DISCLAIMER: Don't own anything except Anna, even though I wished I owned a
few other things..(
"Excellent work, Mr. Brown. You've assisted in the capture of two dangerous fugitives," the Commodore said while putting his sword back into his sheath.
"Just doing my civic duty, sir," he said as he passed me to the Commodore like I was some kind of rag doll.
Will stood there and looked like he did all that for nothing. Will did do most - no all of the work, except for knocking Jack unconscious!
"We're stuck in prison," I said as I lowered my hat and sat in the far corner.
"Yes we are, love," he said.
There was a long pause, I was trying to think of my way out, Jack was probably to, or else he would be talkin' up a storm.
There were some noises in the background of the prisoners next to us.
"Come here, boy. Nice juicy bone. Come here. Come on," they all said.
I shook my head as I looked to the other prisoner's cell and saw them holding up a bone for the dog. The dog with the keys that is. He just sat there not moving at all.
I shook my head as Jack said, "You could keep doing that forever the dog is never going to move,"
One of the prisoners came up to the bars, separating us and them, "Oh, excuse us if we haven't resigned ourselves to the gallows just yet."
I gave a small smile because I had the perfect sarcastic answer to that, but I figured that I shouldn't do it, because of the position we're in, we're going to be stuck with them for a while.
"BOOM!"
A loud noise came from outside about an hour later.
Jack and I looked at each other and immediately knew what that sound was, it was cannon fire. We ran toward the barred window. "It's the pearl," Jack and I whispered together as we watched the Black Pearl firing at villages and markets and everything else, it didn't matter to them where they hit.
"Black Pearl? I've heard stories. She's been preying on ships and settlements for near ten years. Never leaves any survivors." One of the prisoners said while his face rested on the wall separating us.
"If there are no survivors, then where do the stories come from?" I asked them.
After a few minutes of waiting and Jack and I talking about possibilities on why they're here, what they're doing and so forth.
There was another huge "boom" but this time it was closer, way closer. It hit the wall opening the prisoners cell next to us. The impact was so great Jack and I almost flew to hit the cell door.
"My sympathies friend, it's no matter of luck at all." The same prisoner said to us before leaving the cell to be free again.
I sighed as I looked at the tiny whole on our side that the cannon left for us. Jack sat in front of it, resting his head on the crack. Hardly big enough to fit a small dog threw.
"We gotta get out of here," I said to Jack.
He didn't say anything, thinking again probably.
He turned around after a few moments and looked at the dog far from our cell.
"Have you seen that bone, love?" he asked.
I raised my eyebrows and shook my head, but I grabbed the bone for him anyway.
"Come on, doggy. Give us our freedom again. It's you and ol' Jack , come on. Come on, good boy. That's it, good boy, come on! Bit closer, bit closer." He said. The dog stopped. I grabbed the bone from him that was outside of the cell, tempting the dog to come. "I've always had a way with animals," I said as I rested my arm out of the cell, with the bone in my hand. "Come one boy," I said in a happy voice, "Come here, c'mon, c'mon, that's a good boy, good doggy," he walked toward me as I looked at Jack and gave him one of those looks that I could do something better than you, or a Ha! I was right! Look. I looked back out of the cell and saw the dog walking down the stairs, keys and all. "No! Come back!" I yelled after the dog. I looked at Jack just waiting for all of the teasing I was going to get from him. "I have a way with animals," he said as he mocked me in a higher voice. "Oh shut up," I said as I hit him with the bone.
~*~ hi every1 thankzx 2 pir8_wuman84 and Dreamweaver for reviewing my story, all reviews are appreciated, except flames, constructive critisim is good, but no flames! I'm going to re-do some of the chapters so that they match the movie a lot better. I only watched the movie twice and my parents said that they wouldn't take me anymore, maybe I could just walk..Anyway! I'm doing this because a website has FINALLY made a SCRIPT FOR POTC..just so every1 sees (. The URL is:
that. It only has the words, not a lot of what we see in the movie, but great script otherwise, it is the first one on the net! BYE BYE!!! Please review they make me want to write more and faster (
"Excellent work, Mr. Brown. You've assisted in the capture of two dangerous fugitives," the Commodore said while putting his sword back into his sheath.
"Just doing my civic duty, sir," he said as he passed me to the Commodore like I was some kind of rag doll.
Will stood there and looked like he did all that for nothing. Will did do most - no all of the work, except for knocking Jack unconscious!
"We're stuck in prison," I said as I lowered my hat and sat in the far corner.
"Yes we are, love," he said.
There was a long pause, I was trying to think of my way out, Jack was probably to, or else he would be talkin' up a storm.
There were some noises in the background of the prisoners next to us.
"Come here, boy. Nice juicy bone. Come here. Come on," they all said.
I shook my head as I looked to the other prisoner's cell and saw them holding up a bone for the dog. The dog with the keys that is. He just sat there not moving at all.
I shook my head as Jack said, "You could keep doing that forever the dog is never going to move,"
One of the prisoners came up to the bars, separating us and them, "Oh, excuse us if we haven't resigned ourselves to the gallows just yet."
I gave a small smile because I had the perfect sarcastic answer to that, but I figured that I shouldn't do it, because of the position we're in, we're going to be stuck with them for a while.
"BOOM!"
A loud noise came from outside about an hour later.
Jack and I looked at each other and immediately knew what that sound was, it was cannon fire. We ran toward the barred window. "It's the pearl," Jack and I whispered together as we watched the Black Pearl firing at villages and markets and everything else, it didn't matter to them where they hit.
"Black Pearl? I've heard stories. She's been preying on ships and settlements for near ten years. Never leaves any survivors." One of the prisoners said while his face rested on the wall separating us.
"If there are no survivors, then where do the stories come from?" I asked them.
After a few minutes of waiting and Jack and I talking about possibilities on why they're here, what they're doing and so forth.
There was another huge "boom" but this time it was closer, way closer. It hit the wall opening the prisoners cell next to us. The impact was so great Jack and I almost flew to hit the cell door.
"My sympathies friend, it's no matter of luck at all." The same prisoner said to us before leaving the cell to be free again.
I sighed as I looked at the tiny whole on our side that the cannon left for us. Jack sat in front of it, resting his head on the crack. Hardly big enough to fit a small dog threw.
"We gotta get out of here," I said to Jack.
He didn't say anything, thinking again probably.
He turned around after a few moments and looked at the dog far from our cell.
"Have you seen that bone, love?" he asked.
I raised my eyebrows and shook my head, but I grabbed the bone for him anyway.
"Come on, doggy. Give us our freedom again. It's you and ol' Jack , come on. Come on, good boy. That's it, good boy, come on! Bit closer, bit closer." He said. The dog stopped. I grabbed the bone from him that was outside of the cell, tempting the dog to come. "I've always had a way with animals," I said as I rested my arm out of the cell, with the bone in my hand. "Come one boy," I said in a happy voice, "Come here, c'mon, c'mon, that's a good boy, good doggy," he walked toward me as I looked at Jack and gave him one of those looks that I could do something better than you, or a Ha! I was right! Look. I looked back out of the cell and saw the dog walking down the stairs, keys and all. "No! Come back!" I yelled after the dog. I looked at Jack just waiting for all of the teasing I was going to get from him. "I have a way with animals," he said as he mocked me in a higher voice. "Oh shut up," I said as I hit him with the bone.
~*~ hi every1 thankzx 2 pir8_wuman84 and Dreamweaver for reviewing my story, all reviews are appreciated, except flames, constructive critisim is good, but no flames! I'm going to re-do some of the chapters so that they match the movie a lot better. I only watched the movie twice and my parents said that they wouldn't take me anymore, maybe I could just walk..Anyway! I'm doing this because a website has FINALLY made a SCRIPT FOR POTC..just so every1 sees (. The URL is:
that. It only has the words, not a lot of what we see in the movie, but great script otherwise, it is the first one on the net! BYE BYE!!! Please review they make me want to write more and faster (
