Ok I haven't written in forever I realize --; long story and I don't wish to explain. But yea, it's finally done XD Sorry it took sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long. But the only ppl on my case 'bout it is the ppl who actually read it --; which is a very little amount. This chappie is very short, i'll explain who the new characters are at the bottom later --; this way it doesn't ruin it.
The Elf And The Raven
The long grassy fields and gently rolling hills were no problem for them to cross. It took them almost half a day before the land started to become barren and dry. Asca's wound still was bad but she had become very light headed and weak. Her blood loss was starting to interfere with her usual bodily functions like walking. She would often start to stumble or trip as she walked. Ul was very quiet, she hardly ever spoke as they walked along. Just after they had started to walk on their way to Bale she had once again place her hood upon her raven hair. Evan, Shana and Dart couldn't of been more worried for Asca.
The dead grass had soon turned into pure dark and dull stone. Just the look of it sent shivers down Asca's now pale spine. They reached a cave upon the horizon that was darker than the barren land before. If they were to reach Bale, this would be the only way through. The dark cave seemed not to cause anyone else a problem mentally, everyone but Asca. Upon entry, Asca froze in place. The dark, damp walls caused her to shiver unconsciously. The dark area seemed to mimic something from her past, what it was was now impossible to determine. She quickly caught up to the group in a hurry and went on her way.
The cave had been declared safe after the passing of the deadly worm that used to reside in it's ledges. There were very many confusing paths and dead ends ahead of them, but since Dart and Shana were there they had no problem finding their way. Dart lead the way while Shana trailed behind them. Although it was still daylight outside, the darkness engulfed any bits of light. It wasn't until they noticed a bright light to their left side. Dart looked to Shana and she nodded gently, even Evan smiled slightly (and Ul didn't do anything, Ul is pretty quiet --;). Asca looked from each of her friends confused. Dart stirred the lights and they began to glow very brightly. Asca felt a warm feeling consume her body. When the light cleared, she felt up to strength and her arm felt a lot better. She took the sleeve that had been tied around her arm off and threw it to the ground. Her arm was better, the wound had been healed and she felt great. The group didn't linger long, the sooner they got to Bale the better. They started back on their way.
A long water way with a few stepping stones lay ahead. Dart took the front and warned to be careful, it was awfully slippery. The group went along, Shana still trailed behind. Asca had almost slipped a couple times, she was so clumsy. Dart was first to arrive on the strip of land that lead them down the next pass. He helped each person along, Ul was last he helped before Shana came up. As Shana took her ground to jump, she lost her footing and fell down the waterfall. Dart let out a scream that echoed all around, " No!!! SHANA!!!"
But his words were too late. She was lost to the blankness below. The rest heaved Dart up, and pulled him down the path, there had to be a bottom to the waterfall somewhere in the cave, they would just have to go further to check.
The group traveled along side the waterfall on their way down toward to base trying to see if they could spot Shana. They came close to the bottom, and over the roaring of the water, they could hear screams of laughter. The group rushed ahead to find a half conscious Shana struggling to stay afloat and an elf laughing just a couple feet ahead of them. " God you think some your age could swim!" She roared between her fit of laughter.
Dart dove into the now peaceful stream and pulled Shana to shore. Asca, being the overly curious soul she was, walked up to the elf with brown hair. " Hello," Asca spoke trying to see if she would stop her giggles to at least communicate.
The amber eyed elf stopped her screams of giggles and looked over at Asca and the group around. " Hi!" She spoke overly cheery.
" I'm Asca," Asca replied, then pointed to each person as she spoke their names, " That's Ul, Evan, Dart, and Shana."
" I'm Kailey-chan," The elf replied.
Asca smiled as Dart helped Shana onto his back. " Would you mind if I came with you just until we reach Bale? I would much rather travel in a group."
Asca looked over her shoulder to the group behind her. Evan nodded, Ul just shrugged her shoulders and kinda snorted, Dart nodded and Shana really couldn't answer. " Sure, why not!" Asca replied.
" Great!" Kailey-chan cheered as she jumped up, " Let's go!".
With Kailey-chan as their newest companion, they were on their way.
The rest of the journey through the limestone cave was easy. On their way down the only path to Bale they saw a man up a head fighting off what seemed to be local fiends on steroids (A.N: Sorry, it couldn't be helped --;). He took one good blow and was on the ground. His sweat drenched face was plastered with his black hair. The group just couldn't let the poor guy suffer, so they decided to take action. Asca smirked brightly as she pulled out her sword. Evan drew his mace ready for the worst. Dart drew a sword as Shana drew her bow and began to set an arrow. Ul created a fist and her blade slid down her arm. Kailey-chan surprised the group when she drew a sickle. Kailey-chan was first to take a shot at the fiends; everyone else soon followed her pursuit. Eventually the fiends died off one by one, the ensemble was covered in fresh wounds but nothing as threatening as Asca's original. The companions then turned to the man on the road. Asca looked down at his bare neck to see a small, what seemed to be shaped as a, black wing of some sort. Perplexed, Asca took a large step away from his body as Evan and Dart both hoisted him up so that he could rest on their shoulders so he could be taken care of at the clinic. With their newest companion and mysterious man, the ensemble headed back to Bale once again.
Ok! So it's lame I realize. This chapter is Speically for Kailey-chan who has been pestering me forever to finish it. And yes, Kailey-chan is Kailey-chan in the story. The mysterious dude is actually no one --; he is just made up speically for the story. And stupid kailey-chan keeps degrading him, KAILEY-CHAN!!! He doesn't like hair from drains! Geez! ANYWAY! Time for everyone's favorite part, The Review Reply Section! Lol i named it ;
Choas Valkyrie: Lol I was starting to wonder if you were ever gonna review lol. O well ; man i hate having chapters so late --; geez but I had thousands of projects to finish --; a bookreport, a social car (don't ask), science self study, English final part one. 0.0 mayb i'll finish the next chapter now while I am drinking oO my parents wanted me to try the wine and well i'm hooked lol. Anyway!! I love your story still When i first read it, I was talking to my friend on msn and when I said your main character was named Iris she spazed 0.0 she doesn't like the name. long story --; but your story must be good if my cuz likes it. He is very picky, he hated my other friends oO. Lol! I dun't knoe if you heard bout my offer of letting you create a character. But if you willing to take me up on that (well your a fan and not many ppl who have characters in my story are fans, Ul's owner is kinda, another one just heard of it and my cuz well used to play --;) just e-mail me at elfgurlascahotmail.com or just say so in the next review or sumthin lol! I can explain details later. Anyway, lol i like to ramble don't I oO? Lol! Ok, hoping to write more and hoping you write more to your story I get on msn and check my e-mail to see if you updated (i have u on author alert lol) and when you don't it's sad. I only get on my compy on weekends oO anyway! I gotta stop rambling XD lol! so yea! KEEP IT UP!
i-don't-talk-much: HI!!!!! I am uploading biographies of the characters so far. I onli got sum, not a whole lot. I need a pixy of Konamaru oO cuz yea, I am not gonna edit a picy unless you want me too. I'm lazy leave me be!!! Me starting a special site 4 this story (already got ideas for the sequel Oo) so if you want you can be a manager just 4 having a character oO. so yea --; lol glad you like this story
MysticChan: I GOT IT UPLOADED ALRIGHT!!!!! Geez. poor gibbled gobble XD snickers even if you were happy oO LOL! Lisa's Corny LOL!
Kute-Kitty-Kat-Fire: Hehe ; glad you like my story I'm very proud of it now.
The Elf And The Raven
The long grassy fields and gently rolling hills were no problem for them to cross. It took them almost half a day before the land started to become barren and dry. Asca's wound still was bad but she had become very light headed and weak. Her blood loss was starting to interfere with her usual bodily functions like walking. She would often start to stumble or trip as she walked. Ul was very quiet, she hardly ever spoke as they walked along. Just after they had started to walk on their way to Bale she had once again place her hood upon her raven hair. Evan, Shana and Dart couldn't of been more worried for Asca.
The dead grass had soon turned into pure dark and dull stone. Just the look of it sent shivers down Asca's now pale spine. They reached a cave upon the horizon that was darker than the barren land before. If they were to reach Bale, this would be the only way through. The dark cave seemed not to cause anyone else a problem mentally, everyone but Asca. Upon entry, Asca froze in place. The dark, damp walls caused her to shiver unconsciously. The dark area seemed to mimic something from her past, what it was was now impossible to determine. She quickly caught up to the group in a hurry and went on her way.
The cave had been declared safe after the passing of the deadly worm that used to reside in it's ledges. There were very many confusing paths and dead ends ahead of them, but since Dart and Shana were there they had no problem finding their way. Dart lead the way while Shana trailed behind them. Although it was still daylight outside, the darkness engulfed any bits of light. It wasn't until they noticed a bright light to their left side. Dart looked to Shana and she nodded gently, even Evan smiled slightly (and Ul didn't do anything, Ul is pretty quiet --;). Asca looked from each of her friends confused. Dart stirred the lights and they began to glow very brightly. Asca felt a warm feeling consume her body. When the light cleared, she felt up to strength and her arm felt a lot better. She took the sleeve that had been tied around her arm off and threw it to the ground. Her arm was better, the wound had been healed and she felt great. The group didn't linger long, the sooner they got to Bale the better. They started back on their way.
A long water way with a few stepping stones lay ahead. Dart took the front and warned to be careful, it was awfully slippery. The group went along, Shana still trailed behind. Asca had almost slipped a couple times, she was so clumsy. Dart was first to arrive on the strip of land that lead them down the next pass. He helped each person along, Ul was last he helped before Shana came up. As Shana took her ground to jump, she lost her footing and fell down the waterfall. Dart let out a scream that echoed all around, " No!!! SHANA!!!"
But his words were too late. She was lost to the blankness below. The rest heaved Dart up, and pulled him down the path, there had to be a bottom to the waterfall somewhere in the cave, they would just have to go further to check.
The group traveled along side the waterfall on their way down toward to base trying to see if they could spot Shana. They came close to the bottom, and over the roaring of the water, they could hear screams of laughter. The group rushed ahead to find a half conscious Shana struggling to stay afloat and an elf laughing just a couple feet ahead of them. " God you think some your age could swim!" She roared between her fit of laughter.
Dart dove into the now peaceful stream and pulled Shana to shore. Asca, being the overly curious soul she was, walked up to the elf with brown hair. " Hello," Asca spoke trying to see if she would stop her giggles to at least communicate.
The amber eyed elf stopped her screams of giggles and looked over at Asca and the group around. " Hi!" She spoke overly cheery.
" I'm Asca," Asca replied, then pointed to each person as she spoke their names, " That's Ul, Evan, Dart, and Shana."
" I'm Kailey-chan," The elf replied.
Asca smiled as Dart helped Shana onto his back. " Would you mind if I came with you just until we reach Bale? I would much rather travel in a group."
Asca looked over her shoulder to the group behind her. Evan nodded, Ul just shrugged her shoulders and kinda snorted, Dart nodded and Shana really couldn't answer. " Sure, why not!" Asca replied.
" Great!" Kailey-chan cheered as she jumped up, " Let's go!".
With Kailey-chan as their newest companion, they were on their way.
The rest of the journey through the limestone cave was easy. On their way down the only path to Bale they saw a man up a head fighting off what seemed to be local fiends on steroids (A.N: Sorry, it couldn't be helped --;). He took one good blow and was on the ground. His sweat drenched face was plastered with his black hair. The group just couldn't let the poor guy suffer, so they decided to take action. Asca smirked brightly as she pulled out her sword. Evan drew his mace ready for the worst. Dart drew a sword as Shana drew her bow and began to set an arrow. Ul created a fist and her blade slid down her arm. Kailey-chan surprised the group when she drew a sickle. Kailey-chan was first to take a shot at the fiends; everyone else soon followed her pursuit. Eventually the fiends died off one by one, the ensemble was covered in fresh wounds but nothing as threatening as Asca's original. The companions then turned to the man on the road. Asca looked down at his bare neck to see a small, what seemed to be shaped as a, black wing of some sort. Perplexed, Asca took a large step away from his body as Evan and Dart both hoisted him up so that he could rest on their shoulders so he could be taken care of at the clinic. With their newest companion and mysterious man, the ensemble headed back to Bale once again.
Ok! So it's lame I realize. This chapter is Speically for Kailey-chan who has been pestering me forever to finish it. And yes, Kailey-chan is Kailey-chan in the story. The mysterious dude is actually no one --; he is just made up speically for the story. And stupid kailey-chan keeps degrading him, KAILEY-CHAN!!! He doesn't like hair from drains! Geez! ANYWAY! Time for everyone's favorite part, The Review Reply Section! Lol i named it ;
Choas Valkyrie: Lol I was starting to wonder if you were ever gonna review lol. O well ; man i hate having chapters so late --; geez but I had thousands of projects to finish --; a bookreport, a social car (don't ask), science self study, English final part one. 0.0 mayb i'll finish the next chapter now while I am drinking oO my parents wanted me to try the wine and well i'm hooked lol. Anyway!! I love your story still When i first read it, I was talking to my friend on msn and when I said your main character was named Iris she spazed 0.0 she doesn't like the name. long story --; but your story must be good if my cuz likes it. He is very picky, he hated my other friends oO. Lol! I dun't knoe if you heard bout my offer of letting you create a character. But if you willing to take me up on that (well your a fan and not many ppl who have characters in my story are fans, Ul's owner is kinda, another one just heard of it and my cuz well used to play --;) just e-mail me at elfgurlascahotmail.com or just say so in the next review or sumthin lol! I can explain details later. Anyway, lol i like to ramble don't I oO? Lol! Ok, hoping to write more and hoping you write more to your story I get on msn and check my e-mail to see if you updated (i have u on author alert lol) and when you don't it's sad. I only get on my compy on weekends oO anyway! I gotta stop rambling XD lol! so yea! KEEP IT UP!
i-don't-talk-much: HI!!!!! I am uploading biographies of the characters so far. I onli got sum, not a whole lot. I need a pixy of Konamaru oO cuz yea, I am not gonna edit a picy unless you want me too. I'm lazy leave me be!!! Me starting a special site 4 this story (already got ideas for the sequel Oo) so if you want you can be a manager just 4 having a character oO. so yea --; lol glad you like this story
MysticChan: I GOT IT UPLOADED ALRIGHT!!!!! Geez. poor gibbled gobble XD snickers even if you were happy oO LOL! Lisa's Corny LOL!
Kute-Kitty-Kat-Fire: Hehe ; glad you like my story I'm very proud of it now.
