I'm back in the action. This story is going to be about Minka! Whoo! OK, first chapter is never good. But, I will try to make it good.
Chapter 1
A gentle wind blew against the water tribe's village. The sky was a light gray, the sun was making an attempt to shine through the thick clouds. Birds began to chirp and animals began to stir, marking the beginning of a new day. The sun burst through the clouds, shining on the village, awakening the people.
It was another ordinary day for the residents of the water tribe. You get up, and start working. Today was just like any other day of the week. But for one little girl, this day wasn't considered 'Another boring day of nothingness'. Today would bring happiness and excitement to everyone. Well, at least that's what she thought it would be...
The bright sun shone through the animal skin of her tent and on to her face. Her eyes fluttered open. She yawned slightly. She stretched her muscles for they where stiff from being still for so long. When she finally was awake she jumped out of her bed. She smoothed her water tribe dress free of wrinkles or dust. She ran over to a small bag and pulled out a rock. It was smooth and silver. She held it up to her face and looked at her reflection. Her hazel eyes shone with happiness, her long brown hair was braided into a long pony tail, her teeth were as white as snow as she smiled. Today, for her, was special, for it was Minka's 13th birthday.
For any child, your birthday was always something to celebrate. But when you reached the age of thirteen, that symbolizes that you are now a teenager. One step away from woman hood.
Minka skipped out her tent and stepped onto the cold snow. She took in a deep breath. "What a beautiful day!"
Yes, yes, I know, you're all thinking "What a crapy beginning chapter". WELL, if you don't like it you can go jump off of a cliff. I tried. But all intro's aren't that good. Give me some credit, okay? (And for making another story, you better all give me cookies!) And for the update: I'm not better. Yes, it sucks, I know. But finally my stupid doctor FINALLY is sending me to an ear, nose and throat doctor. I got an MRI and nothing is wrong with my brain (AND YES I DO HAVE A BRAIN, I know, surprising). So, hopefully, it has something to do with my inner ears. Enough chit chat. More reviewing, yes? Hope you liked the intro! XD
Jen
