Fire Dragon

The story takes place with a boy named Inuyasha, a half demon, just getting out of High school. As he walks out to go home he sees Kagome.

"Kagome wait up."

"Yeah Inuyasha?"

"What are you doing tonight?"

"Nothing just going home, Why?"

"Nothing I was just wondering if you wanted to go to a concert tonight?"

"Sure, Who's playing anyway?"

"The Kimo's, They're like a punk rock sort of band."

"You don't even know who they are do you?"

"No but they sounded pretty interesting to me."

"Well what time are you going to pick me up?"

"How about 9:00 tonight?"

"Ok, but don't be late."

"I'll be there I promise."

When Kagome walked around the corner he heard a shout from an annoying voice that could only come from one person.

"Inuyasha"

"Sesshomaru buddy, how are you"

"Fine, hey what were you talking to Kagome about?"

"Nothing except I have a date with her tonight."

"You're a lucky bastard."

"Yeah I know, but don't tell anyone else."

"You now me, I wouldn't tell anyone."

"Yeah I know you, you told Leo that I said I was going to throw stones at his car but you told him and I had to fight him."

"You won didn't you?"

"Yeah but I shouldn't have to fight when it was a secret."

"Ok but you were never beaten by anyone."

"Except Naroku."

Ok this is only the first page. This is my first writing to you guys. So review and tell me what I could fix.