HELLO MY DEAR READERS, THIS IS MY FIRST FANFIC CALLED DARK ANGEL: 452 OR MAX, IF ANYONE HAS A BETTER NAME PLEASE TELL ME. ADDITIONAL INFORMATION WILL BE ADDED AT ANY TIME. SO I SUGGEST YOU READ THIS IN CASE OF ANY NEW INFORMATIN THAT HAS BEEN ADDED TO MY STORY.
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SUMMARY: ATTHE END OF "AND JESUS BOUGHT A CASSEROLE" OUR FAVORITE SHE-RO X5- 452 OR ALSO KNOWN AS MAX IS CAPTURED. NOT COMPLETEING THE MISSION, THE D.N.A. LAB IS STILL INTACT, AND SHE GETS SHOTS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHEST. ZACK, SYL, KRIT, LOGAN, AND LYDECKER ESCAPED. SHE DIDN'T, THIS IS HER STORY...
CHAPTER: 2
Day after day went by, but to the confined transgenic, it seemed like a lifetime. Thoughts swarmed withinher mind, not giving her a moments peace. Her training from when she was a child, bombarded her consciousness. But some events that should have been there were not. Instead a brick wall stood there, keeping those thoughts from her.
'I never want to go back to psy-ops again. I wonder what I did to get put there in the first place? Why did I fight so hard? I was at thirty-five notches, must have done something really stupid. Anyway, now that I am out I will not be doing that again. I have my orders, and will do my best. I am a soldier, the best soldier. I am a soldier, the best soldier. I am a soldier, the best soldier.' She kept repeating this over and over, as if it was a mantra, forced into her mind.
She was soon snapped out of her thoughts when the darkened door opened. A man stood there. Blond hair and blue eyes. Chizled features that seemed familiar to her somehow.
'I know him from somewhere, but where?'
She did not have time to process this information very succefully as the new man had started to speak.
"ATTENTION!"
She quickly stood up, her legs snapped together, face blank, with her eyes facing toward the wall.
"So," said said the male who seemed to be her new C.O.,"you are the 09er. I am your Commanding Officer, 494. Do you understand."
"Sir, yes, sir!" She shouted.
'Wow, psy-ops sure did a number on her. Of course she deserved it, damn 09er. How the hell am I supposed to be her C.O. damn just look at her...I can't show any weakness though, I sure as hell can't go easy on her. Time for a little test," he thought, while a smirk appeared on his face.
"State your designation."
'She is so going to mess this up, then I will have to report her. Then she won't be my responsibility anymore. Sure that means more psy-ops for her, but she does deserve it...doesn't she?'
"Sir, X5- 452, sir!"
He frowned, with annoyance.
"452, you have been back at Manticore for five months and a week. You put up a hell of a fight, though. Come with me, 452. Your going to meet your new unit."
"Sir, yes, sir!"
'Damn, can she be annoying. I guess Manticore can do anything, better not piss them off anytime soon.'
"Just call me 494."
"Sir, yes, sir. I will call you by your designation. X5- 494 Commanding Officer, sir."
He huft.
They walked out of the cafeteria and into a long hallway. Blue paint was painted onto the walls, and the floor had water splashed allover it. There were two X6's arguing. One was holding a broom whilethe other one had his fist raised. The male stopped to seperate them. But they couln't hear him over their voices. 452, walked in front of 494.
"What do you think your..." started 494, but he never got to finish.
That was all he got out as 452, stood to the side of the two soldiers fighting. She grabbed on of them by the shirt with both hands, and lifted him up, til he was an inch from her face.
"Your superior just spoke to you. I suggest you listen. You have abandened your assignment. By leaving this floor wet, you are disrespecting authority, not only that but someone could have a dangerous accident. Like a trainer, or Director Renfro. You don't want that to happen do you? But maybe that was your plan."
She looked over at her C.O. and said...
"I think this should be reported, X5- 494 Commanding Officer, Sir."
"No, t-t-thats fine," he said a little started at her attitude, "put him down and we will continue."
The two X6's, now really scared by 452, quickly got back to work. As they started walking again, 494, would not stop staring at her.
"Permission to speak, sir."
"Permission granted, 452."
"Why did you not report them. They were disobeying protocal. They should learn that is not a thing they should do, unless they want a visit to psy-ops."
"And what about you?" he asked, "You get back here, after running away. And yougive them a lecture on protocal."
"Sir, why would I want to run away from Manticore."
He kept walking, in stunned silence.
'Psy-ops, really had gotten her good. She has no memory of her escape. How can she not remember? How dare she? All of us were put through because of her. She will regret it. We have ten years of training on her, she will learn her place.'
"We are here, 452."
She walked in, behind him.
A tall looking girl, with dark brown hair, and bright green eyes ran up to him when she saw the C.O. walk in. This proved to be a mistake, as 452 was standing behind him. She saw the offending girl running toward him, so she flipped over his head in front of him, landing and preforming a back side kick to the offending girl, in the stomach. She then dropped to the floor, kicking out her leg, sweeping her feet, and succefully tripping her, and had her foot to her neck, in a matter of seconds. It took a few moments for 494, to relize what had happened. His eyes darkened, and he yelled..."
"452! What is the meaning of this. I should have you reported!"
"Sir, she was trying to attack you, sir."
His face took on a astonished look, then he put his face in his hands.
'She is so going to be a pain in the ass.'
"452, I would like you to meet your Second in Command, X5- 511."
At that, 452 eyes glazed over, moved her foot from her neck and snapped to attention, and yelled out...
"Ma'am, X5- 452, ma'am."
The S.I.C. looked over at 494, for confermation.
"Your bunk is over ther, 452, you are dismissed." Said 494.
"Yes sir, X5- 494 Commanding Officer, sir!" She shouted.
She saluted them both then walked over to her bunk.
The unit looked at her, then back at there C.O and S.I.C., wondering what to do. There superior officers, went over to a corner to talk. The new X5 (452)made her way, to her bunk, and sat down looking at the opposite wall. On the other side of the room, the two X5's were talking about her.
"Whats, wrong with her, 494."
"She was in psy-ops."
"Well so have I, and I have never been that bad."
"She is a 09er. She fought psy-ops."
"But 734, was never that bad, and she was a 09er."
"True, but 452 was on thirty-five notches."
"Damn. Well who is she going to be working with then?"
"I have no idea. I say lets put her on the obstacle course first, and see how bad she is. We do have ten more years of training on her, so she might be a bit sloppy."
"Yeah, your probably right. Lets get going, training starts again in fifeteen minutes.
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REVIEWS: CORA: Thanks for the review, and I do not plan on dropping this story anytime. As to how long she lasted in psy-ops, she is max, and the most wonderful person in the world. It is to bad that she got broken though.
ACB: Thanks for the review. Unfortunaly, at this point in the story she is gone. Don't worry though, she will be back. But before that a lot of training she will be put through. PSY- 489, is in the same unit as Mia was. She got into her mind, and gave her a real mind rape.
Black Rose9: Thanks for the review. I actually thought of daddy Lydecker doing the reindoctrination, but it didn't fit in with the story. But he did have a big part in it. There is going to be a ship in it. Either 494/or 599 it is up to the readers.
IF ANYBODY HAVE ANY IDEAS, OR WRITING THAT THEY WHAT ME TO ADD TELL ME, AND I WILL PROBABLY ADD IT.
