Me : Before I start the reviewers I would like to say...Happy anniversery Danny! It's been, since yesterday, excatly one year since the show airred! WOOHOO! Now for the reviewers!
Dannysgf08 : all i can say is,...WOW, GO DANNY! he is So brave, well, i guess that's a good quality of a superhero, lol, plz continue, i LOVE it so far
Me : Yep, well he is the best superhero since Spiderman and Daredevil, well i think he is!
Sukirachan : Great story so far! Can't wait to read more!
Me : THANXX!
InuPhantom : this is cute please continue
Me : well here's da next chapter!
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet : Well, it sounds like a beautiful story.I'd just say, slow down.You're trying so hard to get such a great plot line out, that you forgot to discribe the day, and how Danny felt at that particular moment.Good day, bad day?Summer or Winter?Warm, cool, or purple spotted?;)
Calaps is spelled Colapse
Sute is spelled Soot.
That's about it in the critique.Nice job, and looking forward to more.
Me : lol! well i do rush alot, as u can see in my other stories, i just, well, wanna get to the good part! like in my guy im trying to slow down but i just wanna get to the good part!
well i am a bad speller, thanx!
Raven : This one is kinda nice but is there more to the story?And what is Katlyn's big secret?
Rating:Four stars
Me :duh there's more to the story! u'll find out in this chappy or in the next depends what u call a secret! Four stars. If this is four stars out of TEN, im gonna feel real bad!
now, ONWARD VIRGINIA! hehe
Here's Chapter 2
I was glad to finally get out of there, but right now I had a different problem and she was starring at me strangely! We landed in the alley next to the house.
"In-In-Inviso B-B-Bill?" she stuttered, was she really still afraid of me? Even after I saved her life! I sighed. Well, atleast I can tell her my real name instead of Inviso Bill.
"No, it's Danny Phantom."I said happily. Then she squinted her eyes and looked me in the eye and smiled.
"So, you have powers too,...Danny Fenton?" she asked. My eyes widened.
"How did you-"
"-know that, I have a secret too." She walked over by the wall and sat down, I did too next to her. "I can read minds."
"Really? Wht's your name kid?" I asked.
"Katlyn McCarthy, and I can do this!" She closed her eyes and concentrated real hard, then the garbagecan next to us began to levetate.
"That's awesome!" I exclaimed and she looked down at her feet gloomly."What's wrong?" I asked. She looked up to me.
"Your lucky." she replied. I gave her a questional look.
"What?"
"You have your powers and your family. For me I can only have one." The girl pulled out a burnt up picture from her back pocket and starred at it."They're gone." I looked at the picture. It had 3 people in it, one of them was the girl next tome but youngerand the others were her parents of which she resembled.
"I'm sorry." I said. I really was sorry, a girl her age shouldn't just be left alone to handle special powers like that!
"You shouldn't be. My mom died when I little and my dad..." she trailed off, "My dad died from the fire." I began to sweat.
"T-This fire?" I stuttered.
"Yeah."
"I could've saved him..." I trailed off. She stood up and looked me in the eye.
"Don't feel bad, he didn't die because of you! He died because of me!"she yelled at me, thenshe started crying.
"You mean?"I asked, hoping for her not to answer-
"I started the fire."
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She did it! well R&R to find out what happens next!
