HELLO MY DEAR READERS, THIS IS MY FIRST FANFIC CALLED DARK ANGEL: 452 OR MAX, IF ANYONE HAS A BETTER NAME PLEASE TELL ME. ADDITIONAL INFORMATION WILL BE ADDED AT ANY TIME. SO I SUGGEST YOU READ THIS IN CASE OF ANY NEW INFORMATIN THAT HAS BEEN ADDED TO MY STORY.
NEW INFO: THIS CHAPTER HAS BEEN REVISED.
DISCLAIMER:I DO NOT OWN DARK ANGEL, IF I DID THERE WOULD HAVE BEEN A THIRD SEASON.
SUMMARY: ATTHE END OF "AND JESUS BOUGHT A CASSEROLE" OUR FAVORITE SHE-RO X5- 452 OR ALSO KNOWN AS MAX IS CAPTURED. NOT COMPLETEING THE MISSION, THE D.N.A. LAB IS STILL INTACT, AND SHE GETS SHOTS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHEST. ZACK, SYL, KRIT, LOGAN, AND LYDECKER ESCAPED. SHE DIDN'T, THIS IS HER STORY...
CHAPTER: 3
'So this is my new unit. Looks okay...I guess. Seems as if the Second in Command has no respect for protocal. She needs to be reported. I need to keep low for right now though. Keeping a low profile has nothing to do with doing my best. I am so glad that I decided to take all of those courses, and training classes. I think that they are really going to help out. Good thing that I am no normal X5. I need to be the best, so I can get higher up in status. I am a soldier, the best soldier. I am a soldier, the best soldier.'
She stole a glance at 494 and 511, to see them still talking. As soon as the officers had finished discussng what was to be done with the rogue 09er, X5- 511, called out to the unit.
"Okay guys. We will be working with Trainer McDonald today, for eight hours. Then we will go to the obstacle course, and finally sparing. Lights out out 22:00."
As soon as she was done talking the cell door opened, and they marched out to the courtyard. 452 eyes faced foward, while some memeries tried to force their way back into her mind.
As soon as they were outside they did their warm-ups. Then onto basic fighting and advanced. 452, tired soon enough, and learned some things that she had apparently forgotten. Soon enough they were done with their eight hour training period, and went over to the obstacle course.
SEVEN MONTHS LATER
"452, front and center."
The young transgenic blurred foward, and stopped as she was about to run into him.
"Sir, yes, sir, X5- 494 Commanding Officer, sir!" She shouted.
He shook his head at how he had yet to get her to stop calling him that.
"452, you will do obstacle course 4, as fast as you can."
"Sir, yes, sir X5-494..."
"That is enough, 452, just go do it." He said annoyed.
"Sir, yes, sir!" She shouted.
'This is going to be so easy.' He thought. 'We should all get a good laugh at this.'
As she went over to the obstacle assigned to her. She started the run, jumping up onto the big wooden block, instead of going inside, and climbing it. She then swung on the rope, letting go in mid-air, doing a flip and landing in a crouch. She did more flips, landed in swamps, defeated her eniemes in record time. Her feats amazed her C.O. and S.I.C., as well as the rest of the unit. She was done in record time. She ran back over to her unit.
"Obstacle 4, completed, sir!"
"Good, rest of you, go do obstacle 6."
"452, over here."
"Sir, yes, sir!"
"About time you did something quickly.Fourty minutes and ten seconds. I wonder if it was just a fluke. Anyway...just wait until the rest of the unit is done, then we will go do some sparring."
With that said, he ran along with his unit. Not more than eighty minutes later, did the Second in Command come up. She walked up to her new unit mate.
"452." She said.
The young girl, whose eyes were glazed over, quickly stood at attention, eyes blank and void of emotion, facing forward.
"Ma'am, yes, ma'am."
"You listen to me, you little bitch. I have been in this unit a long ass time. I'll be damned if you think you can show me up. Special Ops are recruiting, and the Directer is looking. During sparring, me and you will have another round, and you will lose again. Is that clear, 452."
'Damn is she annoying. And she is braking protocal, she is in so much trouble. But I guess I can only obey right now. Until I get to a Director that is.'
"Ma'am, yes, ma'am."
"Good, I don't care how you do with the others, but with me you will fall, you are dismissed."
452, saluted her and walked away, sat down, looking at the wall. The rest of the unit soon finished. And started to walk toward the sparring area, leaving 452 there. They were gone a few minutes before, another member of the unit noticed her absence.
"Hey, 494. Where's the 09er."
"Damn, you mind going to get her. Psy-ops really got her bad."
"No problem, man. I'll see you at the sparring arena."
He walked away from his unit to go find the rogue 09er. He found her sitting down, on the cement, staring at the wall. He decided to have a little bit of fun with her. He walked up slowly and yelled..."
"BOO."
This one simple word did not have any fear related reaction. But she did grab his hand, which was in her face, waving up and down, flipping him over her, him landing against the wall then falling on his back. She jumped onto his chest. Fist in his face.
"Hey relax sugah pie, it's just me," he said, while moving his eye brows up and down in a suggestive manner,"494, told me to come get you. We're heading over to the sparring area. But we could stay here if you like. I have no objection to this position."
"It is agains't protocal to have any relations with any transgentic, at any time. I will have to report you. We are late, lets continue."
He slowly nodded, trying to process what she just said,while she got off of him and walked away. He followed her and met her with the rest of the unit.
"Okay, guys. We will be doing sparring today. First on the list is X5- 510 and X5- 452."
The both went onto the mat, and started dancing around each other.
"Hey, 452, scared that I'll hurt you. Don't worry, it won't hurt...much." He taunted at her.
He through a punch to her face. She grabbed his fist, threw it to the side and kicked him in the stomach. Then punched him in the nose. He again, tried for her, with a sweep kick. However, he failed agan, when she used her feline legs, and jumped over him, kicking him on his head. He looked confused for a second. Then with a final move. She blurred to the other side of him, jumping legs first to his head. Her legs opened, caught his neck and threw him across the room. (This is what happened to max in freak nation) He was out cold, and she had not broken a sweat. The match was over. She had won.
'Damn that was easy. They really should learn not tounderestamate me.'
"Sir, X5- 510 is unable to finish the match, sir."
"Good job, 452."
He noticed some one new coming to his unit.
"Trainer on board."
Everybody in the unit legs snapped together at attention. Once he was near enough, he spared no-one.
"I am no trainer. I am Colonel Lydecker. X5-452, front and center." He said in a even, deadly tone.
She blurred forward, faster than she had before,and was about to run into him when she stopped. The unit gave a sigh. With a saluted she gave him a greeting.
"Sir, X5- 332960073452, reporting for duty, sir!" She shouted, her eyes held some fear in them along with a little bit of danger.
494, noticed that her eyes, were blank. And that she was frighted of the man. But not the same, as when she interacted with him. Her back was straighter, and her voice had a dangerous edge to it.
"Nice to have you home, 452. Report, how are things within the unit."
"Sir, I would never presume leave home, without a cleared mission assignment, sir! The unit is poorly run, sir."
The unit gasped and snarled at 452.
"How so, 452."
"They do not call each other by their assigned designations, but rather use slang. Fighting seems to be common, as well as disrespect for protocal. X5- 344 has already made it clear that he wants sexual relations with me, sir. Also, sir, the Commanding Officer has noticed disrespect towards Dirctor Renfro and has not reported it. The Second in Command has ordered a fight between us again, and I am ordered to lose as aaways, sir."
"Is that so 452? That explains why you have been held back then. That will be taken care of.Well, time to see what you are made of. X5- 511 and X5- 452, you will be fighting against each other.452, disregard your Second in Commands orders, go all out."
FOR PICTURES OF ALL OF THE SPECIAL OPS GO TO MY GROUP. IT HAS PICS OF EVERYBODY THAT I HAVE MENTIONED SO FAR AS WELL AS SPECIAL OP. THANK YOU FOR READING THIS CHAPTER. ANYWAY IF ANYONE OUT THERE HAS ANYTHING THAT THEY THINK THAT I SHOULD ADD PLEASE TELL ME OR SEND ME THE PIECE OF WRITING THAT YOU WOULD LIKE ENTERED IN MY STORY AND I WILL GIVE YOU CREDIT. AND REMEMBER TO ALWAYS READ AND REVIEW.
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CORA: Thanks for the review. Zack is going to be in this story, as well as some of the others. For full info on some of the X5's go to x52599 it has some info. She doesn't remember anything right now, but she will.
AND THANK YOU TO SHYGIRL1, IVY, MIDNIGHT-STARR1.
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