Irish: Hey, I know my punctuation sucks, so can you authors that are more experienced help me out? Thanks.
"Fine, but you can't tell anyone! Not even Larten." Raven remarked.
"Fine, okay, just tell us already!" Evra said getting tired of the big deal.
"I, I can kind of see things that have'ent happened yet, or did happen." She stated looking down at her feet. She always had a horrible time becoming friends after she would tell persons that. People she thought loved her. No, they just shut her out. Not because they were scared of her, but because they thought, she was crazy.
"I take that back about being crazy..." Evra said rather rudely.
"See? It always happens this way! I say the truth and people-people even with freaking lizard skin don't believe me!" Raven yelled.
Too many people turned their back on her once before for her not to know why.
"Hey, sorry okay? You kind of have to admit, that is far fetched." Evra sighed.
"Yeah Evra's right. However, Im a blood sucking animal, what's not to believe anymore?" Darren remarked trying to make her feel better.
"I can prove it. I'll make you believe." With the twitch of her arm, she was up and had her hand over Evra's scaly forehead.
"Hey! What are you doing?" Evra just had enough time to say- until he felt a quick wave of power, of whose he did not know. After a minute had passed, all was silent. The silence was finally lifted when Raven fell backwards toward the edge of the tent. Evra was left as if in a shock.
"What did you do to him?" Darren asked with fury in his eyes.
"He's fine...I have something...Now." Raven sat up with her hands holding her head.
"Evra?" Raven asked.
"Huh...oh, what?"
"You're going to marry a freak who can detach her ears and use them for boomerangs." Raven said, quite serious she was.
"Yeah, you're crazy." Evra said.
"You wanna know something else? Your middle name is Claus."
Evra was stunned by that fact.
"Wow! No one knows that but me!"
"Now we know not to doubt me..."
IM SO SORRY IT IS SHORT! Im kind of on writers block...
