were concentrating hard on something. To anyone who saw her, it looked liked she was doing her homework, absorbed in a textbook. But Lily's thoughts weren't on her book. They were on.....
"James!" she said as she saw the portrait hole open and her best friend enter the room.
'Uh Oh.' she thought. 'He does NOT look happy"
"Lily, I need to talk to you"
"Okay..." said Lily
"In a place where the whole common room cant hear us?"
"Okay....." Lily repeated.
They went over to a corner of the room. A few first years pegan to giggle and point but James silenced them with a look. Then he turned to Lily.
"You and Frank?" he said in bewilderment.
A slight knot formed in Lily's stomach.
"Um.....yeah" she said a little quietly
"How did that happen?"
"I.....I don't know....."
"How could you accept to go out with him?"
"Um.....he was asking and I....."
"But he doesn't deserve you!"
"Yeah.....well.....you don't know that" said Lily. She didn't really know why she was acting so unsure around James. Afterall, they were only friends. She didnt need to answer to him. She didnt need to act like this.
"Why'd you say yes to him anyway?"
"Why not?' she asked
"Because he's not for you."
"How do you know that?"
"I just know"
"James! what is wrong with you?"
"Nothing is wrong with me. There's something wrong with you."
"Excuse me?"
"Frank? Frank, Lily?"
"What in the world do you have against Frank?"
"Nothing. He's just not made for you."
James had started pacing around Lily. This made her feel like she was on trial. Like she had commited some sort of crime.
"Why do you say that?" Lily asked
"Just.....because" James replied
"James, stop walking around me it's making me dizzy.....and "because" is not a reason."
"Ok.....because he's stupid." said James, stopping right in front of Lily.
"That is so mean, James!" Lily had lost her patience.
"But he's a loser!"
"James! That's not fair."
"You're just being nice to him"
"Why does it bother you so much?"
"He's not even good looking!" said James choosing to ignore Lily's question.
"So what? He's sweet and he really likes me."
"And do you like him?"
The question had startled Lily and before she knew it she had replied.
"I might"
"What is that supposed to mean?"
"James, what has gotten into you?"
"Nothing. I'm just concerned that's all. I think youre making a big mistake"
"Wha....how do you know that? He really likes me and he's good to me."
"I bet lots of guys really like you."
"Oh yeah? Name one."
"Me"
Lily was too shocked to retaliate.
A/N: Oooooh! I know I know.....I'm EVIL!!! Not only did I leave you with an evil cliffy, but I also made this chapter cruelly short!!!! Hehehe sorry about that but it 12:30 am and I'm not really in the mood to write. But more chappies are coming along soon so hang in there guys! So what happens next? You tell me.....please review.
A/N: Hello! I loved all the reviews I got, so I'm updating earlier than I thought! Anyway, I'll be out of town from the 23rd to the 31st so I doubt I'll be able to post new chapters during that time. So to make up for it, I'll be posting 2 more chapters after this one between now and the 23rd
Ok. Now on to the next order of business. I just posted a new Buffy fic that NO ONE seems to be reading. So if you're a Buffy fan, PLEASE read and review my fic. .
Disclaimer: I'm figuring out how to cast a spell on JK Rowling so that she tells the world that these characters are mine.....d'ya think it'll work?
Chapter 9
The Fight
Lily Evans was sitting at a table in the common room. She looked rigid, as if she were concentrating hard on something. To anyone who saw her, it looked liked she was doing her homework, absorbed in a textbook. But Lily's thoughts weren't on her book. They were on.....
"James!" she said as she saw the portrait hole open and her best friend enter the room.
'Uh Oh.' she thought. 'He does NOT look happy"
"Lily, I need to talk to you"
"Okay..." said Lily
"In a place where the whole common room cant hear us?"
"Okay....." Lily repeated.
They went over to a corner of the room. A few first years pegan to giggle and point but James silenced them with a look. Then he turned to Lily.
"You and Frank?" he said in bewilderment.
A slight knot formed in Lily's stomach.
"Um.....yeah" she said a little quietly
"How did that happen?"
"I.....I don't know....."
"How could you accept to go out with him?"
"Um.....he was asking and I....."
"But he doesn't deserve you!"
"Yeah.....well.....you don't know that" said Lily. She didn't really know why she was acting so unsure around James. Afterall, they were only friends. She didnt need to answer to him. She didnt need to act like this.
"Why'd you say yes to him anyway?"
"Why not?' she asked
"Because he's not for you."
"How do you know that?"
"I just know"
"James! what is wrong with you?"
"Nothing is wrong with me. There's something wrong with you."
"Excuse me?"
"Frank? Frank, Lily?"
"What in the world do you have against Frank?"
"Nothing. He's just not made for you."
James had started pacing around Lily. This made her feel like she was on trial. Like she had commited some sort of crime.
"Why do you say that?" Lily asked
"Just.....because" James replied
"James, stop walking around me it's making me dizzy.....and "because" is not a reason."
"Ok.....because he's stupid." said James, stopping right in front of Lily.
"That is so mean, James!" Lily had lost her patience.
"But he's a loser!"
"James! That's not fair."
"You're just being nice to him"
"Why does it bother you so much?"
"He's not even good looking!" said James choosing to ignore Lily's question.
"So what? He's sweet and he really likes me."
"And do you like him?"
The question had startled Lily and before she knew it she had replied.
"I might"
"What is that supposed to mean?"
"James, what has gotten into you?"
"Nothing. I'm just concerned that's all. I think youre making a big mistake"
"Wha....how do you know that? He really likes me and he's good to me."
"I bet lots of guys really like you."
"Oh yeah? Name one."
"Me"
Lily was too shocked to retaliate.
A/N: Oooooh! I know I know.....I'm EVIL!!! Not only did I leave you with an evil cliffy, but I also made this chapter cruelly short!!!! Hehehe sorry about that but it 12:30 am and I'm not really in the mood to write. But more chappies are coming along soon so hang in there guys! So what happens next? You tell me.....please review.
