Okay, anyone who is reading this. I have been getting a few reviews that said they 'hate it' so if you think it is bad, I would appreciate one or two constructive comments to help me with my story, I've been told it is unoriginal, so tell me how to make it original. Thats it. I will update when I can pick up a few good ideas. -

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