Ok I got some reviews about bad grammar and, I'm sorry about that. I hope this chapter is better.
Title: The Awaking and Some Surprises
Boy: Could it be though, I should get up leave before they.
Kagome: Oh your awake.
Boy: To late.
Kagome: Guy's his awake, so are you feeling better.
Boy: Well to be honest I not even hurt.
Kagome: Oh well then how did you get here, judging from the way your clothed your not from around here?(Oh also for you readers the boy is wearing blue jeans and a black t-shirt with the words just do it and the Nike sigh below it)
Boy: While um... you see (in the boy's head) should I tell Kagome.
Inuyasha: So he is awake.
Kagome: Inuyasha what to you so long to get here.
Inuyasha: Shippo was bothering me and, Miroku was touching Sango again.
Kagome: Oh, where's the other guys.
Inuyasha: Well they where right behind me, they should be here pretty soon.
Shippo: (comes in and looks panicked) Inuasha! Naroku is here and the others need you.
Inuyasha: What! Kagome stay with the boy.
Kagome: Wait! Inuyasha
Boy: (in his head) Well I guess I'd better help them.(runs out of the hut)
Kagome: Wait! Is he crazy he can't do any thing or, can he?
Inuyasha: (is fighting Naroku) Get out of here Naroku.
Naroku: Never (grabs Inuyasha by the neck) I got you now Inuyasha, now die. (Starts choking Inuyasha)
Naroku (gets arm chopped off and not by Inuyasha) What!
Inuyasha: What the?
Boy: Got him now, this was to easy. (Slices the rest of Naroku)
Inuyasha: huh? (Sees a large sword witch is 3/4 the size of Inuyasha's sword disappear in the boy's hand)
Boy: So it was just another puppet.
Kagome: ( run's out of the hut with bow and arrows) Oh, so I guess Inuyasha already took care of it.
Sango: (comes up to Kagome) Kagome it wasn't Inuyasha.
Kagome: Huh? So if wasn't Inuyasha who.
Sango: (points to the boy)
Kagome: How did he take Naroku?
Sango: I don't know lets go ask him.
Kagome: Yeah
(The whole group including Shippo and Miroku go up to the boy)
Inuyasha: Boy what is your name.
Boy: Oh, I guess I never told you, it's Randy.
So how did you like my second chapter. Remember you can give me idea's and tips in your reviews if you want. I hope I get a lot of reviews. Until next time.
