From PinkGrenade to You!
I'm sorry that some of you seem to be confused by my story so far. I've been working on the next chapter (which would make some of the events you all have been complaining about make sense). Yes, Serena was abused as a small child by her mother. As she grew up she forced herself to forget the bad memories (it's called memory repression if any of you are interested in looking further into it). Irene continued to abuse Serena until she was fourteen (when she finally decided that she needed help with her drinking problems). She felt horrible of her wrong doings to her daughter that she began to buy her things in hope to gain her love. Serena never felt comfortable in that house since her mother's abuse but never really knew why (insert memory repression here haha), she just wanted to get out of the house. This is all in the following chapters…but I keep getting a little frustrated when people keep complaining about my story (which is very unlike me). Sorry for any confusion, I know I'm not the best writer (more of a math/science person…); I just enjoy reading and writing stories (definitely not my specialty hehe).
Oh, and IheartMamoru is my sister. Her little comment after the second chapter was made right after she read my third chapter (which was saved on my computer). Serena's mother being abusive when she was younger was a part of my story. My sister just wanted to sound smart, so please excuse her little "foretelling" of the story in her chapter two review.
Thank you for all your reviews and all, I appreciate the constructive criticism, it just gets the better of me sometime heh. Anywhooo, I'm working on the fourth chapter now and it'll be up in no time so please stay tuned!
