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To All my Reviewers: I am trying to make my chapters longer, its just that, I LOVE getting reviews, they make me feel happy, So if I take a long time to update, I am writing a longer chapter(or trying to!)
MOTEL ROOM
Rory snuggled under the covers getting closer and closer to Jess, thinking about what just happened. There bodies had come together as one, she loved him, so much, she thought about him all the time, he never left her mind, once. She got closer to him, feeling the warmth of his body next to hers, this is all she needed in life, to be close to him, to be with him, for him to love her back.
Jess stared at the figure laying next to him, the girl, his high-school sweetheart, she meant everything to him. And to lose her again practically meant selling his soul to the devil. Jess was smart, Jess read a lot, and He wanted to be a writer when he grew up, the slight difference to Rory, who just wanted to be a journalist. But in his mind he thought that someday they would travel together, her studying for her articles, and him studying for his books, they would work together, help each other, and maybe someday even start a family.
"Rory," Jess said softly.
"Yeah."
"Don't you have school?"
"Huh," Rory looked at the clock, "Oh shit," she yelled jumping out of bed in all of her nakedly goriness (much to Jess's delight.) Not even noticing that Jess was staring at her, she put on her clothes from the night before, blew him a kiss and ran off to her dorm room to get her books…and some coffee. Jess sat up in his bed, he rubbed his eyes, looked at the clock.
"Wow," he said outloud, "It's late." He slowly got up, put on those smiley face boxers that Rory had been admiring the night before. He Put on Jeans and a black shirt, he decided to wander around Hartford a little, instead of staying in his motel room all day and watching TV, only getting out to go get some food. He walked down the steps of the motel, and wandered into the streets, he looked around for a coffee shop, he quickly spotted a starbucks and went inside, and he ordered a decaf coffee. He tasted it, not as good as Luke's he thought, he took another sip, it wasn't worth it, he needed Luke's, this was Disgusting. For all of the risks he was taking by going to Luke's it was worth it, for the coffee…
DORM
Rory ran into the dorm room her first class had started 15 minutes ago, all that was on her mind was coffee, she needed it, and she was still half asleep without it. She quickly gathered up all of her books, and that crap, and ran to one of the coffee stands on Campus.
"Hey Rory," the person said, she went for coffee so often that practically all of the camus coffee stand owners knew her name.
"Hey Reggie, Coffee please, I'm late."
"Here you go," Reggie said handing her the largest coffee they had.
"Thank you so much," Rory said as she ran off to class, she took a sip of the coffee. Know she felt so much more awake, so much livelier.
She walked into her class room…
"Rory Gilmore," the professor said, "care to join us."
"Um, yes, I'm so sorry that I'm late, its just that…"
"I don't need an explanation, just please sit."
"Yes professor." Rory sat down and tried very hard to listen to what the professor was saying, but some how it went in one ear and right out the other, she was daydreaming, about Jess, who else… Who else could stay on her mind for that long and never get boring. No one, no on but him, he never bored, he was full of so many ideas, that bad boy theme was starting to wear off a little, he seemed a little better, a little nicer. She just sat there for over an hour thinking about him, her sweetheart…Jess…
What will happen at the Diner? Will Rory ever pay attention? Review to find out! I'm thinking of writing about 1-2-3 more chapters, e-mail me(or review) if you guys have any idease you want to fill me in on.
