HELLO MY DEAR READERS, THIS IS MY FIRST FANFIC CALLED DARK ANGEL: 452 OR MAX, IF ANYONE HAS A BETTER NAME PLEASE TELL ME. IN THIS STORY LYDECKER IS STILL IN CHARGE OF MANTICORE, BUT IS AWAY AT THE MOMENT, HE WILL RETURN THOUGH. ADDITIONAL INFORMATION WILL BE ADDED AT ANY TIME. SO I SUGGEST YOU READ THIS IN CASE OF ANY NEW INFORMATIN THAT HAS BEEN ADDED TO MY STORY.

NEW INFO: FOR FULL INFORMATION ON THE X-5'S GO TO x52599 ON THE FF WEBSITE. AS A YOUNG CHILD, FOR SURVIVAL, MAX TO A NUMBER OF MARTIAL ARTS CLASSES. MORE INFO WILL BE ADDED.

DISCLAIMER:I DO NOT OWN DARK ANGEL, IF I DID THERE WOULD HAVE BEEN A THIRD SEASON.

SUMMARY: ATTHE END OF "AND JESUS BOUGHT A CASSEROLE" OUR FAVORITE SHE-RO X5- 452 OR ALSO KNOWN AS MAX IS CAPTURED. NOT COMPLETEING THE MISSION, THE D.N.A. LAB IS STILL INTACT, AND SHE GETS SHOTS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHEST. ZACK, SYL, KRIT, LOGAN, AND LYDECKER ESCAPED. SHE DIDN'T, THIS IS HER STORY...

CHAPTER: 4

'I can't believe it. I just can't. The same D.N.A. in her is in me. If that doesn't make her my mom, I don't know what does. They say that we are just soldiers, that we have no family,that we are expendable, but I know now that I am better than that. I AM HER CHILD. I will find her...one day.'


"Sir, Second in Command 511 orders are discontinued, sir!" Shouted 452.

"I'll have no problem with this trash, Sir."

"We will see about that, 511."

452, stepped into the ring and 511 meeting her in the middle.

"Your going down, you piece of shit." She said to her quietly.

"Lei bie bou mou." (Sorry just finished watching Charilies Angeles Full Throttle, it means "Bring it on bitch)

This seemed to anger the S.I.C. even more then she was.

"Go to hell, you reject."

452 nodded at her but stayed quiet. They circled each other for a few seconds. 452 noticed that 511's legs muscles were flexing. This was indication that the fight was about to begin.

'Giving her moves away, and starting the fight with a kick, not good. She is sogoing down.'

511 tried to kick her her in her side, near the ribcage, using a blur technique, that they learned after the 09' escape. But 452, blocked and kept hold of her leg, and aimed a quick punch to her inner thigh. While still holding on to her leg, she swung the leg while her body followed down onto the mat.

Once the fallen X5, stood back up again, she pounced again at 452. This time aiming for her stomach. 452 jumped to the side, and kicked out to the side, ramming her lower leg into 511s stomach. Then knocked her on the side of her head. Grabbing one of 511s arms she swung her around kicking in the stomach once again. Doubling over, giving 452 the chance to do a back-kick into her face. She was down on the ground. Face up.

"Did I say to stop, soldier."

"Sir, no, sir."

"Then continue."

"Understood, sir."

She put her hands on her body and preformed a cart-wheel over her S.I.C. pulling her up, tucking her legs under her body pushed her into the air, and kicked her on the decend. She fell to the ground, her body limp. 452 finally aimed a fist to the face, and broke her nose.

"Thats is enough. Good job 452. 511 you disappoint me. X5- 624, take her to the infermery."

As the black girl, carried her S.I.C. away, Lydecker turned to the rest of the unit.

"ATTENTION."

The sound of boots slamming together was heard. He stared at each and every one of them.

"What happened to 511 was a lesson to all of you. Never understimate you advisery. 452," he suddenly turned to her, "that was a excellent display of combat, but that type of defense is not learned here. Where did you learn them?"

"Sir, when my C.O. ordered us on the misson, he told us to learn all we can. So I went to different martial art studios, and I learned their ways of combat in case I ever got captured by the enemy, sir."

"Very good, 452. You are dismissed. 494, stay behind."

As they all saluted the Colonel, they walked back to their cell. 494, stayed behind, still in attention, facing forward.

"494, are you impressed with your Second in Command? I am not. Her preformance, is not at all like I expected. You all have had ten years of training on her. She took her out in three minutes. This is not good, not good at all. If she could take on the S.I.C., what makes you think that she can not take out the rest of you. If you and your unit do not improve, then I will have to have to take more serious measures."

"Permission to speak sir."

"Permission denied. Three minutes was all it took. If it was combat situation was would have happened, 494."

"She would be dead, sir."

"That is right. As it happens, she is not. But she did get her ass handed to her by a damn 09er. That does not sit well with me 494, not at all. Once she is healed she will report to solitary confinement for three days. Your unit will be trained harder. Is that understood, 494."

"Sir, yes, sir!" He shouted.

He was beginning to understand, why 452 was so scared of this guy.

"I believe you had a something to say, 494."

"Sir, 511 is the oldest and the best fighter in the unit, besides me. Why should one battle matter. Sir." He added as an after-thought.

He glared at him, and 494 gulped.

"Well then, 494, you just earned you whole unit a lot more practise then. If you are so sure of your ability then you will go up against 452,during asparring session. You will need to replace your Second in Command, with someone who knows how to fight. You are dismissed."

He saluted him, and walked of.

'Damn, no wonder 452 is scared of him. I have to pick a new S.I.C. How the hell can I do that 511's the best, besides me. Or should I say was the best. This doesn't give me much of a choice. I mean who else am I supposed to pick.'

As he entered the cell he looked around. Most of them were sitting on a bed, playing a game, or chatting away.

"Hey, everybody," he yelled.

Nobody heard him. He looked around, and saw that 452, was on her feet at attention.

"Hey guys," he tried again.

Nothing happened this time either.

'Oh well,' he thought, 'might as well take a leaf out of her book.'

"ATTENTION."

Now he had gotten their attention.

"Okay, everybody, relax. I just got done talking with Colonel. He said that we all will be in extra training. Of course I tried to persuade him not too. But now that I see that you all have no respect for a C.O I agree with him."

"Dude, what are you talking about," said 510.

494 glared in his direction.

"That is sir, 510. We will be following protocol for now on. 452 is right. We have been slacking, and it will not be happening any more. And I came in here calling for attention twice. The third time you heard me. This happens again, and someone might report you. Now that this is cleared up. We all saw how 511 underestimated her opponent, because of this Lydecker has called for a new Second in Command."

Their was a shout of outrage, at this remark.

"Quiet, soldiers. It is no fault but hers. Your new Second in Command is...

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