Well, this is chapter 9, and now, a few words from our sponsors.
Also take into consideration that there have been no reviews yet, and I last updated on Thursday, my birthday.
But, I have now received 2 reviews here party junk and all that going off in the background from 1 of my fav writers, and another person I never heard of before, but thank you, none the less, so thank you…
Sugarhighnutcase-thank you so much for reviewing, and the compliments! My singular reviewer, but hopefully, this is not a pattern, and you will be the 1st, maybe only person, to read 9 chapters in a row.
Now, like 2 weeks after I started writing chapter ten (sorry guys) I just got another review!
teen titan girl-thanks to you too! Now, I would go with your advice, or what you said, you get it, but I already wrote a lot to go back and change, plus, I kinda focused this on lily, and her secrets, but I can't say anything now.
Now, some sad news, then happy news.
SAD: it is taking me so long to write this, and by the time I get it submitted, you guys will probably not read it. Why do I feel like I'm talking to air? What's that Jalks? You think I am talking to air, oh, really thin air, thanks, but you have a point. The chances of someone reading this really is that slim! HA HA! Anyone get it? I didn't even get it till after I typed it!
Sad: 8 reviewers have realized that this Lily is the total opposite of Lily Potter (as in she is not a Potter, or even related).
Happy: I am now 13; on May 7 we get our first look at the Goblet of Fire, or as my mom says, the 'Goblets' of fire. For more info on that, check out www dot mugglenet dot com or www dot hpana dot com, or even www dot wizardnews dot com
Sad: I had like 9 reviewers, or was it 11, that said it was a good story, keyword, 'had'.
Now, I would like to respond to some old reviews, again, plus my only new one.
Uh…I forgot my name: I tried to understand what you said, so please tell me if, you ever read this, if I understood what you said.
Anyone who tried to correct my grammar/story: thank you, tell me, please if I did get it right.
Sugarhighnutcase: I just realized how it is mostly dialogue, and no action, but I don't think if I tried action it would be good, but I will try to fit some in to this next chapter, just for you!
Well, now, last week you guys got a jingle, and yes I've made all of this up, so this week, we'll get a raerob supporter slogan. Made up bye me, because I wrote them all in my friend's notebook, cuz they all go for stupid robstar, but anyways.
Instead of 'JFK, all the way', you guys get 'Rob and Rae, all the way!'
Now, to answer a question, this main character, Lily, in my story, is not Lily Potter, my lone reviewer, you know who you are, asked this question, and no, I think you might have skipped over the part in chapter 4, but I will repeat it, and I hope all people who read this will remember this. Though I do not mind repeating things, as long as people review, even flame for all I care.
In chapter 5 she talks about how she nicknamed herself after Lily Potter and that is the difference between Lily and Lily. Which, yes, that made no sense…
A VERY MAJOR MISTAKE WAS MADE AND HERE IS THE CORRECTION
In chapter 5, it says that Lily is a year younger then Hermione, Ron, Harry, yada yada; but she is actually, the same year as them, which makes her 16, in the 6th year, but her bday is in December, so she will turn 17 in her 6th year. That also means, that I made a mistake in the last chapter, so actually, yes, she does have her apparating license, which means, of course, she can, and has been apparating. So sorry for that mistake you guys!
PLEASE NOTE THAT EVERYONE, OR THE LITTLE MOUSE IN THE CORNER, BECAUSE I THINK ALL OF YOU LEFT, I AM GOING AS FAST AS I CAN, SO PLEASE KEEP READING THIS STORY. SO FROM NOW ON, EVERYONE STICK BY THAT, OK? PLEASE? DON'T MAKE ME KEEP BEGGING. THAT'S JUST EVIL.
Now chapter 9 Getting Acquainted to the Tower
She took her stuff upstairs and showed her pets around. Then, get this, she took them back downstairs.
Raven was sitting at the counter drinking her tea. Next to her was Robin, who was reading the paper. Cy and BB were battling it out, again, on gamestaion, while Star watched the 'cars of racing'.
After watching quietly for a while, Lily walked over to Robin and Raven, "You guys are communicating telekinetically aren't you? Well, do you guys think you could stop looking at each other like two dumb little puppies in 'wuv' for like 2 minutes so I can ask you guys something?" she asked, trying not to laugh. Robin and Raven looked at each other, at the same time. Lily watched as they both blushed, then Robin turned to her, "Sure, as long as you don't tell the others." "Sure, now, my question. Is it okay if I do something to my door so that my pets can get in and out?" the Voldything supporter asked the boy wonder.(OMG did anyone just read what I wrote, the part about Lily, well, the Voldything is a term used by HP Sleuths referring to Voldemort. But, the 'Voldything supporter' is either half truth, or not truth. You guys can take a guess at it, but I am telling you absolutely nothing. You will find out later, around chapter 23 maybe. Back to the fic)
"Well, that depends, will it in any way make the tower at greater risk for invasion, or greater risk for a titan-napping?" he replied, "No, not if I can get the spell to work right, it might make the chance of me, in particular, getting kidnapped, because I can put a defense spell on my door, too." Lily replied "Okay. While you're at it, would you mind putting the defense spell thing on all the doors?" the boy wonder inquired, "Really? Sure. It'll be cool to help the titans, and with my own homemade spell!" at this last part everyone in the tower gave her as double glance, as if wishing they had not heard that.
"What guys, it's a simple spell, I was joking about the homemade part, but the one for letting the pets in is homemade. But I can reassure you, I am a fairly good charm maker, and all of them so far are reliable. I did the same spell on my door at home." She replied, after seeing there faces. "That's reassuring, ok, go on with the spells." Robin replied.
Then Lily walked away, with Jalks, Vowlain, and Eswob at her feet. She went back up to her room, flipped through her notebook of spells and charms that she made up, searching for the one for her door. Once she found it, she had he pets wait outside her door, then cast the spell, and had them come in one at a time. Eswob came in, and then curled up on the top branch of her kitty tree thing, for nap. Then Jalks came in, and then Vowlain. It was like an invisible doggy door. She searched in all of her Defense Against the Dark Arts books, and found the spell for the doors in her Year three book. She opened the window and let Wryxel out to fly. Then she went around with Jalks, as Vowlain had stayed in the room for a nap. She started at Beastboy's door, and then worked her way around the tower, and also on the doors in and out of the tower, like the front door, garage door, roof door.
She then took Jalks and Vowlain on a walk. Since she was letting Wryxel get exercise she thought it would be fair to let Jalks and Vowlain get some exercise in the fresh air too. They went through Jump City Park and on the way back she stopped at the mall. She had to tie up Jalks and Vowlain outside, which was a very odd sight. Can you imagine seeing two wolfs tied up outside a mall acting all calm and laying down?
She went into Claire's and looked at the guy shop part to see if they had any new wristbands. She found a few, then went to Hot Topic and looked at the Harry Potter stuff, then wristbands.
(Dudes, the original chapter ended here, but I am going to go on, because I realized how short it was, and so I can get some action in here for sugarhighnutcase. That also means I would like you to review!)
She was on her way to Jalks and Vowlain when her communicator went off. She flipped it open and Raven's face appeared on the screen. You could tell she was on the R-Cycle behind Robin because she was holding it with 1 hand and her hair was flying every which way. "It's Overload. He's down by the movie theatre." She said quickly "I'll head there now." Lily replied.
She stuffed the bags in her pocket and left for the theatre. On her way out she grabbed Jalks and Vowlain with her powers and transported them with her to the theatre. She got there and had them stay so she could go help the titans fight Overload. She arrived at the theatre after the titans had. She flew over to where she saw the titans, or whatever they were. She got there right as Robin and Raven did, or shortly after them. Then she told Jalks and Vowlain to stay. Then she went to help Beastboy and Cyborg, who were distracting Overload. Now the real fun begins.
She watched as Robin tended to Raven and Starfire, who had gotten knocked into each other, then knocked into a pole, then knocked unconscious. Beastboy then tried to dodge a massive electric hand, but was a hint to late. As he was now laying face down on the pavement. Then, when Cyborg tried his cannon, which backfired because there was too much electricity in the air, and he turned that dull gray color, gut it was not all grey, it still was like half blue.
Lily floated into the air, then quickly summoned some water from the lake (you guys know, the one that separates titans tower from jump city). She gave it a color change so it glimmered, and waved it in front of Overloads face to get him dizzy. Then, after he was a hint hypnotized, she splashed him with it. Which, of course, made him start going all sparky and then. "Poof!" Lily said as Overload blew into the tiny disk.
By then Beastboy was starting to sit up, Cyborg was gaining more blue, Raven and Starfire were sitting up, and Robin was smiling. "That was pretty good for a new member." He said after he got to his feet, brushing of the knees on his uniform. "Thanks, really." Lily replied, smiling too, but in a sarcastic tone. "This would have been the highlight of my day at Hogwarts. I mean, there's no one to fight, and I can only really practice my powers after classes, like on the weekends. That is, if I have finished my homework." She replied, while tilting her head back and forth trying to remember things.
Then they all headed peacefully back to the tower. They then ate pizza, while Voldemort's most trusted follower, was gaining power, day by day.
Now, I leave you with another chapter, I am sorry I double spaced it, I thought it would be easier to tell the lines apart. Plus, it makes it longer (he he shifty eyes). Until next time, I would like you to ponder this.
It is a small riddle that I made up, so please 'attempt' to solve it.
First tell me two numbers of magical meaning,
Then tell me the month which we all will be leaving.
The time, fast approaching, you all must solve now,
But wait till tomorrow and you shall ask 'How?'
If anyone checks mugglenet or wizardnews or hpana, or really any hp site, and know what is happening soon with the Goblet of Fire movie, that is what the riddle points to.
I will have the answer for you next chapter.
See you then!
