Disclaimer: once again… I do not own… Inuyasha… :(

Eh everyone… Thanks for all the reviews on my stories! I really loved them! Here are

Some great reviews I totally appreciated!

I Love you Sesshomaru reviews

Mizu Akuma: pretty good, pretty good… keep it up!

C.A.M.E.O.1 and only:I was wondering... is the OC a goodie or a baddie? And r the other pairings in? Inu+Kag, Miro+Sang, and Sessh+Kagu my F-A-V-E-S!

LesboSociety: AAHH! come on its too short!
but its a great story though...
plz the next chappy let it be longer...
update soon .U

loveofsesshy

Hikaru Namaru: WOW someone who actually agrees with me that Sesshi and Kagura look cute together. Please say you agree and you didn't just copy my fanfics for it. Well I belive you. -- I hope i can trust you.
your fanfics are alright. There pretty cool.

Anyway I know you didn't copy me because the only things that our fanfics match is the Kagura-Sesshi.

Standinginthemoonlight: Yo, this story is so good. update as soon as you can. Kaugra is evil! Give Sesshomaru to Etsu. She sounds cool, better. Lol, thanks 4 your review to. I'm adden u 2 my favs! srry my chapters r so short.

Love and Annoyance reviews

Sessho-maru007: cool i wish sessho-maru was in it (from Ramen: he was xD)

The Squabbit: can u plz update soon plz!its a real good story even if its only the first chapter!

Inufreak17: OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY! YET ITS THE FIRST CHAPTER! AND UHM ANGELA, SORRY THAT YOUR ACCOUNT WAS LOCKED! DAMN ABUSE REPORTERS, BUT UPDATE RREEAALL SOON! AAH THANKS !

TheDarkAngel101: That was good! Please update soon!

PrincessKairi25: GOOD JOB! LUVES IT! PLEASE KEEP WRITING:D

TheDarkAngel101: Ur not gonna put Inuyasha and Kikyo together are u? Cause ya wanna know what. I completely agree with Kagome. DAMN THE STUPID CLAYPOT! I her! Even if u put them together i'll still read but i won't like it as much as before. Anyways good chapter! Please update soon!

PrincessKairi25: I also put you as one of my fav authors. Yay! Anyways, I LOVE the second chapter too. update as soon as you can!

XoxSaMoxox: i think that your story is really good so far and i dont think that it is really short and the length of it is good enough, i hope that you update soon:):)

(That's all I'm going to put for now, I have less time and too many reviews. Please check out my stories if you haven't read them soon yet!

Love; Ramen :D )


" - talking

' - thinking

Scorched Souls

Chapter 1: The Notes


"Hahaha look at! My mother gave me these Blue Bear stationary notes! They're

quite the cute ones!" Etsu chuckled

"haha, yeah they sure are. Hey are you going to uhm… you know…" Kagome whispered

"what Kagome? What? Your boyfriend?" Kagome's friend, Eri asked

"no no no! I do not definitely have a boyfriend! 'except for Kenji… pif' " Etsu cried

"eh? Well…. We'll come with you to wherever you are going! 'kay?" Eri decided

"yeah yeah!" Ayumi and Yuka jumped

"uhm… No it's for…. Only… Uh………. People who participated in… This… thing… this…

uhm…. Uh, I forgot" Kagome hesitated

"awwwwwwww!"

"yeah, sorry guys! Forgive us! Uh maybe next time! We we're doing… Uhm, claypot

making?" Etsu stammered, patting here shoe on the ground

"claypot making… Wow! I'm going to try and practice claypot making! Etsu, Kagome

and you teach us? Please please please!" Eri, Ayumi and Yuka asked at the same time

"gotta go guys! See ya!" Kagome and Etsu ran off to go home.

About Etsu,shepractically a servant of Sesshomaru. Kagura introduced her to him while

Rummaging around for whatsoever.

"Phew Kagome that was pretty close" Etsu sighed

"yeah, I hope they don't find out about the well though" Kagome said, holding her chin.

"'kay Kagome, I'll be at my house. I'll go to the feudal era later at… 4 o'clock" Etsu said

"sure thing. I'll see ya later!" Kagome waved good bye.


(Etsu's home)

"eh? I got Blue Bear notes on my desk. Hm, I wonder what it says… I hope sure not

my older brother didn't use them!" Etsu

held up the notes and started reading them quietly.

"I want to DIE! Leave me alone! Let me die!" one note was read.

"who are you! Leave me be! Lady Kikyo leave immediately!

I said leave me be! LEAVE ME NOW!" another note was read

"My daughter's soul is in there! Let her go! Bring her back into

this body!" then Etsu read the last note.

"I cannot believe you have done this to me. Leave my life and I do

not want to see you again. I need to live a life with peace and

without you! LEAVE NOW!"

"what the hell…" Etsu said.

BANG!

"Etsu! Where the heck is my cell phone!" her older brother, Kisho fumed

"eh? I don't have it! Ask Ayane, you know, your girl friend" Etsu said coolly

"shut up! And no! Ayane would never take my cell phone! Shame on you!" Kisho cried

"pif! How about that time—" Kisho grabbed those notes from Etsu and said

"eh? What's this? Love letters? You must be really popular" Kisho mumbled

"GIVE ME THAT YOU FREAKIN' IDIOT!" Etsu fumed, grabbing the notes

away from Kisho, with a lot of envy.

"aargh! HOW ABOUT THAT FREAKIN' TIME YOU WERE OUT WITH AYANE AND

SHE WANTED TO BORROW YOUR CELL PHONE TO PHONE HER DAD!

SEE YOUR SUCH A DUMB JERK KISHO! YOUR TWENTY TWO ALREADY!

YOU SHOULD KNOW BETTER! PIF! WHAT A DISGRACE!" Etsu fumed

"… Right… you are so wrong Etsu, every word you said was wrong…

Okay g'bye I gotta go to Ayane's, uhm…. See ya" Kisho ran out the door,

And drove his car quickly to Ayane's house.

Etsu sighed. 'I don't think Kisho would even PASS his test for his job for

Technology… Even wonder about his answers…

Hello there sir, what is your name?

My name is Kichi Shimatani

No you stupid! It's Kisho! I'll probably say…

Oh yeah I forgot

Okay sir… Now, what is your basic personality?

Uhm… Like a jerk, stupid, hates technology, likes to stalk women, and has seven girl friends

No no no Kisho! I would whisper loudly

Oh oh I mean, cute, loves technology, doesn't like to stalk women, and has fourteen girl friends

KISHO! I WOULD NEVER ACCEPT A PERSONALITY LIKE THAT!

Hehhe!

Then.. Kisho will have his fourteen girlfriends in there bikini's hugging him in front

Of the interviewer and say…

I got women! You don't! I got women! You don't!' Etsu chuckled, thinking...

"MOM I'M HOME!" Kisho cried

"I KNEW IT'D BE FROM AYANE!" Etsu cried, from the stair railings

"SHUT UP! IT WASN'T FROM AYANE! IT WAS FROM! Uhm… YOSHI!" Kisho cried

"WHAT THE—YOSHI IS A GAME YOU IDIOT!"

Etsu ran back into her room and still thinking about the notes

She received from no one she has ever known. And soon after she read the

Note with Kikyo's name on it, she was wondering what possible things

Kikyo could have done to those crying people.


Hahaha! My NEW story! I hope you all liked it!

I hope you…

R&R!

-Ramen :D