DISCLAIMER: I am NOT Meg Cabot. I do not own the charecters (except for the unknowns). The plot, however, is all mine.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for reviewing. Now that's school's over, I have more writing time, which shall make ya'll happy:-p.

Now, without further adieu, MAJOR FLUFFAGE! The lyrics are Entwined by Lacuna Coil. One of the best bands ever, by the way.


Suze's POV

It was like a dream. We walk into this really huge suite with a view of a Hawaiian sunset as the background. I've seen California sunsets, which are nice, but Hawaiian ones are so much more beautiful. The sun had so many different oranges, reds, and purples as it reflected off the Pacific.

I felt Jesse's arms encircle my waist from behind as he kissed my cheek before resting his chin on my shoulder, watching the sunset with me. We didn't speak once throughout the entire time. It was sheer bliss.

But, of course, Jesse ruined the moment.

"Do you see that girl out there?" He said, pointing out tiny dot out on the beach. We were pretty high up, but it looked like she was building a sand castle.

"Oh crap..." I muttered. "She's glowing. Why can't we get a vacation from these bloody ghosts?" I complained turning around in his embrace.

Jesse gave me a sympathetic look. "Lets go take care of her now and get it over with. OK?" He said, giving me a kiss on the tip of my nose.

But the last thing I wanted was to deal with ghosts now. I had been waiting for that night since he first told me he loved me. I didn't want to go running errands for ghosts all night.

"Or," I said, putting my arms around his neck. "We can wait until tommorow to deal with her and..." I broke off with a quick kiss on the lips. "do..." And another one. "something different..." and yet another smooch. "tonight." I ended with a small smile before pulling him down for another kiss, this time a little bit more heavy.

His hands were stroking my back as my fingers trailed into his thick, black, hair. I felt him moan slightly against my lips. I soon followed in the moaning department as his hands gently ran along the curve of my back, sending shivers all over me.

I pulled away from Jesse to say "Five minutes." Before going back inside to get a little something-something from my suitcase.

Running into the bathroom, I got changed quickly. Gina, CeeCee, and I decided to raid the Victoria's Secret. What I left with was a long, white, silk and lace dress-like thingy. I took down my pony tail, ran a brush through my hair (which had grown quite long, actually)and freshened up my make-up. After a couple of squirts of Clinique Happy Heart, I was ready for some fun.

And that's when it hit me. Jesse. And. I. Are. Having. Sex. I could hardly contain my excitement.

I opened the door to find all the lights out. The only way I could find the bed room, actually, was by the candle light coming from the door. I hadn't been to the bedroom yet, so I assumed that there was already some candles in there. I mean, after all, it is a honey moon suite in on of the finest hotels on the island.

Walking through the door, I found Jesse standing there, his back towards me, as he attempted to light a candle with one of the annoying, cheap,matches they provide in the hotel. As he was lighting the candle, the match began to burn down to his thumb. Before I could get to him in time to help, he was throwing the match down blowing on his thumb in pain as a said some spanish, that didn't sound to pleasant to the ears. The match went out before the entire hotel burned down, but I wasn't too concerned with that.

"Oh, hold on, I'll get some ice." I said, heading into the mini kitchen and getting a cube of ice. I didn't realize he had followed me in until I turned around.

Taking his hand, I put the ice on the spot of the burn. For a while we just stood there. I was watching his thumb, but I'm sure he wasn't since he broke the silence by saying. "You look so amazing, Susannah."

His non burned thumb rose and began to stroke my cheek gently. Throwing the ice cube into the sink, I turned to face him. Now, originally, I was planning on kissing him again. But that was idea was shut down as Jesse picked me up, just like he had the night before and like every husband carrys his wife on they're honeymoon, and took me to the bedroom.

And you take me over
over again

I wonder how can I go on and on
when you want to bury my passion
You are the shell around
I cannot escape
and I swallow my pride

For some reason, I couldn't help but laugh a little. I think it was the realization that we were going back to the bedroom that started to, I don't know... excite me.

Jesse laid me down on the bed, and I saw that his smile was matching mine. When he kissed me, I realized that he had been waiting for this moment too. Even though it didn't seem like it when we would get into our heavy makeout sessions and he would end them. But now, he wasn't holding back his feelings. And I loved it.

This kisswas differant than all of our other kisses. This one was more heavy and lustful. But it was still tender and full with love.

A moan escaped as his hand, which had been on my thigh, began to pull the silk fabric up. Which felt real good. I began to attempt to get his white shirt off, because I never get tired of seeing his 6-pack. Jesse, noticing this, raised his arms for me to take it off.

Oh yes... Topless Jesse. Could life get any better? Little did I know how much better once Jesse discarded the lingerie, leaving us both completly topless.

Now, I had seen Jesse topless, but the closest he's gotten to seeing my knockers has been at the beach when I had on a bikini. But now, he was speechless. Which is an awesome compliment, if you ask me.

Entwined together now
it's time to pass it over
(and you take me over, over again)
Entwined together now

And you take me over
over again

"Nombre de Dios..." He breathed, looking back into my eyes. "You're so beautiful, Querida." He leaned in and started kissing my neck. If I was planning on saying anything, it would have been impossible. I couldn't breathe. It felt so incredibly good, escpecially when his hand rose to hold my breast. I let out a small gasp. He had touched my breasts before, in the heat of the moment. But there wasn't a fiber of fabric between us now.

His kisses moved down. To my twins. This caused many goose bumps to rise. It took a few moments of that to actually get my brainwaves to function properly. As he moved to my other one, I realized he had more clothes on. In the pants region. He was still wearing his shorts.

Well, that was unfair. So I began unzipping them. I didn't realize how close my fingers were to his "Man Land" (A/N: hehe, that was taken from Home Improvement, goodness, that show rocks) until I felt something harden. The main indication that it was what I thought it was had been the moan that I felt, reverberating from his throat.

Eventually, we got his pants (and boxers) out of the way. And there he was. Full Monty. I would tell you how big if I was able to compare it to others. But I had never seen one before then.

But now there was only one article of clothing that remained: my undies.

I wonder how can I live on and on
when you want to live in a hurry
You are the wall
-that I-
That I have to remove
and I swallow
I swallow my pride

And so, the kissing continued. Involuntarily, I wrapped my leg around him as Jesse's hand started stroking my thigh, very softly. Soon enough though, his kisses made it down to my thigh.

"Oh, wow..." I found myself saying in a very heavy passionate voice that sounded so unlike me. I began running my fingers through his hair. I could feel his lips forming a smile. He was making me happy. Very happy. Which he liked. The combination of his lips on me, his warm breath against my skin, and his hands stroking my body was making it very difficult to breathe.

Those same hands began to pull my panties down as he moved his lips back to mine. As he kissed me, it took me a second to realize what I was supposed to do now. I had lost all of my thinking ability before. But I recovered quickly as our tounges began to play once again. Once he had removed my underwear, my legs wrapped around him once again, pulling him closely to me and refusing to let go.

My hands began rubbing his large, muscularback. As I did this, I noticed that hard place between his legs stiffen more.

He stopped kissing me and pulled away. For a moment, time stood still as his eyes met mine. But he tore his gaze away from mine and looked at the bedside table, I followed his gaze and saw a box of condoms, which he picked up.

He sat on the edge of the bed, dealing with the wrapper. Getting on my knees, I came behind him. As I kissed my shoulder, I took in his scent. It was a mixture of Old Spice and his natural, invigorating scent. I will never forget how wonderful it is.

Jesse turned around. He finally got the darn thing on. I fell back on the large, king size, bed as he moved on top of me.

"Are you ready?" He said. We both knew that it would hurt for me the first time.

I nodded. "Yeah." I said. If I didn't do it then, then when would I? So I had to be brave about it.

Entwined together now
it's time to pass it over
Entwined together now
Entwined forever

And you take me over
over again

And then he went into me. I took ina sharp breath of pain. He let out a moan of pleasure. Why must it hurt? Really? Why should it be so painful for us on the first time, and the guys get to enjoy it? Life just isn't fair.

I eventually managed to block out the pain and focus on the good. Jesse was inside me.That was fair enough. It actually feels good if you ignore the pain of first being entered in that way.

After some minutes of that, he stoped and got off of me. As he took off the condom, I realized how cold it was without him by my side. Without his warmth. So I covered myself with the blankets.

Jesse crawled in next to me, breathing heavily as I was. They're right when they say having sex is excersize. His hand was stoking my stomach as we gazed into eachother's eyes.

"I love you." I said simply, as our legs got tangled up together.

He rested his forehead on mine and gave me a soft kiss on the lips as he said. "I love you, Querida."

That's how we fell asleep. Simplytogether.

Entwined together
Entwined forever


That's all folks. I don't know how good I did considering I have no experience in the guy department. But there you have it.

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That's all folks. I don't know how good I did considering I have no experience in the guy department. But there you have it.