Thanks for being so kind to give me the will to continue again... BUT! Sorry, I didn't wrote the previous chaps from the first to the 'seventh'. It's my cousin, but the other two stories I have was really written by me, just this one was not mine. She told me that she doesn't have an idea so maybe I should be the one who'll continue this as well... I have just read this story and I admit, it's dialogue sucks... really (sheesh... she still practices to write fics so she used my account before creating her own... she's afraid of flamers...). I'll try my best to improve the dialogue (I am not also good, I admit. We just have the same style of writing and same grammar). Also maybe, the story would be a bit twisted cuz I don't know how to write a drama/romance fic, so the style maybe a bit different. Whew! enough with the long speech, let's get on w/ d story...
Disclaimer: I don't own shaman king and the characters
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Chapter 7: COULD THIS BE THE END?
(Continuation of chapter 6)
Ren ran after Pirika when all of the sudden a bunch of kyon-shi's got on his way.
"SHIT!"
"Ren, why are you chasing that slut while your fiancee is already 'here' behind you?" Macchi said.
"SHUT UP!" Ren grabbed his kuan-dao, put Bason in it and aimed it straight on Macchi. "If you'll continue calling her names, I'll never think twice on ripping you out..."
"Fuck, then do it!" Macchi gritted her teeth as she looked at the blade of the spear almost piercing a small hole in her chest.
"You said it..." Ren was ready to plunge the spear onto her when all of the sudden a kyon-shi kicked him off.
Pirika had heard everything and stopped running. She looked back to see Ren on a battle. She paused for a while... and shook her head, "No... I shouldn't..."
She tried to continue walking but she was held back... she just found herself heading to where he was.
(back to the kyon-shi's)
"Damn! they're too many!" Ren felt a bit exhausted as he was getting breathless. They were just too many and got even much stronger than before.
"You still think you can beat them after 3 years without training? That's totally ridiculous..." En just snorted.
"If you'll stop being stubborn and accept Macchi, we'll gonna stop this mess."
"NEVER!" Ren regained his strenght and continued fighting, just to be blown away again.
"Ren!" She came back...
Ren looked back at her... and looked back at everyone. "I'll never lose..."
"Tch... she's back." Ran said under her fan.
"She never learns..." En said.
"Ren!" She ran to him when all of the sudden a kyon-shi came and knocked her down unconscious.
"Pirika!" He was about to get her when he felt something behind him.
"You're just getting too stubborn..." From nowhere, En came aiming Ren's kuan-dao on his back.
"WH - WHAT THE!"
En unmercifully buried the spear on Ren's back letting the fresh slit flood with scarlet fluid.
"Ren!" Macchi ran to him, and let him lie down on her lap. "B- buji ka? (Are you ok?)Ren! Kotaero! (answer me!)"
"PAI LONG!" Suddenly a familiar voice yelled.
Where am I?
I can't see anything... it's too dark...
Pirika found herself alone nowhere in the dark... she tried to step forward when she noticed someone...
W - who's that? Ren?
She tried to touch him when he suddenly vanished in the thin air.
REN!
"KYAAAAA!" Pirika woke up yelling. She looked around to see herself lying in her bed, inside her room in the dormitory.
"Was everything just a dream?" She stood up the bed and looked at the alarm clock to find that it was already 3:00 in the afternoon and it is saturday. "Saturday? I - I have been sleeping for two days?"
She felt very skeptical, how did she came back? Who brought her? Was it Ren? And... did he accept Macchi already? She walked to the bathroom and felt a cracking pain on her ribcage. "Ouch!"
She rubbed her ribcage and found a scar on it... "Now, I remember... a kyon-shi hit me here..."
"So everything was not a dream..."
(after an hour or two)
Pirika walked along the empty corridors of the school. It was Saturday, of course everyone's not around. All of the rick kids were hanging around with their friends at the most expensive places. The dormitory? Nah! It was just a 'closet' for the rich brats. They never sleep or stay there, they just go back there in the morning to change in to school uniform. She can't find a place where she can be alone but just the empty school.
She decided to go to the rooftop. While on her way different thoughts came to her mind. Thinking about the words his parents shoved on her face just made her sick. It hurts to hell. But after all those, could he still choose her as his girl? Or he would finally end up being with Macchi? Or was everything he told her, the confessions and the kisses were all lies? She don't know... She does'nt have an idea... she didn't want to see him again... cry another tear for him again... she doesn't want to mess his life again... she'd better let him go...
But... if it is really destined to see him again... she'll never waste the very last chance...
She opened the door of the rooftop, to see the tongari she used to love...
"Ren?" She said...
He didn't even answered or even looked back. It's like he heard nothing...
She noticed the long scar on his back for he was shirtless... it was still bleeding a bit...
"Ano...senaka wa (your back is...)..."
"Wakatteru... (I know...)"
"Who did that?"
He just sighed. "You shouldn't have to know, it's none of your business..."
She felt coldness from the way he speaks... what's wrong?
She took two steps closer... "Did you already accept her?" She asked.
He looked at her and looked back at the view of the city below. He went silent for a while.
"Answer me..." She prepared herself for his answer... she promised herself not cry again...
He looked at her again and just sighed.
"Yeah... I did..."
She just bowed down her head, shut her eyes tight as tears started to flood down her eyes, she can't really promise herself not to cry again...
"Don't expect me to come back here again..." He walked closer to her, wiped away her tears and kissed her.
"Quit your whining... I'm sick of it. I admit, I fooled you. I just used you to fill the emptiness in me..."
He walked away... and as he reached the door, he paused for a while...
"Sore, aishiteru koto iwanakatta no 'wake' ga... (That's the 'reason' why I never told you I love you)
Ok... (trembles as sees a batallion of angry readers glaring), I didn't mean to make Ren dump her! It's... ugh, never mind... just read the next chap. I promise, I'll bring them back together! (I'll try my best to follow the story throught the previous chaps)
